Academic Vocabulary in Learner Writing: From Extraction to Analysis 9781474211697, 9781441130365

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Acknowledgements

There are several people without whom this book would never have been written. First and foremost, I want to express my deepest and most sincere gratitude to my PhD supervisor, Professor Sylviane Granger, for her infectious enthusiasm, her intellectual perceptiveness and her unfailing expert guidance. I am greatly indebted to you, Sylviane, for giving me the opportunity to join the renowned Centre for English Corpus Linguistics seven years ago now! I have been lucky enough to undertake research in an environment where writing a PhD also means collaborating with many fellow researchers on up-and-coming projects, attending thoughtprovoking conferences, organizing seminars, conferences and summer schools, as well as lecturing and offering guidance to undergraduate students. I am also very grateful to my colleagues and friends at the Centre for English Corpus Linguistics - Céline, Claire, Fanny, Gaëtanelle, Jennifer, Marie-Aude, Suzanne and Sylvie – for making the Centre for English Corpus Linguistics such an inspiring and intellectually stimulating research centre. I also wish to thank them for their moral and intellectual support and for all the entertaining lunchtimes we spent together talking about everyday life . . . and work. I am indebted to a great number of colleagues not only for supplying me with corpora, corpus-handling tools and references, but also for providing helpful comments on earlier versions and stimulating ideas for my research. I would like to thank Yves Bestgen, Liesbet Degand, Jean Heiderscheidt, Sebastian Hoffmann, Scott Jarvis, Jean-René Klein, Fanny Meunier, Hilary Nesi, John Osborne and JoAnne Neff van Aertselaer. I am also grateful to an anonymous reviewer for recommendations on the first draft of the text. I gratefully acknowledge the support of both the Communauté française de Belgique, which funded my doctoral dissertation out of which this book has grown, and the Belgian National Fund for Scientific Research (F.N.R.S).

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On a more personal note, I would like to express my deepest thanks to my parents and friends for everything they have done to help me while I was working on this book. And last, but not least, Arnaud: thank you for making it all worthwhile. Magali Paquot Louvain-la-Neuve November, 2009

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List of abbreviations

AKL AWL BAWE BNC B-BNC BNC-AC BNC-AC-HUM BNC-SP CALL CECL CIA CLAWS CODIF EAP EFL ESL ESP GSL ICLE ICLEv2 IL L1 L2 LDOCE4

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Academic Keyword List (my own list) Academic Word List (Coxhead, 2000) British Academic Written English (BAWE) Pilot Corpus British National Corpus Baby BNC Academic Corpus British National Corpus – academic sub-corpus British National Corpus – academic sub-corpus (discipline: humanities and arts) British National Corpus – spoken sub-corpus Computer-assisted language learning Centre for English Corpus Linguistics, Université catholique de Louvain Contrastive Interlanguage Analysis Constituent Likelihood Automatic Word-tagging system Corpus de Dissertations Françaises English for academic purposes English as a foreign language English as a second language English for specific purposes General Service List (West, 1953) International Corpus of Learner English (Granger et al., 2002) International Corpus of Learner English (version 2) (Granger et al., 2009) interlanguage First language Foreign language Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English (4th edition)

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LOCNESS LogL MC MED2 MLD NS NNS pmw POS SLA UCREL WST4

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List of abbreviations Louvain Corpus of Native Speaker Essays Log-likelihood statistical test Micro-Concord Corpus Collection B Macmillan English Dictionary for Advanced Learners (second edition) Monolingual learners’ dictionary Native speaker Non-native speaker Per million words Part-of-speech Second language acquisition University Centre for Computer Corpus Research on Language, Lancaster University WordSmith Tools (version 4)

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List of figures

Figure 1.1: The relationship between academic and sub-technical vocabulary Figure 2.1: A three-layered sieve to extract potential academic words Figure 2.2: WordSmith Tools – WordList option Figure 2.3: Distribution of the words example and law in the 15 sub-corpora Figure 2.4: WordSmith Tools Detailed Consistency Analysis Figure 2.5: Distribution of the noun ‘solution’ Figure 3.1: ICLE task and learner variables (Granger et al., 2002: 13) Figure 3.2: Contrastive Interlanguage Analysis (Granger 1996a) Figure 3.3: BNCweb Collocations option Figure 4.1: Exemplification in the BNC-AC-HUM Figure 4.2: The distribution of the adverb ‘notably’ across genres Figure 4.3: The distribution of ‘by way of illustration’ across genres Figure 4.4: The distribution of ‘to name but a few’ across genres Figure 4.5: The distribution of the verbs ‘illustrate’ and ‘exemplify’ across genres Figure 4.6: The phraseology of rhetorical functions in academic prose Figure 5.1: Exemplifiers in the ICLE and the BNC-AC-HUM Figure 5.2: The use of the prepositions ‘like’ and ‘such as’ in different genres Figure 5.3: The use of the adverb ‘notably’ in different genres

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Figure 5.4: Distribution of the adverbials ‘for example’ and ‘for instance’ across genres in the BNC Figure 5.5: The treatment of ‘namely’ on websites devoted to English connectors Figure 5.6: The use of ‘despite’ and ‘in spite of’ in different genres Figure 5.7: The frequency of speech-like lexical items in expert academic writing, learner writing and speech (based on Gilquin and Paquot, 2008) Figure 5.8: Phraseological cascades with ‘in conclusion’ and learner-specific equivalent sequences Figure 5.9: Collocational overlap Figure 5.10: A possible rationale for the use of ‘according to me’ in French learners’ interlanguage Figure 5.11: A possible rationale for the use of ‘let us in French learners’ interlanguage Figure 5.12: Features of novice writing - Frequency in expert academic writing, native-speaker and EFL novices’ writing and native speech (per million words of running text) Figure 6.1: Connectives: contrast and concession ( Jordan 1999:136) Figure 6.2: Comparing and contrasting: using nouns such as ‘resemblance’ and ‘similarity’ (Gilquin et al., 2007b: IW5) Figure 6.3: Reformulation: Explaining and defining: using ‘i.e.’, ‘that is’ and ‘that is to say’ (Gilquin et al., 2007b: IW9) Figure 6.4: Expressing cause and effect: ‘Be careful’ note on ‘so’ (Gilquin et al., 2007b: IW13)

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Table 1.1: Table 1.2: Table 1.3: Table 2.1: Table 2.2: Table 2.3: Table 2.4: Table 2.5: Table 2.6: Table 2.7: Table 2.8: Table 2.9: Table 2.10: Table 2.11: Table 2.12: Table 2.13: Table 2.14: Table 2.15: Table 2.16: Table 2.17: Table 2.18:

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Composition of the Academic Corpus (Coxhead 2000: 220) Chung and Nation’s (2003: 105) rating scale for finding technical terms, as applied to the field of anatomy Word families in the AWL The corpora of professional academic writing The re-categorization of data from the professional corpus into knowledge domains The corpora of student academic writing Examples of essay topics in the BAWE pilot corpus An example of CLAWS vertical output CLAWS horizontal output [lemma + POS] CLAWS horizontal output [lemma + simplified POS tags] Simplification of CLAWS POS-tags CLAWS tagging of the complex preposition ‘in terms of’ Semantic fields of the UCREL Semantic Analysis System USAS vertical output USAS horizontal output The fiction corpus Number of keywords Automatic semantic analysis of potential academic words Distribution of grammatical categories in the Academic Keyword List The Academic Keyword List The distribution of AKL words in the GSL and the AWL

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Table 3.1: Table 3.2:

Table 4.1: Table 4.2: Table 4.3: Table 4.4: Table 4.5: Table 4.6: Table 4.7: Table 4.8: Table 4.9: Table 4.10: Table 4.11: Table 4.12: Table 4.13: Table 4.13a: Table 4.13b: Table 4.13c: Table 4.13d: Table 4.13e: Table 4.13f: Table 4.14: Table 4.14a: Table 4.14b: Table 4.14c: Table 4.14d:

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List of tables Breakdown of ICLE essays BNC Index – Breakdown of written BNC genres (Lee 2001) Ways of expressing exemplification found in the BNC-AC-HUM The use of ‘for example’ and ‘for instance’ in the BNC-AC-HUM The use of ‘example’ and ‘for example’ in the BNC-AC-HUM Significant verb co-occurrents of the noun ‘example’ in the BNC-AC-HUM Adjective co-occurrents of the noun ‘example’ in the BNC-AC-HUM The use of the lemma ‘illustrate’ in the BNC-AC-HUM The use of the lemma ‘exemplify’ in the BNC-AC-HUM The use of imperatives in academic writing (based on Siepmann, 2005: 119) Ways of expressing a concession in the BNC-AC-HUM Ways of reformulating, paraphrasing and clarifying in the BNC-AC-HUM Ways of expressing cause and effect in the BNC-AC-HUM Ways of comparing and contrasting found in the BNC-AC-HUM Co-occurrents of nouns expressing cause or effect in the BNC-AC-HUM reason implication effect outcome result consequence Co-occurrents of verbs expressing possibility and certainty in the BNC-AC-HUM suggest prove appear tend

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A comparison of exemplifiers based on the total number of running words A comparison of exemplifiers based on the total number of exemplifiers used Two methods of comparing the use of exemplifiers Significant adjective co-occurrents of the noun ‘example’ in the ICLE Adjectives co-occurrents of the noun ‘example’ in ICLE not found in the BNC Significant verb co-occurrents of the noun ‘example’ in the ICLE Verb co-occurrent types of the noun ‘example’ in ICLE not found in BNC The distribution of ‘example’ and ‘be’ in the ICLE and the BNC-AC-HUM The distribution of ‘there + BE + example’ in ICLE and the BNC-AC-HUM The distribution of AKL words in the ICLE Examples of AKL words which are overused and underused in the ICLE Two ways of comparing the use of cause and effect markers in the ICLE and the BNC The over- and underuse by EFL learners of specific devices to express cause and effect (based on Appendix 1) The over- and underuse by EFL learners of specific devices to express comparison and contrast (based on Appendix 2) Speech-like overused lexical items per rhetorical function The frequency of ‘maybe’ in learner corpora The frequency of ‘I think’ in learner corpora Examples of overused and underused clusters with AKL words Clusters of words including AKL verbs which are over- and underused in learners’ writing, by comparison with expert academic writing Examples of overused clusters in learner writing Verb co-occurrents of the noun conclusion in the ICLE

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List of tables Adjective co-occurrents of the noun conclusion in the ICLE The frequency of sentence-initial position of connectors in the BNC-AC-HUM and the ICLE Sentence-final position of connectors in the ICLE and the BNC-AC-HUM Jarvis’s (2000) three effects of potential L1 influence Jarvis’s (2000) unified framework applied to the ICLE-FR A comparison of the use of the English verb ‘illustrate’ and the French verb ‘illustrer’ ‘let us’ in learner texts The transfer of frequency of the first person plural imperative between French and English writing Le Robert & Collins CD-Rom (2003–2004): Essay writing

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Introduction

That English has become the major international language for research and publication is beyond dispute. As a result, university students need to have good receptive command of English if they want to have access to the literature pertaining to their discipline. As a large number of them are also required to write academic texts (e.g. essays, reports, MA dissertations, PhD theses, etc.), they also need to have a productive knowledge of academic language. As noted by Biber, ‘students who are beginning university studies face a bewildering range of obstacles and adjustments, and many of these difficulties involve learning to use language in new ways’ (2006: 1). Several studies have shown that the distinctive, highly routinized, nature of academic prose is problematic for many novice native-speaker writers (e.g. Cortes, 2002), but poses an even greater challenge to students for whom English is a second (e.g. Hinkel, 2002) or foreign language (e.g. Gilquin et al., 2007b). Studies in second language writing have established that learning to write second-language (L2) academic prose requires an advanced linguistic competence, without which learners simply do not have the range of lexical and grammatical skills required for academic writing (Jordan, 1997; Nation and Waring, 1997; Hinkel, 2002; 2004; Reynolds, 2005). A questionnaire survey of almost 5,000 undergraduates showed that students from all 26 departments at the Hong Kong Polytechnic University experienced difficulties with the writing skills necessary for studying content subjects through the medium of English (Evans and Green, 2006). Almost 50 per cent of the students reported that they encountered difficulties in using appropriate academic style, expressing ideas in correct English and linking sentences smoothly. Mastering the subtleties of academic prose is, however, not only a problem for novice writers. International refereed journal articles are regarded as the most important vehicle for publishing research findings and non-native academics who want to publish their work in those top journals often find their articles rejected, partly because of language problems.

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These problems include the fact that they have less facility of expression and a poorer vocabulary; they find it difficult to ‘hedge’ appropriately and the structure of their texts may be influenced by their first language (see Flowerdew, 1999). Because it causes major difficulties to students and scholars alike, academic discourse has become a major object of study in applied linguistics. Flowerdew (2002) identified four major research paradigms for investigating academic discourse, namely (Swalesian) genre analysis, contrastive rhetoric, ethnographic approaches and corpus-based analysis. While the first three approaches to English for Academic Purposes (EAP) emphasize the situational or cultural context of academic discourse, corpus-linguistic methods focus more on the co-text of selected lexical items in academic texts. Corpus linguistics is concerned with the collection in electronic format and the analysis of large amounts of naturally occurring spoken or written data ‘selected according to external criteria to represent, as far as possible, a language or language variety as a source of linguistic research’ (Sinclair, 2005: 16). Computer corpora are analysed with the help of software packages such as WordSmith Tools 4 (Scott, 2004), which includes a number of text-handling tools to support quantitative and qualitative textual data analysis. Wordlists give information on the frequency and distribution of the vocabulary – single words but also word sequences – used in one or more corpora. Wordlists for two corpora can be compared automatically so as to highlight the vocabulary that is particularly salient in a given corpus, i.e., its keywords. Concordances are used to analyse the co-text of a linguistic feature, in other words its linguistic environment in terms of preferred co-occurrences and grammatical structures. The research paradigm of corpus linguistics is ideally suited for studying the linguistic features of academic discourse as it can highlight which words, phrases or structures are most typical of the genre and how they are generally used. Corpus-based studies have already shed light on a number of distinctive linguistic features of academic discourse as compared with other genres. Biber’s (1988) study of variation across speech and writing has shown that academic texts typically have an informational and non-narrative focus; they require highly explicit, text-internal reference and deal with abstract, conceptual or technical subject matter (Biber, 1988: 121–60). The Longman Grammar of Spoken and Written English (Biber et al., 1999) provides a comprehensive description of the range of distinctive grammatical and lexical features of academic prose, compared to conversation, fiction and newspaper reportage. Common features of this genre include a high rate of

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occurrence of nouns, nominalizations, noun phrases with modifiers, attributive adjectives, derived adjectives, activity verbs, verbs with inanimate subjects, agentless passive structures and linking adverbials. By contrast, first and second person pronouns, private verbs, that-deletions and contractions occur very rarely in academic texts. In addition, studies of vocabulary have emphasized the importance of a ‘sub-technical’ or ‘academic’ vocabulary alongside core words and technical terms in academic discourse (Nation, 2001: 187–216). Hinkel (2002: 257–65) argues that the exclusive use of a process-writing approach, the relative absence of direct and focused grammar instruction, and the lack of academic vocabulary development contribute to a situation in which nonnative students are simply not prepared to write academic texts. She provides a list of priorities in curriculum design and writes that, among the top priorities, ‘NNSs [non-native students] need to learn more contextualized and advanced academic vocabulary, as well as idioms and collocations to develop a substantial lexical arsenal to improve their writing in English’ (Hinkel, 2002: 247). The Academic Word List (Coxhead, 2000) was compiled on the basis of corpus data to meet the specific vocabulary needs of students in higher education settings. But what is ‘academic vocabulary’? Despite its widespread use, the term has been used in various ways to refer to different (but often overlapping) vocabulary categories. This book aims to provide a better description of the notion of ‘academic vocabulary’. It takes the reader full circle, from the extraction of potential academic words through their linguistic analysis in expert and learner corpus data, to the pedagogical implications that can be drawn from the results. Recent corpus-based studies have emphasized the specificity of different academic disciplines and genres. As a result, researchers such as Hyland and Tse (2007) question the widely held assumption that students need a common core vocabulary for academic study. They argue that the different disciplinary literacies undermine the usefulness of such lists and recommend that lecturers help students develop a discipline-based lexical repertoire. This book is an attempt to resolve the tension between the particularizing trend which advocates the teaching of a more restricted, discipline-based vocabulary syllabus, and the generalizing trend which recognizes the existence of a common core ‘academic vocabulary’ that can be taught to a large number of learners in many disciplines. I first argue that, to resolve this tension, the concept of ‘academic vocabulary’ must be revisited. I demonstrate, on the basis of corpus data, that, as well as discipline-specific vocabulary, there is a wide range of words and phraseological patterns that

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are used to refer to activities which are characteristic of academic discourse, and more generally, of scientific knowledge, or to perform important discourse-organizing or rhetorical functions in academic writing. A large proportion of this lexical repertoire consists of core vocabulary, a category which has so far been largely neglected in EAP courses but which is usually not fully mastered by English as a foreign language (EFL) learners, even those at the high-intermediate or advanced levels. I make use of Granger’s (1996a) Contrastive Interlanguage Analysis to test the working hypothesis that upper-intermediate to advanced EFL learners, irrespective of their mother tongue background, share a number of linguistic features that characterize their use of academic vocabulary. The learner corpus used is the first edition of the International Corpus of Learner English (ICLE), which is among the largest non-commercial learner corpora in existence. It contains texts written by learners with different mother tongue backgrounds. Ten ICLE sub-corpora representing different mother tongue backgrounds (Czech, Dutch, Finnish, French, German, Italian, Polish, Russian, Spanish, Swedish) are compared with a subset of the academic component of the British National Corpus (texts written by specialists in the Humanities) to identify ways in which learners’ use of academic vocabulary differs from that of more expert writers. A comparison of the ten subcorpora then makes it possible to identify linguistic features that are shared by learners from a wide range of mother tongue backgrounds, and therefore possibly developmental. The EFL learners are all learning how to write in a foreign language, and they are often novice writers in their mother tongue as well. However, not all learner specific-features can be attributed to developmental factors. The comparison of several ICLE sub-corpora helps to pinpoint a number of patterns that are characteristic of learners who share the same first language, and which may therefore be transfer-related. I made use of Jarvis’s (2000) unified framework to investigate the potential influence of the first language on French learners’ use of academic vocabulary in English. The book is organized in three sections. The first scrutinizes the concept of ‘academic vocabulary’, reviewing the many definitions of the term and arguing that, for productive purposes, academic vocabulary is more usefully defined as a set of options to refer to those activities that characterize academic work, organize scientific discourse, and build the rhetoric of academic texts. It then proposes a data-driven procedure based on the criteria of keyness, range, and evenness of distribution, to select academic words that could be part of a common core academic vocabulary syllabus.

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The resulting list, called the Academic Keyword List (AKL), comprises a set of 930 potential academic words. One important feature of the methodology is that, unlike Coxhead’s (2000) Academic Word List, the AKL includes the 2,000 most frequent words of English, thus making it possible to appreciate the paramount importance of core English words in academic prose. The AKL is used in Section 2 to explore the importance of academic vocabulary in expert writing and to analyse EFL learners’ use of lexical devices that perform rhetorical or organizational functions in academic writing. This section offers a thorough analysis of these lexical devices as they appear in the International Corpus of Learner English, describing the factors that account for learners’ difficulties in academic writing. These factors include a limited lexical repertoire, lack of register awareness, infelicitous word combinations, semantic misuse, sentence-initial positioning of adverbs and transfer effects. The final section briefly comments on the pedagogical implications of these results, summarizes the major findings, and points the way forward to further research in the area.

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Chapter 1

What is academic vocabulary?

Academic vocabulary is in fashion, as witnessed by the increasing number of textbooks on the topic. Recent titles include Essential Academic Vocabulary: Mastering the Complete Academic Word List (Huntley, 2006) and Academic Vocabulary in Use (McCarthy and O’Dell, 2008). But what is academic vocabulary? The term often refers to a set of lexical items that are not core words but which are relatively frequent in academic texts. Examples of academic words include adult, chemical, colleague, consist, contrast, equivalent, likewise, parallel, transport and volunteer (cf. Coxhead, 2000). Unlike technical terms, they appear in a large proportion of academic texts, regardless of the discipline. Academic vocabulary is also sometimes used as a synonym for subtechnical vocabulary (e.g. mouse, bug, nuclear, solution) or discourse-organizing vocabulary (e.g. cause, compare, differ, feature, hypothetical, and identify). In this chapter, I set out to review the many definitions of academic vocabulary that have been given and to clear up the confusion between academic words, core words, technical terms, sub-technical words and discourseorganizing words. I will show why a definition of academic vocabulary that excludes the top 2,000 words of English is not very useful for productive purposes in higher education settings and argue for a function-based definition of the term. The very existence of academic words has recently been challenged by several researchers in English for Specific Purposes (ESP) who advocate that teachers help students develop a more restricted, discipline-specific lexical repertoire. I will round off this chapter by situating the book in ongoing debates over generality vs. disciplinary specificity in teaching vocabulary for academic purposes.

1.1. Academic vocabulary vs. core vocabulary and technical terms Numerous second language acquisition studies have investigated whether there is a threshold which marks the point at which vocabulary knowledge

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becomes sufficient for adequate reading comprehension. Laufer (1989; 1992) has shown that at least 95 per cent coverage is needed to ensure reasonable comprehension of a text. To achieve this coverage, it is commonly believed that students in higher education settings need to master three lists of vocabulary: a core vocabulary of 2,000 high-frequency words, plus some academic words, and technical terms. Some researchers, however, do not agree that vocabulary categories can be described as if they were clearly separable. In this section, the notions of core vocabulary, academic vocabulary and technical terms are described and illustrated. The criticisms levelled at the division of vocabulary into mutually exclusive lists are then reviewed. 1.1.1. Core vocabulary A core (or basic or nuclear) vocabulary consists of words that are of high frequency in most uses of the language. It comprises the most useful function words (e.g. a, about, be, by, do, he, I, some and to) and content words like bag, lesson, person, put and suggest. Stubbs describes nuclear words as an essential common core of ‘pragmatically neutral words’ (1986: 104) and lists five main reasons for their pragmatic neutrality: 1. Nuclear words have a ‘purely conceptual, cognitive, logical or propositional meaning, with no necessary attitudinal, emotional or evaluative connotations’ (ibid.). 2. They have no cultural or geographical associations. 3. They give no indication of the field of discourse from which a text is taken, i.e. its domain of experience and social settings. 4. They are also neutral with respect to tenor and mode of discourse: they are not restricted to formal or informal usage or to a specific medium of communication, e.g. written or spoken language. 5. They are used in preference to non-nuclear words in summarizing tasks. The best-known list of core words is West’s (1953) General Service List of English Words (GSL),1 which was created from a five-million word corpus of written English and contains around 2,000 word families. Percentage figures are given for different word meanings and parts of speech of each headword. In a variety of studies, the GSL provided coverage of up to 92 per cent of fiction texts (e.g. Hirsh and Nation, 1992), and up to 76 per cent of academic texts (Coxhead, 2000). Next to frequency and coverage, other

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criteria such as learning ease, necessity and style were also used in making the selection (West 1953: ix–x). West also wanted the list to include words that are often used in the classroom or that would be useful for understanding definitions of vocabulary outside the list. The GSL has had a wide influence for many years and served as a resource for writing graded readers and other material. A number of criticisms have, however, been levelled at the GSL, most particularly at its coverage and age. Engels (1968) criticized the low coverage of the second 1,000 word families. While the first 1,000 word families covered between 68 and 74 per cent of the words in the ten texts of 1,000 running words he analysed, the second set of word families in the GSL provided coverage of less than 10 per cent. In addition, because of changes in the English language and culture, the GSL includes many words that are considered to be of limited utility today (e.g. crown, coal, ornament and vessel) but does not contain very common words such as computer, astronaut and television (see Nation and Hwang, 1995: 35–6; Leech et al., 2001: ix–x; Carter, 1998: 207). However, several researchers have pointed out that, for educational purposes, it still remains the best of the available lists because of ‘its information on frequency of each word’s various meanings, and West’s careful application of criteria other than frequency and range’ (Nation and Waring 1997:13). 1.1.2. Academic vocabulary A number of academic word lists have been compiled to meet the specific vocabulary needs of students in higher education settings (e.g. Campion and Elley, 1971; Praninskas, 1972; Lynn, 1973; Ghadessy, 1979; Xue and Nation, 1984). The Academic Word List (Coxhead, 2000) is the most widely used today in language teaching, testing and the development of pedagogical material. It is now included in vocabulary textbooks (e.g. Schmitt and Schmitt, 2005; Huntley, 2006), vocabulary tests (e.g. Schmitt et al., 2001), computer-assisted language learning (CALL) materials, and dictionaries (e.g. Major, 2006). The Academic Word List (AWL) was created from a corpus of 414 academic texts by more than 400 authors and totals around 3.5 million words. The Academic Corpus includes journal articles, chapters from university textbooks and laboratory manuals. It is divided into four sub-corpora of approximately 875,000 words representing broad academic disciplines: arts, commerce, law and science. Each sub-corpus is further subdivided into seven subject areas as shown in Table 1.1.

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Academic Vocabulary in Learner Writing Composition of the Academic Corpus (Coxhead 2000: 220) Running words

Texts

Subject areas

Arts

883,214

122

education; history; psychology; politics; psychology; sociology

Commerce

879,547

107

accounting; economics; finance; industrial relations; management; marketing; public policy

Law

874,723

72

constitutional law; criminal law; family law and medico-legal; international law; pure commercial law; quasi-commercial law; rights and remedies

Science

875,846

113

biology; chemistry; computer science; geography; geology; mathematics; physics

3,513,330

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Like the General Service List, the Academic Word List is made up of word families. Each family consists of a headword and its closely related affixed forms according to Level 6 of Bauer and Nation’s (1993) scale, which includes all the inflections and the most frequent and productive derivational affixes. For example, the words presumably, presume, presumed, presumes, presuming, presumption, presumptions and presumptuous are all members of the same family. Coxhead (2000) selected word families to be included in the AWL on the basis of three criteria: 1. Specialized occurrence: a word family could not be in the first 2,000 most frequent words of English as listed in West’s (1953) General Service List. 2. Range: a word family had to occur in all four academic disciplines with a frequency of at least 10 in each sub-corpus and in 15 or more of the 28 subject areas. 3. Frequency: a word family had to occur at least 100 times in the Academic Corpus. The resulting list consists of 570 word families and covers at least 8.5 per cent of the running words in academic texts. By contrast, it accounts for a very small percentage of words in other types of texts such as novels, suggesting that the AWL’s word families are closely associated with academic writing (Coxhead, 2000: 225). It is divided into 10 sublists ordered according to decreasing word-family frequency. Some of the most frequent word families included in Sublist 1 are headed by the word forms analyse, benefit, context, environment, formula, issue, labour, research, significant and

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vary. Examples of the least frequent word families in Sublist 10 are assemble, colleague, depress, enormous, likewise, persist and undergo. Academic words are likely to be problematic for native as well as nonnative students as a large proportion of them are Graeco-Latin in origin and refer to abstract ideas and processes, thus introducing additional propositional density to a text (cf. Corson, 1997). Scarcella and Zimmerman (2005: 127) have also shown that mastery of derivative forms makes academic words particularly difficult for foreign language learners who often fail to analyse the different parts of complex words.

1.1.3. Technical terms Domain-specific or technical terms are words whose meaning requires scientific knowledge. They are typically characterized by semantic specialization, resistance to semantic change and absence of exact synonyms (cf. Mudraya, 2006: 238–9). As explained by Nation (2001: 203), some practitioners consider that it is not the English teacher’s job to teach technical terms. These words are best learned through the study of the body of knowledge that they are attached to. Language teachers are not specialists in chemistry, computer science, law or economics and may have a great deal of difficulty with technical words. By contrast, learners who specialize in the field may have little difficulty in understanding these words (Strevens, 1973: 228). Since technical terms are highly subject-specific, it is possible to identify them on the basis of their frequencies of occurrence, range and distribution (see Section 2.3) and to use them as a way of characterizing text types (Yang, 1986). Technical terms occur with very high or at least moderate frequency within a very limited range of texts (Nation and Hwang, 1995). In biology, for example, we find words such as alleles, genotype, chromatid, cytoplasm and abiotic. These words are very unlikely to occur in texts from other disciplines or subject areas. Technical vocabulary is difficult to quantify. According to Coxhead and Nation (2001), technical dictionaries contain probably 1,000 headwords or less per subject area. Research suggests that knowledge of domain-specific or technical terms allows learners to understand an additional 5 per cent of academic texts in a specific discipline.

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(cf. Yang, 1986; Mudraya, 2006; Beheydt, 2005). As Nation and Hwang remark, ‘any division is based on an arbitrary decision on what numbers represent high, moderate or low frequency, or wide or narrow range, because vocabulary frequency, coverage and range figures for any text or group of texts occur along a continuum’ (1995: 37). Chung and Nation (2003) investigate what kinds of words make up technical vocabulary in anatomy and applied linguistics texts. They classify technical terms on a four-level scale designed to measure the strength of the relationship of a word to a particular specialized field. Results for vocabulary in anatomy texts are given in Table 1.2. Chung and Nation consider items at Steps 3 and 4 to be technical terms, but not items at Steps 1 and 2. A large proportion of technical words belong to the 2,000 most frequent word families of English as given in the GSL or to the AWL. In the anatomy texts, 16.3 per cent of the word types at Step 3 are from the GSL or AWL (e.g. cage, chest, neck, shoulder). This increases to 50.5 per cent in the applied linguistics texts (e.g. acquisition, input, interaction, meaning, review). A major result of this study is that a word can only be described as general service, academic or technical in context. Table 1.2 Chung and Nation’s (2003: 105) rating scale for finding technical terms, as applied to the field of anatomy Step 1 Words such as function words that have a meaning that has no particular relationship with the field of anatomy, that is, words independent of the subject matter. Examples are: the, is, between, it, by, adjacent, amounts, common, commonly, directly, constantly, early and especially Step 2 Words that have a meaning that is minimally related to the field of anatomy in that they describe the positions, movements, or features of the body. Examples are: superior, part, forms, pairs, structures, surrounds, supports, associated, lodges, protects. Step 3 Words that have a meaning that is closely related to the field of anatomy. They refer to parts, structures and functions of the body, such as the regions of the body and systems of the body. Such words are also used in general language. The words may have some restrictions of usage depending on the subject field. Examples are: chest, trunk, neck, abdomen, ribs, breast, cage, cavity, shoulder, skin, muscles, wall, heart, lungs, organs, liver, bony, abdominal, breathing. Words in this category may be technical terms in a specific field like anatomy and yet may occur with the same meaning in other fields where they are not technical terms. Step 4 Words that have a specific meaning to the field of anatomy and are not likely to be used in general language. They refer to structures and functions of the body. These words have clear restrictions of usage depending on the subject field. Examples are: thorax, sternum, costal, vertebrae, pectoral, fascia, trachea, mammary, periosteum, hematopoietic, pectoralis, viscera, intervertebral, demifacets, pedicle.

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Similarly, it has been shown that the GSL contains words that appear with particularly high range and frequency in academic texts (e.g. example, reason, argument, result, use, find, show) (cf. Martínez et al., 2009: 192). These words may be used differently in academic discourse. For example, Partington (1998: 98) has shown that a claim in academic or argumentative texts is not the same as in news reporting or a legal report. On the other hand, the AWL includes words that are extremely common outside academia (e.g. adult, drama, sex, tape) (Paquot, 2007a). Hanciog˘lu et al. argue that ‘the assumption that any high frequency word outside the GSL coverage in the academic corpus would be a de facto academic item perhaps accounts for the distinctly “un-academic” texture of some of the items on the list’ (Hanciog˘lu et al., 2008: 462). They also comment that the fact that ‘items such as study appear in the GSL (but not in the AWL) and items such as drama in the AWL (but not in the GSL), suggests that the division of vocabulary into mutually exclusive lists is likely to be an activity that for all its initial convenience may prove inherently problematic in the long run’ (ibid.: 463). Originating from research on vocabulary needs for reading comprehension and text coverage, the division between core words and academic words is very practical for assessing text difficulty and targeting words that are worthy of explanation when reading an academic text in the classroom. Most English for Academic Purposes (EAP) students recognize core words but are not familiar with the meaning of academic words such as amend, concept, implement, normalize, panel, policy, principle and rationalize, which are not very common in everyday English. These words are, however, relatively frequent in academic texts and students will most probably encounter them quite often while reading. They should therefore be the focus of an academic reading course. The division of vocabulary into three mutually exclusive lists becomes problematic, however, when it is transposed to academic writing courses and the need arises to distinguish between knowing a word for receptive and productive purposes. As early as 1937, West argued that ‘both as regards Selection and still more as regards detailed Itemization, there is a need of a divorce between receptive and productive work’ (West, 1937: 437) and regretted that teachers were giving composite lessons aiming at teaching reading and speaking simultaneously, whereas reading and speaking are the Hare and the Tortoise. Reading and speech bear the same relation to each other as musical appreciation and actual execution on the piano. The one is Recognition of a lot; the other is Skill in using a little. (ibid.)

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Learning vocabulary for productive purposes has been found to be much more difficult than learning for receptive uses. Knowing a word productively involves, for example, being able to pronounce and/or spell it correctly, produce it to express the intended meaning in the appropriate context, and use it with words that commonly occur with it (Nation, 2001: 27–8). Selection is thus a key issue in teaching vocabulary for academic writing and speaking. It is questionable whether all the words from the AWL should be the focus of productive learning. And yet this strategy lies at the heart of several recent textbooks (e.g. Schmitt and Schmitt, 2005; Huntley, 2006) and CALL materials (see, e.g., Gillett’s website about vocabulary in EAP < http://www.uefap.com/vocab/vocfram.htm>; Luton’s Exercises for the Academic Word List < http://www.academicvocabularyexercises.com> and Haywood’s AWL Gapmaker < L2

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(see also Granger, 2009: 20). Lakshmanan and Selinker (2001) address the issue of the comparative fallacy and warn against the danger of ‘judging language learner speech utterances as ungrammatical from the standpoint of the target grammar without first having compared the relevant interlanguage utterances with the related speech utterances in adult native-speaker spoken discourse’ (Lakshmanan and Selinker, 2001: 401). Although they do not dwell on it, Lakshmanan and Selinker’s point may be understood as a plea for more natural language data (i.e. corpus data) and a warning against hasty conclusions based on a single researcher’s intuitions. Another criticism of L1/L2 comparisons is directed at the idea of the ‘native speaker’ as the target norm (e.g. Piller, 2001; Tan, 2005). Mukherjee, however, argues that ‘nativeness’ remains a useful construct both for linguistics and for the ELT community, a ‘useful myth’ in Davies’s (2003) terms. He proposes a usage-based definition of the native speaker based on three aspects that he regards as central to native-like performance, i.e. lexico-grammaticality, acceptability and idiomaticity (see Pawley and Syder, 1983): The term ‘native speaker’ should be used for an abstraction of all language users (1) who have good intuitions about what is lexicogrammatically possible in a given language and speak/write accordingly, (2) who know to a large extent what is acceptable in a given communication situation and speak/write accordingly, (3) whose usage is largely idiomatic in terms of linguistic routines commonly used in a given speech community. If we refer to an individual speaker as a native speaker, this speaker is thus taken to exemplify the abstract native speaker model on grounds of his/her language use. (Mukherjee, 2005: 14) Mukherjee advocates a corpus-approximation to the native speaker norm and argues that corpus data can be used to describe this norm by ‘generalizing and abstracting from a vast amount of representative performance data’ (ibid: 15). In this book, the corpus-approximation to the native speaker norm is based on British and American English corpora. It should be noted, however, that the existence of a variety of norms is recognized in learner corpus research (see Granger, 2009) and that other varieties of English are sometimes used as control corpora. For example, Gilquin and Granger (2008) compared the Tswana component of the second edition of the International Corpus of Learner English to a corpus of South African English editorials. The control corpora used in this study are described below.

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3.3. A comparison of learner vs. expert writing Carrying out L1/L2 comparisons implies choosing an L1 corpus to be used as some kind of ‘norm’ with which the learner corpus data can be compared. In this study, learner writing was compared to expert academic prose. There is no general agreement, however, on the type of material that is best suited to serve as a control for a learner corpus. Several researchers have criticized the use of professional writing in learner corpus research, arguing that it is ‘both unfair and descriptively inadequate’ (Lorenz, 1999a: 14) and taking a stand against the ‘unrealistic standard of “expert writer” models’ (Hyland and Milton, 1997: 184). Native student writing is arguably a better source of comparable data to EFL learner writing if the aim of the comparison is to describe and evaluate interlanguage(s) as fairly as possible. It is, however, doubtful whether the findings from such comparisons could make their way into the classroom. As Leech puts it, ‘native-speaking students do not necessarily provide models that everyone would want to imitate’ (Leech, 1998: xix). For example, native students have been shown to produce more dangling participles than EFL learners (Granger, 1997) and different types of spelling mistakes (Cutting, 2000). The question of the norm is best addressed by considering the aim of the comparison. Professional writing has a major role to play in learner corpus research if instruction and pedagogical applications are the goals of the comparison between learner and native-speaker productions. As Ädel put it, On the one hand, it can be argued that in order to evaluate foreign learner writing by students justly, we need to use native-speaker writing that is also produced by students for comparison. On the other hand, it can also be argued that professional writing represents the norm that advanced foreign learner writers try to reach and their teachers try to promote. In this respect, a useful corpus for comparison is one which offers a collection of what Bazerman (1994: 131) calls ‘expert performances’. (Ädel, 2006: 206–7) The International Corpus of Learner English, however, consists of argumentative texts and ‘argumentative essay writing has no exact equivalent in professional writing’ (De Cock, 2003: 196). It has been suggested that the ICLE might be compared with ‘a corpus of newspaper editorials, a text type which combines the advantages of being argumentative in nature and written by professionals’ (Granger, 1998a: 18, footnote 10). In a number of

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studies based on ICLE texts produced by Spanish EFL learners, Neff and her colleagues used both native-speaker student writing and newspaper editorials as control corpora (Neff et al., 2004a; 2004b; Neff van Aertselaer, 2008). General corpora have also been used in learner corpus research. Nesselhauf (2005), for example, made use of the written part of the British National Corpus to determine the degree of acceptability of verb-noun combinations that had been extracted from the German subset of ICLE. The British National Corpus (BNC) was created to be a balanced reference corpus of late twentieth century British English. The BNC contains both written and spoken material. The written component totals about 90 million words and includes samples of academic books, newspaper articles, popular fiction, letters, university essays and many other text types. The text selection procedure has been described as follows: In selecting texts for inclusion in the corpus, account was taken of both production, by sampling a wide variety of distinct types of material, and reception, by selecting instances of those types which have a wide distribution. Thus, having chosen to sample such things as popular novels, or technical writing, best-seller lists and library circulation statistics were consulted to select particular examples of them. (Aston and Burnard, 1998: 28) The BNC mark-up conforms to the Text Encoding Initiative (TEI) recommendations (Burnard, 2007). Mark-ups include rich metadata on a variety of structural properties of texts (e.g. headings, sentences and paragraphs), file description, text profile, as well as linguistic information (morphosyntactic tags, lemmas, etc.). Three criteria were originally used to select written texts to design a balanced corpus: domain, time and medium. Domain refers to the subject field of the texts; time refers to the period when the text was written, and medium refers to the type of publication (books, newspapers, periodicals, etc.). Lee (2001) criticized the domain categories for being overly broad and not sufficiently explicit, and developed a new resource called the BNC Index which contains genre labels for all BNC texts. Table 3.2 gives the breakdown of the genre categories in the BNC written corpus and shows that genre labels are often hierarchically nested. Thus, if we want to analyse texts produced by scholars specializing in natural sciences, we can select all BNC texts classified under ‘W_ac_nat_science’. On the other hand, if we are not interested in discipline-specific differences and want to examine

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BNC written

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W_ac_humanities_arts W_ac_medicine W_ac_nat_science W_ac_polit_law_edu W_ac_soc_science W_ac_tech_engin W_admin W_advert W_biography W_commerce W_email W_essay_sch W_essay_univ W_fict_drama W_fict_poetry W_fict_prose W_hansard W_institut_doc W_instructional W_letters_personal W_letters_prof W_misc W_news_script W_news_brdsht_nat_arts W_news_brdsht_nat_commerce W_news_brdsht_nat_editorial W_news_brdsht_nat_misc W_news_brdsht_nat_reportage W_news_brdsht_nat_science W_news_brdsht_nat_social W_news_brdsht_nat_sports W_news_other_arts W_news_other_commerce W_news_other_report W_news_other_science W_news_other_social W_news_other_sports W_news_tabloid W_non_ac_humanities_arts W_non_ac_medicine W_non_ac_nat_science W_non_ac_polit_law_edu W_non_ac_soc_science W_non_ac_tech_engin W_pop_lore W_religion

3,321,867 1,421,933 1,111,840 4,640,346 4,247,592 686,004 219,946 558,133 3,528,564 3,759,366 213,045 146,530 65,388 45,757 222,451 15,926,677 1,156,171 546,261 436,892 52,480 66,031 9,140,957 1,292,156 351,811 424,895 101,742 1,032,943 663,355 65,293 81,895 297,737 239,258 415,396 2,717,444 54,829 1,143,024 1,027,843 728,413 3,751,865 498,679 2,508,256 4,477,831 4,187,649 1,209,796 7,376,391 1,121,632

3.8% 1.6% 1.3% 5.3% 4.9% 0.8% 0.3% 0.6% 4.0% 4.3% 0.2% 0.2% 0.1% 0.1% 0.3% 18.2% 1.3% 0.6% 0.5% 0.1% 0.1% 10.5% 1.5% 0.4% 0.5% 0.1% 1.2% 0.8% 0.1% 0.1% 0.3% 0.3% 0.5% 3.1% 0.1% 1.3% 1.2% 0.8% 4.3% 0.6% 2.9% 5.1% 4.8% 1.4% 8.5% 1.3%

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Academic prose 17.7%

Unpublished essays 0.3% Fiction 18.6%

Letters 0.2%

News 7.8%

Non-academic prose 19.1%

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texts produced by professional writers in higher education settings, we can select all texts whose categorizing labels begin with ‘W_ac’. The BNC sub-corpus of academic prose in humanities and arts (W_ac_humanities_arts; henceforth BNC-AC-HUM) totals 3,321,867 words. It was used as the comparison corpus to ICLE in this study. This sub-corpus was chosen for two main reasons. First, ICLE texts were produced by students of humanities; texts in the BNC-AC-HUM are arguably quite close to the type of text these students might have come across in their first few years at university. They also have the advantage of corresponding to the type of writing that learners will try to produce during their university studies. There are, however, major differences between the two corpora. First, ICLE is a corpus of unpublished university student essays while BNCAC-HUM consists of samples of published articles and books. Second, student essays rarely total more than 1,000 words while samples in the BNCAC-HUM are much longer (from 25,000 to 45,000 words).4 Third, the topics in BNC-AC-HUM differ from those in ICLE (described in Section 3.1 above). They include The people’s peace; National liberation; The morality of freedom; Europe in the central middle ages; China’s students; British literature since 1945; What is this thing called science?; Soviet relations with Latin America; Nietzsche on tragedy, etc. Unlike the ICLE, topics in BNC-AC-HUM appear only once. Interpreting the results in the light of genre analysis thus required special care: differences between student essays and expert writing may simply reflect differences in their communicative goals and settings (Neff et al., 2004a). The W_fic and W_news sub-corpora (cf. Table 3.2) were sometimes used to compare the frequency of words and phrases across ‘super genres’. The spoken part of the British National Corpus was also regularly consulted to check whether words and word sequences that were found in learner writing are more typical of speech or academic writing. The BNC spoken corpus (BNC-SP) consists of 10,334,947 words and includes a wide variety of spoken registers, among others, broadcast documentaries and news, interviews and lectures. The British National Corpus was accessed via the BNCweb (CQP-edition) interface developed by Stefan Evert and Sebastian Hoffmann. This web interface is the result of a ‘marriage of two corpus tools’ (Hoffmann and Evert, 2006), i.e. the BNCweb, a web-based client developed at the University of Zurich which allows users to access the BNC by means of a Web browser (see Lehmann et al., 2000) and the Corpus Query Processor (CQP), a central component of IMS Open Corpus Workbench, which ‘allows sophisticated searches both for individual words (which can be matched against regular

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expressions) and for lexico-grammatical patterns (using linear grammars that have access to all levels of annotation)’ (Hoffmann and Evert, 2006: 180). The CQP edition of the BNCweb combines the strengths of both software packages while overcoming their limitations. It is a marriage between the efficiency and flexibility of CQP queries, and the user-friendliness of BNCweb with its wide range of query options and display facilities. Hoffmann et al. (2008) proved further information on the British National Corpus and the BNCweb interface. One tool that is particularly useful is Collocations, which picks out significant co-occurrents of the search word on the basis of a number of measures of association. Association measures are the most widely used method of distinguishing between casual and significant co-occurrences. They compute an association score for each pair of words extracted from a corpus, which indicates the strength of the association relative to that expected by chance. Users of the BNCweb can decide to use any of five different measures: mutual information, MI3, z-score, log-likelihood and log-log measures.5 They can also sort co-occurrents by decreasing frequency. A number of other settings are customizable, e.g. maximum window span, minimum frequency of the co-occurrence, minimum frequency of the co-occurrent, inclusion of lemma and part-of-speech information, etc. Figure 3.3 displays a collocation query result. Significant co-occurrents are sorted by decreasing log-likelihood values (right column). The frequency of the co-occurrence is given together with the number of texts in which it appears. Mutual information, MI3, z-score, log-likelihood and log-log measures rank co-occurrences in very different ways (Evert, 2004). McEnery et al. (2006) compared the various statistical measures provided by BNCweb and reported that ‘MI and z-scores tend to put too much emphasis on infrequent words. In contrast, the log-likelihood, log-log and MI3 tests appear to provide more realistic collocation information’ (McEnery et al., 2006: 220). The log-likelihood test was therefore used to study the phraseology of academic words in expert and learner writing. The log-likelihood scores can be directly compared with critical values of a chi-square distribution table (see Oakes, 1998: 176). Rayson et al. (2004), however, focused on the comparison of word frequencies between corpora and suggested that, in order to extend applicability of the frequency comparisons to low expected values, use of a threshold value of 15.13 is preferred at p < 0.01. Co-occurrence frequencies can be quite low and I therefore followed Rayson et al.’s (2004) suggestion. Co-occurrences were analysed in windows of one to three words to both the left (3L-1L) and the right (1R-3R).

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Log-likelihood measures are strongly dependent on corpus size and word frequencies. Co-occurrence statistics are therefore not comparable across corpora of different sizes such as the British National Corpus and the International Corpus of Learner English. The ICLE sub-corpora are in fact too small for a statistical analysis of co-occurrences to be meaningful. Academic words are not high-frequency words such as make, do and take and co-occurrences often appear less than three times. In his study of the statistics of word co-occurrences, Evert argued that ‘data with co-occurrence frequency f < 3, i.e. the hapax and dis-legomena, should always be excluded from the statistical analysis’ (Evert, 2004: 133) as expected frequencies and p values for low frequency words are distorted in unpredictable ways. A distributional (Evert, 2004) or frequency-based approach (Nesselhauf, 2004) was adopted to examine the phraseology of academic words in learner writing. Word pairs in the ICLE sub-corpora were classified into three groups according to their co-occurrence status in professional academic writing: – word pairs that are statistically significant co-occurrents in the academic sub-corpus of the BNC (BNC-AC). In a pilot study, I found that learners’ word pairs were sometimes not statistically significant in BNC-AC-HUM just because the co-occurrence was not frequent enough. As soon as more data was used, the co-occurrence proved significant. I therefore decided to use the larger BNC-AC instead of the BNC-AC-HUM to judge the acceptability and typicality of EFL learners’ phraseological sequences (see Section 5.2.3). – word pairs that appear in the BNC-AC but are not statistically significant co-occurrents; – word pairs that do not appear in the BNC-AC; Word pairs that did not appear in the BNC-AC were presented to a native speaker of English for acceptability judgments.

3.4. Summary and conclusion This chapter has described the data and methodology used to investigate the use of academic vocabulary in writing by EFL learners. Special care has been taken to select a set of learner essays from the International Corpus of Learner English that is as homogeneous as possible and to control for a number of variables that have been found to influence such writing.

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The learner corpus can be compared to the humanities and arts academic sub-corpus of the British National Corpus to identify learner-specific features of the use of academic vocabulary. The BNC spoken corpus can also sometimes be useful to check whether specific words and phrases that appear in the learner sub-corpora are more typical of speech or writing. The method used to investigate learners’ use of academic vocabulary is based on Contrastive Interlanguage Analysis (CIA) and combines comparisons of learner and native-speaker writing, and comparisons of different learner interlanguages. CIA is very popular among researchers in the field of learner corpus research and has helped to highlight an unprecedented number of features that characterize learner interlanguages. To date, however, most studies have used the technique only to compare a learner corpus and a native reference corpus, rather than to explore different learner corpora in the same target language. The studies that have compared more than one interlanguage have usually focused on learners from one mother-tongue background, and used data from one or two other learner populations only to check whether the features they have identified are L1-specific (and thus possibly transfer-related) or are shared by other learners. L2/L2 comparisons involving many different first languages are, however, indispensable if we want to identify the distinguishing features of learner language at a given stage of development (Bartning, 1997). In the following chapters, I try to make the most of CIA by comparing academic vocabulary in ten learner corpora representing different mother-tongue backgrounds.

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Rhetorical functions in expert academic writing

This chapter deals with academic vocabulary that serves specific rhetorical and organizational functions in expert academic writing. Section 4.1 focuses on the Academic Keyword List and shows that a high proportion of AKL words can fulfil these functions in academic prose. It lists several steps which are necessary to turn the AKL into a tool that can be used for curriculum and materials design (most notably a phraseological analysis of AKL words). Section 4.2 presents a detailed analysis of exemplificatory devices in academic writing. This serves as an illustration of the type of data and results obtained when the whole range of lexical strategies available to expert writers to organize scientific discourse are examined. For lack of space it is impossible to describe in similar detail all the functions that were analysed in the BNC-AC-HUM so as to provide a basis for comparison to EFL learner writing. Section 4.3 briefly comments on the types of lexical devices used by expert writers to serve four additional functions: ‘expressing cause and effect’, ‘comparing and contrasting’, ‘expressing a concession’ and ‘reformulating: paraphrasing and clarifying’ and aims to characterize the phraseology of rhetorical functions in academic prose.

4.1. The Academic Keyword List and rhetorical functions The functional syllabus has a long tradition in English language teaching (see Wilkins, 1976; Weissberg and Buker, 1978). Jordan (1997: 165) reports that most of the textbooks that were published in Britain in the 1980s and 1990s that followed a product approach to academic writing were organized according to language functions such as explanation, definition, exemplification, classification, cause and effect, and comparison and contrast (e.g. Jordan, 1999). However, they were rarely based on principled

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selection criteria, relying instead on the writers’ perceptions of good practice in academic writing. Unlike textbooks adopting a functional approach, courses which use vocabulary as the unit of progression, introduce new words according to principles such as frequency and range of occurrence. Nation explains that such courses generally combine a “series” and a “field” approach to selection and sequencing. In a series approach, the items in a course are ordered according to a principle such as frequency of occurrence, complexity or communicative need. In a field approach, a group of items is chosen and the course covers them in any order that is convenient, eventually checking that all the items are adequately covered. Courses which use vocabulary as the unit of progression tend to break vocabulary lists into manageable fields, (. . . ), according to frequency, which are then covered in an opportunistic way. (Nation, 2001: 386) Most pedagogical applications of Coxhead’s (2000) Academic Word List to date have adopted this particular approach, using the frequency-based AWL sub-lists as fields (e.g. Obenda, 2004; Huntley, 2006). There is a need for teaching materials that merge the two types of syllabus design, thus adopting a ‘functional-product’ approach (Jordan, 1997: 165) to academic writing while introducing new vocabulary according to principled criteria such as frequency and range of occurrence. This is precisely where the Academic Keyword List has a role to play. As explained in Section 2.4, the Academic Keyword List requires pedagogic mediation: it is a platform which can inform a functional syllabus for academic writing, but it needs to be organized. As argued by Martinez et al. (2009: 193), ‘a list based on semantic and pragmatic criteria would perhaps be more useful than lists built solely on frequency criteria.’ Sinclair, however, warns us that ‘there is no assumption that meaning attaches only to the word’ (Sinclair, 2004b: 160). Similarly, Siepmann (2005: 86) comments that ‘neat compartmentalizing of meanings or functions can do no more than partially capture a complex reality’ in which any word or multi-word sequence may express more than one discourse relation. This being said, the results of the automatic semantic analysis of the Academic Keyword List revealed that a significant proportion of AKL words fall into semantic categories that correspond to the rhetorical functions typical of scientific discourse, e.g. A2.2. Affect: Cause – connected, A4. Classification, A5. Evaluation, A6. Comparing, Q2.2. Speech acts (see Section 2.4). A close

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examination of the words classified into these semantic categories made it possible to identify twelve rhetorical functions that dovetail with the functions typically treated in EAP textbooks adopting a functional approach to academic writing: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12.

Exemplification, e.g. example, for example, illustrate Cause and effect, e.g. cause, consequence, result Comparison and contrast, e.g. contrast, difference, same Concession, e.g. although, despite, however Adding information, e.g. first, further, in addition to Expressing personal opinion, e.g. appropriate, essential, major Expressing possibility and certainty, e.g. likely, possibility, unlikely Introducing topics and ideas, e.g. discuss, examine, subject Listing items, e.g. first, second, third Reformulating – paraphrasing and clarifying, e.g. namely Quoting and reporting, e.g. define, report, suggest Summarizing and drawing conclusions, e.g. conclude, conclusion, summary.

The next step is to analyse all words that may serve one of these twelve functions in context, with special emphasis on their phraseology. Multiword sequences have been shown to provide ‘basic building blocks for constructing spoken and written discourse’ (Biber and Conrad, 1999: 185) and to correlate closely with the complex communicative demands of a particular genre, thus contributing to its lexical profile (Biber et al, 1999; 2004; Luzón Marco, 2000). A phraseological analysis will also make it possible to investigate how academic vocabulary contributes to this ‘shared scientific voice or “phraseological accent” which leads much technical writing to polarise around a number of stock phrases’ (Gledhill, 2000: 204). It will examine phrasemes, i.e. syntagmatic relations between at least two lemmas, contiguous or not, written separately or together, which are typically syntactically closely related and constitute ‘“preferred” ways of saying things’ (Altenberg, 1998: 122). This is because such phrasemes: – form a functional (referential, textual or communicative) unit (e.g. Burger, 1998); and – display arbitrary lexical restrictions (e.g. Mel’cˇuk, 1998);

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and/or – are characterized by a certain degree of semantic non-compositionality (e.g. Barkema, 1996); – display arbitrary restrictions on the word forms that can be used to instantiate at least one of the lemmas involved; – display a certain degree of syntactic fixity. The phraseological analysis used here is based on Granger and Paquot’s (2008a) classification of phraseological units into three main categories: referential phrasemes, textual phrasemes and communicative phrasemes. Referential phrasemes are used to convey a content message: they refer to objects, phenomena or real-life facts. They include lexical and grammatical collocations, idioms, similes, irreversible bi- and trinomials, compounds and phrasal verbs. Textual phrasemes are typically used to structure and organize the content (i.e. referential information) of a text or any type of discourse; they include grammaticalized sequences such as complex prepositions and complex conjunctions, linking adverbials and textual sentence stems. Communicative phrasemes are used to express feelings or beliefs towards a propositional content or to explicitly address interlocutors, either to focus their attention, include them as discourse participants or influence them. They include speech act formulae, attitudinal formulae, commonplaces, proverbs and slogans. In this chapter and the next, I focus on the vocabulary of five rhetorical functions — exemplification, cause and effect, comparison and contrast, concession, and reformulating — with occasional forays into other functions. Apart from being essential rhetorical functions in academic prose, these functions should be among the least sensitive to the text type differences discussed in Section 3.3. The use of academic words is compared in the BNC-AC-HUM corpus (a corpus of book samples and journal articles written by experts in the fields of arts and humanities) and the International Corpus of Learner English (a corpus of short argumentative essays produced by EFL learners of English). As the BNC includes truncated texts, it would not be reasonable to quantitatively compare the words that are used to serve the function of ‘summarizing and drawing conclusions’. This function is typically localized in the last paragraphs of a piece of academic writing and might thus be absent from a number of BNC texts. Nor is it reasonable to focus on functions such as ‘reporting and quoting’ and ‘expressing personal opinion’. Unlike experts writing in their field, the

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learners who produced the argumentative essays were not supposed to show that they were familiar with the subject by referring to or quoting from the literature. By contrast, they were explicitly encouraged to give their personal opinions (topics for the essays include: ‘Some people say that in our modern world, dominated by science, technology and industrialism, there is no longer a place for dreaming and imagination. What is your opinion?’ and ‘In the 19th century, Victor Hugo said: “How sad it is to think that nature is calling out but humanity refuses to pay heed.” Do you think it is still true nowadays?’) (see Section 3.1). Several researchers in applied corpus linguistics have examined language features in general reference corpora and compared the distributions and patterns found in actual language use with the presentations of the same features in teaching materials such as textbooks or grammars (e.g. Carter, 1998b; Conrad, 2004; Römer, 2004a; 2004b; 2005). They have often found considerable mismatches between naturally-occurring language and the type of language that is presented as a model in teaching materials (Römer, 2008: 4). I therefore consulted several EAP textbooks (Harris Leonhard, 2002; Jordan, 1999; Lonon Blanton, 2001; Oshima and Hogue, 2006; Ruetten, 2003; Zemach and Rumisek, 2005; Zwier, 2002), and listed all the lexical items that are commonly taught to serve rhetorical functions. The textbooks-derived list appeared to be very different from the words found in the Academic Keyword List. For example, the AKL includes a number of words and phrasemes that are commonly used as exemplifiers: the wordlike units for example and for instance, the noun example, the verbs illustrate and exemplify, the preposition such as, the adverb notably and the abbreviation e.g. Other lexical items listed in EAP materials but not found in the AKL are the expressions by way of illustration and to name but a few, the nouns illustration and a case in point and the preposition like. I decided to include the lexical items found in EAP textbooks in my study of academic vocabulary for two main reasons. First, it is not quite clear why these items are taught to novice writers and EFL learners while other much more frequent lexical items that are used to express the same rhetorial functions are missing. Frequency, however, may not be the sole criterion to include lexical items in the curriculum (see Section 1.1.1). Some of these non-AKL words may be used in very specific lexico-grammatical environments, have a very restricted meaning or prove particularly difficult for learners. It is only by examining their frequency and patterns of use in expert and learner corpora that I shall be able to assess whether these words and phrasemes should be part of an academic vocabulary and added to the AKL.

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Second, their inclusion in the description of a specific function in academic writing allows us to approximate as closely as possible what Hoffmann (2004: 190) referred to as ‘conceptual frequency’, so that the frequency of each exemplificatory lexical item can be calculated as a proportion of the total number of exemplifiers. As Wray stated in her book on formulaic language, To capture the extent to which a word string is the preferred way of expressing a given idea (for this is at the heart of how prefabrication is claimed to affect the selection of a message form), we need to know not only how often that form can be found in the sample, but also how often it could have occurred. In other words, we need a way to calculate the occurrences of a particular message form as a proportion of the total number of attempts to express that message. (Wray, 2002: 30) This approach should help us move towards ‘understanding the intersection of form and function’ (Swales, 2002: 163) in academic prose. The Academic Keyword List is based on native corpora only, which has limitations for an analysis of learner writing, especially if conceptual frequency is to be investigated. EFL learners may use different lexical devices than native writers to serve rhetorical functions. For example, they repeatedly use word-like units such as in a nutshell, in brief and all in all for summarizing and concluding, which are quite rare in academic prose. A keyword procedure such as that described in Section 2.3.1 for the automatic extraction of potential academic words was therefore adopted to identify words and word sequences that EFL learners frequently use, but which are not favoured by expert academic writers. The ICLE corpus was compared to the BNC-AC-HUM to extract distinctive words in the learner corpus. The resulting list was analysed to identify words that might serve one of the 12 rhetorical functions listed above. In learner corpus research, positive keywords are often referred to as overused words and negative keywords are said to be underused. These two terms are neutral, and simply reflect the fact that a word is more/less frequent in learner writing. Examples of overused words which do not belong to the AKL but are employed to serve rhetorical functions in learner writing include like, thing, say, let, I, really, firstly, secondly, thirdly, opinion, maybe, say, sure, but, thanks, always, so and why (see De Cock, 2003 for a keyword analysis of the French sub-corpus of ICLE). Learner-specific word sequences are discussed in Section 5.2.3.

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The final lists of words that may be used to serve one of the five selected rhetorical functions are given below. The words in italics are not part of the Academic Keyword List. They were identified on the basis of a close examination of EAP materials and a keyword analysis of learner corpora. They are included in the corpus-based analyses presented in this chapter and in Chapter 5 to assess the adequacy of the treatment of rhetorical functions in EAP textbooks and investigate whether the AKL should be supplemented with additional academic words. Exemplification: example, illustration, a case in point, illustrate, exemplify, such as, like, for example, for instance, e.g., notably, to name but a few, by way of illustration Comparison and contrast: analogy, comparison, (the) contrary, contrast, difference, differentiation, distinction, distinctiveness, (the) opposite, parallel, parallelism, resemblance, (the) reverse, (the) same, similarity, alike, analogous, common, comparable, contrary, contrasting, different, differing, distinct, distinctive, distinguishable, identical, opposite, parallel, reverse, same, similar, unlike, compare, contrast, correspond, differ, distinguish, differentiate, look like, parallel, resemble, analogously, by/in comparison, by/in contrast, by way of contrast, comparatively, contrariwise, contrastingly, conversely, correspondingly, differently, distinctively, identically, in the same way, likewise, on the contrary, on the other hand, *on the other side, *on the opposite, parallely, reversely, similarly, as against, as opposed to, by/in comparison with, contrary to, *in contrary to, like, in contrast to/with, in parallel with, unlike, versus, as, whereas, while, as … as, compared with/to, in the same way as/that Cause and effect: cause (n.), consequence, effect, factor, implication, origin, outcome, root, reason, result, source, arise from/out of, bring about, cause (v.), contribute to, derive, emerge, follow from, generate, give rise to, induce, lead, make sb/sth do sth, prompt, provoke, result in/from, stem from, trigger, yield, consequent, responsible, as a result of, as a consequence of, because of, due to, in consequence of, in (the) light of, in view of, on account of, on the grounds that, owing to, thanks to, accordingly, as a consequence, as a result, by implication, consequently, hence, in consequence, so, thereby, therefore, thus, as, because, for, on the grounds that, since, so that, is why Concession: however, nevertheless, nonetheless, though (adv.), yet, although, though (conj.), even though, even if, albeit, despite, in spite of, notwithstanding Reformulating – paraphrasing and clarifying: i.e., that is, that is to say, in other words, namely, viz., or more precisely, or more accurately, or rather

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4.2. The function of exemplication This section presents a detailed analysis of the academic words that are used by expert writers to serve the rhetorical function of exemplification. Siepmann (2005) showed that exemplificatory discourse markers occur in all kinds of discursive prose, and are particularly frequent in humanities texts. He argued, however, that as an object of study, ‘exemplification continues to be the poor relation of other rhetorical devices’ and that ‘such neglect has led to a commonly held view in both the linguistic and the pedagogic literature that exemplification is a minor textual operation, subordinate to major discoursal stratagems such as “inferring” and “proving”’ (Siepmann, 2005: 111). Coltier (1988) remarked that examples and exemplification merit close investigation at two levels: the exemplificatory strategies adopted (i.e. when and why are examples introduced into a text); and the wording of the example (i.e. the choice of exemplifiers). This section deals with the latter and focuses on the lexical items used by expert writers to give an example. For a rhetorical perspective on exemplifiers in native writing, see Siepmann (2005: 112–18). The Academic Keyword List (AKL) includes a number of words and multiword sequences that are commonly used as exemplificatory discourse markers: the mono-lexemic or word-like units for example and for instance, the noun example, the verbs illustrate and exemplify, the preposition such as, the adverb notably and the abbreviation e.g. Other lexical items commonly listed in textbooks and EAP/EFL materials, but not found in the AKL, are the expressions by way of illustration and to name but a few, the nouns illustration and a case in point and the preposition like. Table 4.1 gives the absolute frequencies of these words in the BNC-AC-HUM as well as their relative frequencies per 100,000 words and the percentage of exemplificatory discourse markers they represent. In Figure 4.1, the lexical items are ordered by decreasing relative frequency in the academic corpus. The most frequent exemplifiers in professional academic writing are the mono-lexemic phrasemes such as and for example, plus the noun example, which occur more than 35 times per 100,000 words. Almost half of the exemplifiers — for instance, like, illustrate, e.g. and notably — occur with a relative frequency of between 5 and 20 occurrences per 100,000 words. The verb exemplify and the noun illustration are less frequent (around 2.3 occurrences per 100,000 words) while the adverbials to name but a few and by way of illustration as well as the noun case in point appear very rarely in the BNC-AC-HUM. I will now discuss my main findings on the exemplificatory functions of prepositions, adverbs and adverbial phrases, and then focus on the exemplificatory use of nouns and verbs.

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Table 4.1 Ways of expressing exemplification found in the BNC-AC-HUM Abs. freq.

%

Rel. freq.

1285 77 18 1380

21.6 1.3 0.3 23.2

38.7 2.3 0.5 41.5

259 79 338

4.4 1.3 5.7

7.8 2.4 10.2

1494 532 2026

25.0 8.9 34.0

45.0 16.0 61.0

for example for instance e.g. notably to name but a few by way of illustration TOTAL ADVERBS

1263 609 259 77 4 3 2215

21.2 10.2 4.3 1.3 0.1 0.1 37.2

38.0 18.3 7.8 2.3 0.1 0.1 66.7

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5959

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4.2.1. Using prepositions, adverbs and adverbial phrases to exemplify As shown in Figure 4.1, the complex preposition such as is the most frequent exemplifier in the BNC-AC-HUM (see Example 4.1). Unlike in other genres (such as speech and fiction), it is much more frequent than the preposition like in professional academic writing (Example 4.2). 4.1. This is the arrangement in Holland whereby various institutions such as media, schools, cultural organisations, welfare services, and hospitals are duplicated, and run by the separate catholic and protestant communities. 4.2. Surrealist painting had publicity value, especially when executed by a showman like Salvador Dali, who married the former wife of the poet Paul Éluard. Similarly, for example is twice as frequent as for instance. These two adverbials are commonly classified as ‘code glosses’ in metadiscourse theory (see Section 1.3) as they are used to ‘supply additional information, by rephrasing, explaining, or elaborating what has been said, to ensure the reader is able to recover the writer’s intended meaning’ (Hyland, 2005: 52). Code glosses are ‘interactive resources’ in Hyland’s typology of metadiscourse: they are features used to ‘organize propositional information in ways that a projected target audience is likely to find coherent and convincing’ (ibid, 50). In a phraseological approach to academic vocabulary, they fall into the category of textual phrasemes as they are mono-lexemic multi-word units, i.e. multi-word units that are equivalent to single words and which fill only one grammatical slot, with an organizational – exemplificatory – function. In the BNC-AC-HUM, for example and for instance are typically used within the sentence, enclosed by commas, especially after the subject. But they can also follow the subject of the exemplifying sentence, while remaining essentially cataphoric in nature (i.e. pointing forward to the example) as shown in Examples 4.3 and 4.4. 4.3. Such associations of sexual deviance and political threat have a long history sedimented into our language and culture. The term ‘buggery’, for example, derives from the religious as well as sexual nonconformity of an eleventh-century Bulgarian sect which practised the Manichaean heresy and refused to propagate the species; the OED tells us that it was later applied to other heretics, to whom abominable practices were also ascribed. 4.4. The small mammals living today in many different habitats and climatic zones have been described, so that the associations between faunal types and ecology are well documented [ . . . ]. Woodland faunas, for instance, are distinct from grassland faunas, and tropical faunas distinct from temperate faunas, and when these and more precise distinctions are made it is possible to correlate and even define ecological zones by their small mammal faunas.

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Table 4.2 The use of ‘for example’ and ‘for instance’ in the BNC-AC-HUM

for example for instance

Cataphoric marker

Endophoric marker

1,185 (93.8%) 588 (96.5%)

78 (6.2%) 21 (3.5%)

For example and for instance can also function as endophoric markers and refer back to an example given before, as illustrated in Example 4.5. This use is, however, much less frequent (see Table 4.2). 4.5. Thirdly, the debates over how far to forge a strategy either for winning power or for promoting economic development in a post-revolutionary society have not been satisfactorily resolved, and indeed perhaps cannot be, given that counterrevolutionary response to any successful formula will ensure that it will be that much more difficult to apply the same tactics in another situation. Such is the relation which Nicaragua bears to El Salvador, for example. In Mieux écrire en anglais, Laruelle (2004: 96–7) writes that for example should be placed in the initial position if the whole sentence has an exemplificatory function, while the adverbial should follow the subject, between commas, if only the subject is the example. This statement, however, is not confirmed by corpus data. Example 4.3 clearly shows that for example need not be placed in the initial position to introduce an exemplificatory sentence. Like nouns and verbs, mono-lexemic adverbial phrases can also have their own phraseological patterns. Three verbs, i.e. consider (f[n, c]1 = 13; log-likelihood = 92.5), take (f[n, c] = 7; log-likelihood = 19.1) and see (f[n, c] = 19; log-likelihood = 71.7) are significant left co-occurrents of for example in the BNC-AC-HUM. They are used in the second person of the imperative. The verbs consider and take are typically used with for example to introduce an example that is discussed in further detail over several sentences: 4.6. It is worth pausing here momentarily to observe that such legally provided remedies can be morally justified even when applied to people who are not subject to the authority of the government and its laws. Consider for example the law of defamation. Assuming that it is what it should be, it does no more than incorporate into law a moral right existing independently of the law. The duty to compensate the defamed person is itself a moral duty. Enforcing such a duty against a person who refuses to pay damages is morally justified because it

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implements the moral rights of the defamed. One need not invoke the authority of the law over the defamer to justify such action. The law may not have authority over him. 4.7. But the concept of compresence is far from clear. If it implies that no time-lag is detectable between elements of an experienced “complex”, then this is true only in a very limited sense. Take, for example, the perceptual experience that I have while looking at this bunch of carnations arranged in a vase on the table in the middle of the room. I see this “complex” as one whole. But while I am looking at it my eyes constantly wander from one flower to the next, pausing at some, ignoring others, picking out the details of their shapes and colours. Finally, without taking my eyes off the flowers, I may move the vase closer, or walk around the table and look at the flowers from different angles. The scene will keep constantly changing. As a result, I shall experience a succession of different “complexes of qualities” but I shall still be looking at the same bunch of flowers. Hyland describes this type of imperative as directives with a rhetorical purpose that ‘can steer readers to certain cognitive acts, where readers are initiated into a new domain of argument, led through a line of reasoning, or directed to understand a point in a certain way’ (2002a: 217). He categorizes them as interactional resources, and more specifically as engagement markers, i.e., ‘devices that explicitly address readers, either to focus their attention or include them as discourse participants’ (Hyland, 2005:53). The verb see is frequently used in professional academic writing as an endophoric marker to refer to tables, figures, or other sections of the article or to someone else’s ideas or publications (Hyland, 1998, 2002a, 2005; Hyland and Tse, 2007). The use of the second person imperative see ‘allow[s] academic writers to guide readers to some textual act, referring them to another part of the text or to another text’ (Hyland, 2002a: 217). In the BNC-AC-HUM, 63 per cent of the occurrences of the sequence see for example appear between brackets as in Example 4.8: 4.8. Afro-Caribbean and Asian children are indeed painfully aware that many teachers view them negatively and some studies have documented reports of routine racist remarks by teachers (see for example Wright in this volume). Swales et al. (1998) examined a corpus of research articles in ten disciplines (art history, chemical engineering, communication studies, experimental geology, history, linguistics, literary criticism, philosophy, political science and statistics) and found that second person imperative see was the most

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frequent imperative form across disciplines. Similarly, in his study of directives in academic writing, Hyland (2002a) analysed a corpus of 240 published research articles, seven textbook chapters and 64 project reports written by final year Hong Kong undergraduates and found that the second person imperative see represented 45 per cent of all imperatives in that corpus. Note that in both studies, the use of the imperative varied across disciplines. The advantage of adopting a phraseological approach to rhetorical functions, and hence metadiscourse resources, appears quite clearly here. The sequences take/consider for example consist of two metadiscourse resources in Hyland’s (2005) categorization scheme: the imperative forms take and consider are interactional resources, and more specifically engagement markers, while for example is a code gloss. Similarly, see is an endophoric marker in see for example. In our phraseological framework, the sequences take/ consider/see for example are textual phrasemes as they form functional — textual — units and display arbitrary lexical restrictions. The adverb notably can be regarded as a typical academic word: Figure 4.2 shows that it is much more frequent in academic writing than in the other genres. It is typically preceded by a comma (Example 4.9) and is qualified by the adverb most in 15.2 per cent of its occurrences in the BNC-AC-HUM (Example 4.10). 4.9. Some bishops, notably Jenkins of Durham, Sheppard of Liverpool, and Hapgood of York, have spoken out about deprivation in the inner cities, the miners’ strike, and the need for government to show a greater compassion for, and understanding of, the poor.

freq. per million words

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Figure 4.2 The distribution of the adverb ‘notably’ across genres

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4.10. At leading public schools, most notably Eton, there is a tradition of providing MPs, government ministers, and prime ministers. The abbreviation e.g. (or less frequently eg) stands for the Latin ‘exempli gratia’ and means the same as for example. It is quite common in the BNC-AC-HUM, in which 65.7 per cent of its occurrences are between brackets: 4.11. Direct curative measures (e.g. flood protection) are clearly within the domain of a soil conservation policy. In contrast to for example and for instance, the great majority of occurrences of e.g. introduce one or more noun phrases rather than full clauses: 4.12. It may help to refer the patient to other agencies (e.g. social services, a psychosexual problems clinic, self-help groups). When e.g. is used without brackets, it is preceded by a comma: 4.13. Primary industries are those which produce things directly from the ground, the water, or the air, e.g. farming. As shown in Figure 4.1, the textual phrasemes by way of illustration and to name but a few are quite rare in the BNC-AC-HUM. In fact, these expressions are very infrequent in all types of discourse. Figures 4.3 and 4.4 show the distribution of the two phrasemes in four main genres of the British

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National Corpus (BNC), namely academic writing, fiction, newspaper texts, and speech. Some 36 per cent of the occurrences of by way of illustration in the BNC (i.e. 10 out of a total of 28) appear in academic texts, and only one occurrence comes from speech. The expression to name but a few is more frequent than by way of illustration in the whole BNC, but only 12.8 per cent of its occurrences (10 out of 78) appear in academic writing. No instance of to name but a few was found in speech.

4.2.2. Using nouns and verbs to exemplify Nouns and verbs are used to give examples in specific phraseological patterns. The noun which is most frequently used in this way is example, which is much more common than illustration or a case in point. Table 4.3 shows that it is as frequently used as its connective counterpart, the textual phraseme for example, in the BNC-AC-HUM. The significant verb co-occurrents of the noun example in the BNCAC-HUM are listed in Table 4.4. The verb be is the most frequent verb co-occurrent of example in windows of one to three words to both the left Table 4.3 The use of ‘example’ and ‘for example’ in the BNC-AC-HUM example

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Right co-occurrents

Verb

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be provide take give cite consider illustrate show see serve

139 26 29 12 5 12 7 9 10 5

be illustrate show give suggest quote include provide concern

84 14 21 15 12 6 7 8 6

will can would

16 15 13

(3L-1L) and the right (1R-3R). Be is, however, twice as frequent in the left window. When example is preceded by the verb be, it mainly functions as a retrospective label, i.e. it refers back to the exemplifying element which is given as the subject. The noun example may refer back directly to a noun phrase (Example 4.14) or to the demonstrative pronoun this which further points to a previous exemplifying sentence (Example 4.15). 4.14. Vision is a better example of a modular processing system. 4.15. The designer at Olympia chose to represent the race by the moment before it started, as Polygnotos showed the sack of Troy in its aftermath. This is the supreme surviving example of the early classical taste for stillness and indirect narrative. By contrast, when the noun example is introduced by there + BE (11%) or here + BE (15%), it functions as an advance label which refers forward to a following example (underlined): 4.16. In addition, of course, choices can result from lengthy weighing of odds. Here is a simple example of the complexity at issue. I am driving along a narrow main road, used by fast-moving traffic, with my children in the back seat. A car some distance ahead strikes a large dog but does not stop, leaving the creature walking-wounded but in obvious distress.

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My children, seeing what occurred, cry out. I glance in the rear-view mirror to see other cars close behind; slowing down but then speeding up again. I do not stop. When example is the subject of the verb be, it always functions as an advance label. It is often qualified by an adjective (see Examples 4.17 to 4.19) and the exemplified item is generally introduced by the preposition of (Examples 4.18 and 4.19). In Example 4.19, the exemplified item is the pronoun this which refers back to the previous sentences. 4.17. The prime example is the Dada movement, whose nihilistic work is now admired for its qualities of imagination. 4.18. The clearest example of emotive language is poetry, which is entirely concerned with the evocation of feelings or attitudes, and in which the writer’s and reader’s attention is not, or should not be, directed at any of the objective relationships between words and things. 4.19. Until the seventeenth century many, even most, European frontiers were very vague, zones in which the claims and jurisdictions of different rulers and their subjects overlapped and intersected in a complex and confusing way. This was especially true in eastern Europe, where many states were large and central governments were usually less effective at the peripheries of their territories than in the west. The most striking example of this is perhaps the frontier in the Danubian plain between the Ottoman empire and the Habsburg territories in central Europe. Copular clauses using the noun example consist of textual sentence stems (An example of Y is . . . ) and rhemes (. . . is an example of Y). Textual sentence stems are routinized fragments of sentences which serve specific textual or organizational functions. They consist of sequences of two or more clause constituents, and typically involve a subject and a verb, e.g. An example of Y is . . . . They typically have an empty slot for the following object or complement. Rhemes typically consist of a verb and its post-verbal elements, which do not contain any thematic element (e.g. . . . is another issue). Four other verbs, namely provide, give, illustrate and show (given in italics in Table 4.4), are significant left and right co-occurrents of the noun example. The verbs take, cite, consider, see and serve are only significant left co-occurrents, while the verbs suggest, concern, quote and include and the modals will, can and would are significant right co-occurrents. The verbs provide, take, give, cite, consider, see, serve and include often co-occur with the noun example to form textual — exemplificatory — phrasemes. The verb

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provide can be used in active or passive structures, but active structures in which the subject is the example (Example 4.20) are more frequent. The verb cite is more often found in a passive structure in which example functions as a retrospective label (Example 4.21). The two verbs often form rhemes with the noun example: 4.20. The Magdalen College affair, for example, provides a classic example of passive resistance. 4.21. A famous passage of art criticism can be cited as one example entirely beyond dispute. The verb take is mainly used with the noun example in sentence-initial exemplificatory infinitive clauses (68.9%; Example 4.22). It also occurs in active structures with a personal pronoun subject (13.79%; Example 4.23) and in imperative sentences (13.79%). When used in the imperative, it generally appears in the second person (Example 4.24) and there is only one occurrence in the first person plural in the BNC-AC-HUM. By contrast, the verb consider is mainly used with the noun example in imperative sentences (70%), usually second person imperatives (Example 4.25) and less frequently first person plural. The verb see always co-occurs with the noun example in the second person of the imperative (Example 4.26). It is never used to introduce an example, but always as an endophoric marker to direct the reader’s attention to an example elsewhere in the text. 4.22. To take one example, at the beginning of the project seven committees were established, each consisting of about six people, to investigate one of a range of competing architectural possibilities. 4.23. In accordance with the theme of this chapter, I shall simply use ‘stylistics’ as a convenient label (hence the inverted commas) for the branch of literary studies that concentrates on the linguistic form of texts, and I shall take four different examples of this kind of work as alternatives to the Prague School’s and Jakobson’s approach to the relationship between linguistics and literature. 4.24. Take the example of following an object by eye-movements (so-called ‘tracking’). 4.25. Consider the following example. 4.26. The most important vowel is set to two or more tied notes in a phrase designed to increase the lyrical expression (see Example 47, above). The verb include is used with the plural form of the noun example in subject position to introduce an incomplete list of examples in object position:

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4.27. The floral examples include a large lotus calyx and two ivy leaves joined by a slight fillet. Another set of verb co-occurrents of example is used to discuss the examples given in a text. These include quote (Example 4.28), suggest and show (Example 4.29) to talk about conclusions that can be drawn from the examples, and illustrate (Example 4.30) to show what something is like or that something is true. 4.28. Thirdly, in all the examples quoted here, there is a sense in which all observers see the same thing. 4.29. The example shows that the objector’s neat distinction between adjudicative and legislative authorities is mistaken. 4.30. This example clearly illustrates the theory dependence and hence fallibility of observation statements. These significant co-occurrences illustrated in Examples 4.28 to 4.30 do not qualify as collocations as the meaning of the verb is not restricted by the noun example, and the combinations are fully explicable in semantic and syntactic terms. However, these co-occurrences are frequently used in adverbial clauses (e.g. as this example suggests . . . ) and sentence stems (e.g. this example [adv.] illustrates . . .) which describe examples, give more detail about them, and make suggestions on their basis. The advantage of using the noun example rather than the adverbials for example or for instance is that it allows the writer to evaluate the example in terms of its suitability, e.g. good, outstanding, fine, excellent (Example 4.31) or typicality, e.g. classic, typical, prime (Example 4.32). The adjectives above and following are used to situate the example in the text (Example 4.33): used with the noun example, they function as endophoric markers in Hyland’s (2005) typology of metadiscourse features. Table 4.5 gives the 24 adjectives that significantly co-occur with the noun example in the BNC-AC-HUM. 4.31. An outstanding example of this type of narrative is Vargas Llosa’s Conversation in the Cathedral, which pivots around a four-hour conversation between two characters, the whole novel being made up of dialogue and narrative units generated in waves by the central conversation, as the two men’s review of their past lives sparks off inner thoughts and recollections and conjures up other conversations and dramatised episodes. 4.32. The prime example is the Dada movement, whose nihilistic work is now admired for its qualities of imagination.

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freq. 38 15 18 10 16 11 13 10 12 16 13 9

Adjective fine notable isolated interesting known excellent prime trivial previous remarkable numerous single

freq. 9 8 8 9 7 6 7 5 6 5 5 6

4.33. Consider the following example. There is a case for considering the co-occurrence classic example as a free combination, i.e. a word combination that is semantically fully compositional, syntactically fully flexible and collocationally open: the adjective classic is used with a meaning that is listed as its first sense in the Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English (LDOCE4) (1. TYPICAL: having all the features that are typical or expected of a particular thing or situation) and the Oxford English Dictionary Online2 (1. of the first class, of the highest rank or importance; approved as a model; standard, leading). However, the adjective is only commonly used in this sense with a very limited number of nouns— example, mistake and case3. This is clearly an illustration of the difficulty of separating the senses that a word has in isolation from those that it acquires in context (see Barkema, 1996). Following Granger and Paquot (2008a: 43), I classified co-occurrences of this type as collocations, i.e. usage-determined or preferred syntagmatic relations between two lexemes in a specific syntactic pattern. Both lexemes make a separate semantic contribution to the word combination but they do not have the same status. The ‘base’ of a collocation is semantically autonomous and is selected first by a language user for its independent meaning. The second element, i.e. the ‘collocate’ or ‘collocator’, is selected by and semantically dependent on the ‘base’. The co-occurrence prime + example is a clear example of a collocation: the adjective prime has two core meanings – ‘most important’ and ‘of the very best quality or kin’ – but a prime example is ‘a very typical example of sth’. Collocations represent 8.3 per cent of the types and 6.87 per cent of the tokens of adjective + example co-occurrences.

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Other adjectives form semantically and syntactically fully compositional sequences with the noun example. Thus, the meaning of an outstanding example is composed of the meanings of the adjective outstanding and the noun example. This does not mean, however, that they are pedagogically uninteresting. First, they constitute ‘preferred ways’ of qualifying example as they are repeatedly used with this noun. Second, in her study of verb + noun combinations, Nesselhauf (2005) has shown that free combinations are prone to erroneous or, at least, unidiomatic use in learners’ writing. Similarly, Lorenz (1998; 1999a) has pointed out that German learners’ use of adjectives, irrespective of their phraseological status, differs from that of native students. The added value of using statistics, and more specifically association measures, to analyse the common co-occurrences of a word in a large corpus is made clear by comparing the significant adjective co-occurrents of the noun example (listed in Table 4.5) with attested adjectival collocates (as given by Siepmann, 2005: 137). In addition to most of the adjectives given in Table 4.5, Siepmann listed a number of adjectives that do not appear even once in the 87-million word written part of the BNC (beguiling, consummate, eminent, apposite, anodyne, happy, alarming, crass, cautionary), and adjectives which occur only once or twice in the corpus (exquisite, well-worn, edifying, emotive, awe-inspiring, glittering, hideous). To use Sinclair’s (1999: 18) words, these co-occurrents are best described as ‘singularities’ and do not represent ‘the habitual usages of the majority of users’. Apart from verbs and adjectives, other significant co-occurrents of the noun example are found in professional academic writing. Left cooccurrents include determiners and the pronoun this. Indefinite determiners (a, another and one) are more frequent than the definite article the with example. The is mainly used when the noun is qualified by a superlative adjective or preceded by ordinals such as first, next and last (Example 4.34). 4.34. The first two examples discussed below illustrate different ways in which the linguistic model is used to develop a narrative model, and (. . . ). The pronoun this is typically used as a subject with the verb be to refer back to an example given in a previous sentence (see Example 4.15 above). Right co-occurrents include the preposition of and the pronoun this. In 40 per cent of its occurrences, the noun example is directly followed by the preposition of which introduces the idea, class or event exemplified, which in turn is often determined by a demonstrative (Example 4.31 above) or pronominalized to refer back to a previous sentence.

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These findings support Gledhill’s (2000) view that there may be a very specific phraseology and set of lexico-grammatical patterns for function words in academic discourse. Function words seem to display co-occurrence preferences just as content words do (also see Renouf and Sinclair’s (1991) notion of a ‘collocational framework’). These findings also provide strong evidence against the use of stopword lists when extracting co-occurrences from corpora as there is a serious danger of missing a whole set of phraseological patterns (Clear, 1993). The verbs illustrate and exemplify can also be used as exemplifiers. The verb illustrate is used with the meaning of ‘to be an example which shows that something is true or that a fact exists’ (Example 4.35) or ‘to make the meaning of something clearer by giving examples’ (Example 4.36) (LDOCE4). The verb exemplify is used with the meanings of ‘to be a very typical example of something’ and ‘to give an example of’. 4.35. The narratives of the Passio Praeiecti and of the Vita Boniti both have their peculiarities, and it is possible that the appointment of Praeiectus and the retirement of Bonitus were less creditable than their hagiographers claim. Nevertheless they do illustrate the complexities of local ecclesiastical politics. 4.36. My aim will be to illustrate different ways of approaching literature through its linguistic form, ways involving the direct application of linguistic theory and linguistic methods of analysis in order to illuminate the specifically literary character of texts. Both verbs are more frequent in academic writing than in any other genre. Figure 4.5 compares the relative frequencies of the two verbs in academic writing with three main genres represented in the British National Corpus. The verb illustrate is not uncommon in news but a quick look at its concordances shows that a significant proportion of its occurrences are used not to introduce an example, but with the meaning of ‘to put pictures in a book, article, etc’ (Example 4.37). Exemplify is very rarely used in other genres. 4.37. Also in the pipeline is an Australian children ‘s TV series based on Gumnut Factory Folk Tales (written, illustrated and published by Chris Trump). (BNC-NEWS) Figure 4.5 also shows that the verb illustrate is more frequent than exemplify in professional academic writing. The frequencies of the two verb lemmas, their word forms and tenses in the BNC-AC-HUM4 were computed in the way described by Granger (2006). Table 4.6 shows that there is no

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frequency per million word

140 120 100 80 60 40 20 0 News

Academic

illustrate

Figure 4.5 genres

Fiction

Speech

exemplify

The distribution of the verbs ‘illustrate’ and ‘exemplify’ across

Table 4.6 The use of the lemma ‘illustrate’ in the BNC-AC-HUM The lemma illustrate

BNC-AC-HUM

illustrate simple present infinitive

97 36 61

37.45% 13.89% 23.55%

illustrated simple past present/past perfect past participle

84 7 0 77

32.43% 2.7% 0% 29.73%

illustrates

63

24.32%

illustrating continuous tense -ing clause

15 2 13

5.79% 0.77% 5%

259

100%

Total Nr of words Relative freq. per 100,000 words

3,321,867 7.8

major difference in proportion between the verb forms illustrate, illustrated and illustrates. When used in active structures, the verb is often preceded by a non-human subject such as example, figure, table, case or approach (Example 4.38). Almost all occurrences of the past participle appear in the passive construction BE illustrated by/in (Example 4.39).

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4.38. This example clearly illustrates the theory dependence and hence fallibility of observation statements. 4.39. The contrast between the conditions on the coast and in the interior is illustrated by the climatic statistics for two stations less than 30 km (18.5 miles) apart. The sentence-initial adverbial clause To illustrate this/the point/X, . . . (Example 4.40) represents 2.7 per cent of the occurrences of the lemma illustrate in the BNC-AC-HUM. 4.40. How many observations make up a large number? (. . . ) Whatever the answer to such a question, examples can be produced that cast doubt on the invariable necessity for a large number of observations. To illustrate this, I refer to the strong public reaction against nuclear warfare that followed the dropping of the first atomic bomb on Hiroshima towards the end of the Second World War. In the BNC-AC-HUM, illustrate significantly co-occurs with the noun example [LogL = 112] in a 3L-1L window, and with the nouns point [LogL = 168.78], example [LogL = 49.65] and fig. [LogL = 45.08] in a 1R-3R window. The noun point is used as an object of illustrate which refers back to an idea put forward in a previous sentence: 4.41. For most of this century it is those disorders gathered together under the heading of ‘schizophrenia’ that have been used as the paradigm for trying to describe and understand psychosis. Yet even in this form, or forms – for many would prefer to talk of ‘the schizophrenias’ – there is still no universally accepted set of criteria for diagnosis. To illustrate the point, one of the present authors was recently asked to review a paper submitted to a prominent psychiatric journal, proposing a new set of rules for diagnosing schizophrenia. In the course of their analysis the authors determined the extent to which their proposed criteria agreed with those contained in other existing diagnostic schemes – some ten or twelve of them. Correlations varied over a very wide range. The noun figure (and the abbreviation fig.) is used either as the subject of the verb illustrate or in the passive structure illustrated in Figure x. This co-occurrence is even more marked in academic genres such as social sciences, natural sciences and medicine which rely extensively on figures, tables and diagrams (see Examples 4.42 and 4.43). 4.42. Figure 1 illustrates the spread of results for the alcoholics and the controls. (W_ac_medicine BNC sub-corpus, see Table 3.2)

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4.43. The advantages of the system are illustrated in Fig. 8.2 and, like the Peruvian example discussed above, the fallow stage is contributing to crop productivity as well as providing protection against soil erosion. (W_ac_soc_science BNC sub-corpus, see Table 3.2) The adverbs well, better, best and clearly are sometimes used with illustrate to evaluate the typicality or suitability of the example (Example 4.44). The verb illustrate also co-occurs significantly with how to introduce a clause (Example 4.45), with the verb serve (Example 4.46), and with the modals will, can and may (Example 4.47). 4.44. The history of the English monarchy well illustrates both the importance and the unimportance of war. 4.45. We recently did a simple experiment which happens to illustrate how children’s knowledge of where an object is determines their behaviour. 4.46. While our discussion in this chapter is of the doctrine of neutrality as such, Rawls ‘ treatment of it will serve to illustrate the problems involved. 4.47. This prejudice against close involvement with the secular government may be illustrated by an anecdote related in the about Molla Gurani. Table 4.7 shows that the lexico-grammatical preferences of the verb exemplify differ from those of illustrate. A large proportion of the occurrences Table 4.7 The use of the lemma ‘exemplify’ in the BNC-AC-HUM The lemma exemplify exemplify simple present infinitive

9 5 4

11.4% 6.33% 5%

exemplified simple past present/past perfect past participle

53 8 1 44

67% 10% 1.26% 55.7%

exemplifies

15

19%

exemplifying continuous tense -ing clause

2 0 2

2.53% 0% 2.53%

79

100%

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of the lemma exemplify are –ed forms, and more precisely past participle forms, of the verb. In the BNC-AC-HUM, the verb significantly co-occurs with the verb be and the conjunction as in a 3L-1L window, and with the prepositions by and in in a 1R-3R window. These significant co-occurrents highlight the preference of the verb for the passive structure BE exemplified by/in (Example 4.48) and the lexico-grammatical pattern as exemplified by/in (Example 4.49). Exemplify is also often used after a noun phrase, preceded by a comma (Example 4.50). Unlike illustrate, the verb exemplify does not co-occur significantly with nouns. 4.48. The association of this material with the clerk is clearly exemplified by Chaucer’s wife of Bath’s fifth husband, the clerk Jankyn, who, in the Wife of Bath’s Prologue, reads antifeminist material to her from his book Valerie and Theofraste. 4.49. He assumed, without argument, that science, as exemplified by physics, is superior to forms of knowledge that do not share its methodological characteristics. 4.50. Piaget’s claim that thinking is a kind of internalised action, exemplified in the assimilation-accommodation theory of infant learning mentioned above, is really a global assumption in search of some refined, detailed and testable expression. 4.2.3. Discussion The description of exemplifiers presented here does not aim at exhaustiveness in professional academic writing but at typicality. The corpus-based methodology adopted has highlighted a number of lexical items that are repeatedly used as exemplifiers in academic writing. The function of exemplification can be fulfilled by a whole spectrum of single words (the preposition like, the adverb notably, the abbreviation e.g.) and word combinations, i.e. word-like units or mono-lexemic phrasemes (the preposition such as, the adverbials for example and for instance), sentence stems (An example of Y is X; Examples include . . .) and rhemes (… is an example of . . .; . . . provides a classic example of . . .), imperative clauses (Consider, for example . . .) and sentence-initial infinitive clauses (To take one example, . . .). A large majority of these word combinations are semantically and syntactically fully compositional; the exceptions are a few collocations such as prime example and classic example. They are, however, characterized by their high frequency of use and can be described as ‘preferred ways’ (Altenberg, 1998) of giving an example in professional academic writing. Siepmann (2005) analysed a 9.5-million word corpus of academic writing, but did not make use of statistical methods. He enumerated every

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single occurrence of word sequences used to give an example and listed rare events such as the infinitive clauses to paint an extreme example and to pick just one example (a single occurrence in his corpus), the co-occurrence example + is afforded by and the expression for the sake of example. It may be argued that privileging exhaustiveness over typicality in corpus linguistic research is counter-productive, and that such an approach results in too much — unreliable — information. Siepmann, for example, wrote that English authors have a large range of exemplificatory imperatives at their disposal, using the direct second-person imperative VP ~ as well as the less imposing hortative let us + VP and the inclusive let me + VP. Of these last two, the former is around five times more frequent than the latter, showing a high degree of audience sensitivity among authors. (Siepmann, 2005:120) A closer look at his frequency data (reprinted in Table 4.8) shows, however, that the co-occurrences see/take/consider + for example account for 89.4 per cent of the imperatives Siepmann found. First person imperatives are extremely rare and let me + VP only appeared three times in the 9.5-million word corpus of professional academic writing he used. Although a large range of exemplificatory imperatives may be available to language users, only a very limited set of these are widespread in professional academic writing.

Table 4.8 The use of imperatives in academic writing (based on Siepmann, 2005: 119) Imperatives in academic writing

Frequency

%

(for example/for instance) see (for example/for instance) NP (for example) consider (for example) NP take, for (another) example, NP Consider a(n) (ADJ) example/instance take the example of (as examples of NP) consider (as an example) NP take, as an example, NP as an illustration (of this)/ by way of (brief) illustration, consider NP (2) Take (even) NP (2) Let us (now) take + (as) + DET + ADJ + example(s) Let us consider + DET + ADJ + example(s) Let me give (you) (but) one example Let me offer + DET (+ ADJ+) example Let us consider, for the sake of illustration, NP

200 54 16 7 5 3 1 2 2 4 4 2 1 1

66.2 17.9 5.3 2.3 1.7 1 0.3 0.7 0.7 1.3 1.3 0.7 0.3 0.3

Total

302

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The analysis of exemplifiers presented here also validates the method used to design the Academic Keyword List. The exemplificatory lexical items which were extracted are of two types: — the most frequent exemplifiers in academic writing (such as, example, for example and for instance) (see Figure 4.1 discussed earlier in this chapter); — lexical items which are not as frequent as such as, example, for example and for instance, but which are more frequent in academic prose than in any other genres (illustrate, exemplify, e.g. and notably). The preposition like can be used to fulfil an exemplificatory function in academic writing but it is much more common in other genres. The nouns illustration and case in point are quite characteristic of formal textual genres, but they are infrequent. The expressions to name but a few and by way of illustration are rare in all types of discourse.

4.3. The phraseology of rhetorical functions in expert academic writing This section briefly comments on the types of lexical devices used by expert writers to serve the functions of ‘expressing cause and effect’, ‘comparing and contrasting’, ‘expressing a concession’ and ‘reformulating’ in an attempt to give a wider overview of the way academic vocabulary is used to serve specific rhetorical functions. It aims to characterize the phraseology of these rhetorical functions in academic prose. Table 4.9 shows that the lexical means of expressing a concession consist of single word adverbs (e.g. however, nevertheless, yet), (complex) conjunctions (e.g. although, even though) and (complex) prepositions (e.g. despite, in spite of). Similarly, reformulation is most frequently achieved by means of the mono-lexemic units that is and in other words, the abbreviation i.e. and the adverb namely (Table 4.10). Adverbs, prepositions and conjunctions also represent a large proportion of the lexical devices used by expert writers to serve the functions of ‘expressing cause and effect’ (Table 4.11) and ‘comparing and contrasting’ (Table 4.12). However, these two functions can also be realized by means of nouns, verbs and adjectives in specific phraseological or lexico-grammatical patterns. As shown in Table 4.11, nouns account for 32.5 per cent of the lexical means used to express a cause or an effect in academic writing, e.g. cause, factor, source, effect, result, consequence, outcome and implication.

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Table 4.9 Ways of expressing a concession in the BNC-AC-HUM Abs. freq.

%

Rel. freq.

however nevertheless nonetheless though ADV yet

3,353 676 66 144 1,817

28.6 5.8 0.6 1.2 15.5

100.9 20.3 2.0 4.3 54.7

TOTAL ADVERBS

6,056

51.6

182.3

although though CONJ even though (even if) albeit

2,292 1,721 248 451 80

19.5 14.7 2.1 3.8 0.7

69.0 51.8 7.5 13.6 2.4

TOTAL CONJ.

4,792

40.86

144.26

despite in spite of notwithstanding

681 159 39

5.8 1.4 0.3

20.5 4.8 1.2

TOTAL PREP.

879

7.5

26.46

11,727

100

353

Adverbs

Conjunctions

Prepositions

TOTAL

Table 4.10 Ways of reformulating, paraphrasing and clarifying in the BNC-AC-HUM

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%

Rel. freq.

330 375 81 210 187 21 12 7 91

25.1 28.5 6.2 16.0 14.2 1.6 0.9 0.5 6.9

9.9 11.3 2.4 6.3 5.6 0.6 0.4 0.2 2.7

1,314

100

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Verbs are also common: cause, bring about, contribute to, lead to, result in, derive, emerge, and stem. Patterns involving nouns (e.g. contrast, comparison, difference and distinction) and verbs (e.g. contrast, differ, distinguish and differentiate) are often used to compare and contrast but adjectives (e.g. different, distinct, differing and distinctive) play a more prominent role and account for 29.2 per cent of the lexical means used by expert writers (Table 4.12).

Table 4.11 Ways of expressing cause and effect in the BNC-AC-HUM Abs. freq.

%

Rel. freq.

cause factor source origin root reason consequence effect result outcome implication

755 550 1,175 500 183 1,802 450 1,830 813 143 411

2.8 2.1 4.4 1.9 0.7 6.8 1.7 6.9 3.1 0.5 1.7

22.7 16.6 35.4 15.0 5.5 54.2 13.6 55.0 24.5 4.3 12.4

TOTAL NOUNS

8,612

32.52

259.25

570 125 276 227 101 67 671 115 161 327 129 171 145 476 466 74 56 95

2.2 0.5 1.0 0.8 0.4 0.2 2.5 0.4 0.6 1.2 0.5 0.6 0.6 1.8 1.8 0.3 0.2 0.4

17.2 3.8 8.3 6.8 3.0 2.0 20.2 3.5 4.9 9.8 3.9 5.2 4.4 14.3 14.0 2.2 1.7 2.9

4,252

16.06

128.0

nouns

Verbs cause bring about contribute to generate give rise to induce lead to prompt provoke result in yield make sb/sth do sth arise from/out of derive emerge follow from trigger stem TOTAL VERBS

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%

Rel. freq.

consequent responsible (for)

53 344

0.2 1.3

1.6 10.4

TOTAL ADJ.

397

1.49

12

599 195 196 22 1 66 52 109 35 22 24

2.3 0.7 0.7 0.1 0.0 0.3 0.2 0.4 0.1 0.1 0.1

18.0 5.9 5.9 0.7 0.0 2.0 1.6 3.3 1.0 0.7 0.7

1,321

4.99

39.8

therefore accordingly consequently thus hence so thereby as a result as a consequence in consequence by implication

1,412 130 143 1,767 283 1,894 182 101 20 14 35

5.3 0.5 0.5 6.7 1.1 7.2 0.7 0.4 0.1 0.0 0.1

42.5 3.9 4.3 53.2 8.5 57.0 5.5 3.0 0.6 0.4 1.1

TOTAL ADVERBS

5,981

22.59

180.04

2,207 955 883 1,036 696 52

83

8.3 3.6 3.3 3.9 2.6 0.2 0.1 0.1 0.0 0.312

5,912

22.33

177.97

26,475

100

796.99

111

Adjectives

Prepositions because of due to as a result of as a consequence of in consequence of in view of owing to in (the) light of thanks to on the grounds of on account of TOTAL PREP. Adverbs

Conjunctions because since As 5 for so that PRO is why that is why this is why which is why on the grounds that TOTAL CONJ. TOTAL

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22 18 12

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Table 4.12 Ways of comparing and contrasting found in the BNC-AC-HUM Abs. freq.

%

Rel. freq.

116 212 147 19 175 522 311 1,318 76 595 10 559 28 85 56 4,229

0.4 0.7 0.5 0.1 0.6 1.8 1.1 4.5 0.3 2.0 0.0 1.9 0.1 0.3 0.2 14.46

3.5 6.4 4.4 0.6 5.3 15.7 9.4 39.7 2.3 17.9 0.3 16.8 0.8 2.6 1.7 127.3

same similar analogous common comparable identical parallel alike contrasting different differing distinct distinctive distinguishable unlike contrary opposite reverse

2,580 1,027 55 1055 223 137 52 98 63 2,496 72 278 163 33 43 27 127 23

0.9 3.5 0.2 3.6 0.8 0.5 0.2 0.3 0.2 8.5 0.3 0.9 0.6 0.1 0.1 0.1 0.4 0.1

77.7 30.9 1.7 31.8 6.7 4.1 1.6 2.9 1.9 75.1 2.2 8.4 4.9 1.0 1.3 0.8 3.8 0.7

TOTAL ADJECTIVES

8,552

29.24

257.44

138 137 102 278 56 137

0.5 0.5 0.3 0.9 0.2 0.5

4.1 4.1 3.1 8.4 1.7 4.1

Nouns resemblance similarity parallel parallelism analogy contrast comparison difference differentiation distinction distinctiveness (the) same (the) contrary (the) opposite (the) reverse TOTAL NOUNS Adjectives

Verbs resemble correspond look like compare parallel contrast

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Rel. freq.

242 404 74

0.8 1.4 0.3

7.3 12.2 2.2

1,568

5.36

47.2

1.3 0.0 0.0 0.1 0.0 0.4 0.2 0.0 0.3 0.6

11.9 0.1 0.1 0.9 0.0 3.5 1.7 0.1 2.9 5.6

0.0 0.1

0.2 0.0 0.1 1.3 0.5 0.3 0.0 0.2

0.0 0.7 0.4 0.3 2.1 0.1 0.7 11.2 4.1 2.9 0.1 1.9

1,674

5.72

50.39

like6 unlike in parallel with as opposed to as against in contrast to/with in contrast to in contrast with versus contrary to by/in comparison with in comparison with in comparison to by comparison with in comparison with

2,812 244 8 121 46 82 73 9 53 66 52 14 4 21 14

9.6 0.8 0.0 0.4 0.2 0.3

84.6 7.3 0.2 3.6 1.4 2.5 2.2 0.3 1.6 2.00 1.6 0.4 0.1 0.6 0.4

TOTAL PREP.

3,484

differ distinguish differentiate TOTAL VERBS

113

Adverbs similarly analogously identically correspondingly parallely likewise in the same way contrastingly differently by/in contrast by contrast in contrast by way of contrast by/in comparison by comparison in comparison comparatively contrariwise distinctively on the other hand (on the one hand) on the contrary quite the contrary conversely TOTAL ADVERBS

394 2 2 29 0 118 56 3 97 185 116 69 0 23 14 9 69 4 25 372 136 95 2 62

Prepositions

0.2 0.2 0.2

11.91

104.88 (Continued)

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Table 4.12 Cont’d Abs. freq.

%

Rel. freq.

as while whereas

5,045 1264 442

17.2 4.3 1.5

151.9 38.0 13.3

TOTAL CONJ.

6,751

23.08

203.23

Conjunctions

Other expressions as . . . as in the same way as/that compared with/to compared with compared to CONJ compared to/with as compared to/with when compared to/with if compared to/with TOTAL

2,766 38 155 113 42 32 11 20 1 29,249

9.5 0.1 0.5

0.1

100

83.3 1.1 4.7 3.4 1.3 1.0 0.3 0.6 0.0 880.5

Table 4.13 shows a co-occurrence analysis of several nouns that are used to express cause or effect in academic prose: reason, implication, effect, outcome, result and consequence. Most of the co-occurrents listed form quite flexible and compositional textual sentence stems with their nominal node, as illustrated in the following examples: 4.51. Another direct result of conquest by force of arms was the development of slavery, which was widespread up to the beginning of the nineteenth century. 4.52. This may be an effect of the uncertainty around television’s textuality; but it is now an extremely limiting effect for the development of theory. 4.53. Health for women was held to be synonymous with healthy motherhood. This had important implications for the debate over access to birth control information and abortion – rarely were demands for freer access to birth control information devoid of maternalist rhetoric. 4.54. The reason is that with Van Gogh art and life are not merely conditioned by each other to a greater degree than with any other artist, but actually merge with each other. 4.55. However it is first necessary to consider another important consequence of the view of psychosis being presented here.

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Table 4.13 Co-occurrents of nouns expressing cause or effect in the BNC-AC-HUM Table 4.13a: reason Adjective + reason

Verb + reason

Determiner + reason

good main sufficient obvious other different alleged simple tactical political major additional right valid similar fundamental real independent special possible historical particular

have give see base on provide find examine Auxiliary verb + reason be seem reason + verb be justify reason + preposition for against Preposition (2L) + reason for reason + conjunction why which that

this another (no) reason to + verb believe suppose doubt prefer think fear accept reason(s) for . . . . supposing believing thinking accepting rejecting adopting There + verb + reason There is (no) reason to There seems no reason There are (DET/ADJ) reasons

Table 4.13b: implication

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Adjective + implication

Auxiliary verb + implication

important practical political serious social Verb + implication have carry implication + verb be

be implication + preposition of for Preposition + implication with Determiner + implication this implication + conjunction that

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Verb + effect

adverse overall good profound knock-on indirect far-reaching damaging cumulative dramatic immediate excellent long-term practical particular powerful special full general important other

have produce achieve create cause Auxiliary verb + effect be effect + verb be depend on occur effect + preposition of on upon Determiner + effect this effect + conjunction That Noun and effect cause

Table 4.13d: outcome

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Adjective + outcome

Verb + outcome

logical eventual likely different inevitable final outcome + preposition of Determiner + outcome this

influence determine represent affect outcome + verb be Auxiliary verb + outcome be

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Table 4.13e: result Adjective + result

Verb + result

inevitable direct immediate beneficial eventual interesting practical main similar result + preposition of from Preposition (3L) + result with Determiner + result this

produce achieve yield give bring lead to show present interpret obtain have result + verb be Auxiliary verb + result be

Table 4.13f: consequence Adjective + consequence

Verb + consequence

inevitable unintended unfortunate direct important necessary political natural bad practical social

have suffer (from) avoid consider outweigh discuss consequence + verb be follow ensue Auxiliary verb + consequence be consequence + preposition of for Preposition (3L) + consequence with of -

likely major possible Determiner + consequence this another consequence + conjunction that

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The word combinations illustrated in Examples 4.51 to 4.55 are good illustrations of what Sinclair and his followers have called ‘extended units of meaning’ where lexical and grammatical choices are ‘intertwined to build up a multi-word unit with a specific semantic preference, associating the formal patterning with a semantic field, and an identifiable semantic prosody, performing an attitudinal and pragmatic function in the discourse’ (Tognini-Bonelli, 2002: 79). These extended units of meaning are categorized as textual phrasemes in Granger and Paquot’s (2008a) typology as they function as sentence stems to organize the propositional content at a metadiscoursal level. A few co-occurrences are collocations as illustrated by Example 4.56. The verb carry is used in a delexical sense in the collocation carry implications, which basically means have implications. 4.56. We may certainly talk of animals, in the absence of speech, “consciously intending” or being compassionate, both of which carry implications of understanding to some degree. The variety of adjectives used with the nouns reason, implication, effect, outcome, result and consequence is also worthy of note and bears testimony to their prominent role in argumentation (Soler, 2002; Tutin, forthcoming). A large proportion of those are evaluative adjectives (e.g. fundamental, good, important, inevitable, major, serious, sufficient) and are used to express the ‘writer’s attitude or stance towards, viewpoint on, or feelings about the entities or propositions that he or she is talking about’ (Hunston and Thompson, 2000: 5). Like nouns, verbs that serve specific rhetorical or organizational functions in academic prose generally enter compositional and flexible sequences. Table 4.14 gives the most frequent lexical bundles containing one of the four verbs suggest, appear, prove and tend typically used to express possibility or certainty. Most clusters are lexico-grammatical patterns which function as textual sentence stems (e.g. it has been suggested that, it appears that), sentence-initial adverbial clauses (e.g. as suggested above, . . . ) or rhemes (e.g. . . . proved a complete failure). It is worth noting that each verb form has its own ‘distinctive collocational relationship’ (Sinclair, 1999: 16), and that these constitute different form/meaning pairings, and thus different complete units of meaning. For example, the –ed form of suggest (unlike that of appear, tend or prove) is mainly used in passive constructions. It is often used to report suggestions made by other people in impersonal structures introduced by it (e.g. it has been suggested, it is sometimes suggested), and in phrases introduced by the conjunction as (e.g. as already suggested by).

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As-phrases are also used with an endophoric marker (e.g. as suggested above) and/or the first person pronoun I (e.g. as I have suggested) to refer to a suggestion previously made. Suggested is also used in impersonal structures introduced by it followed by a modal verb (e.g. it may/might be suggested that) to make a tentative suggestion. By contrast, the verb form suggests is typically used to make it clear that the suggestion offered is made on the basis of who/whatever is the subject of the sentence: 4.57. More recent evidence suggests, however, that while it lives in woodland it actually hunts over nearby open areas. 4.58. Sinclair Hood (1971) suggests that woollen cloth and timber were sent to Egypt in exchange for linen or papyrus. In summary, results indicate that the phraseology of rhetorical or organizational functions in academic prose does not consist of idioms, similes, phrasal verbs, idiomatic sentences, proverb fragments and the like (see also Pecman, 2004 and Gledhill, 2000).7 Referential phrasemes that serve to organize scientific discourse mainly consist of lexical and grammatical collocations. Results also confirm Howarth’s (1996; 1998) conclusion that a large proportion of the lexical collocations found in academic discourse consist of a verb in a figurative sense and an abstract noun denoting a recurrent concept in academic discussion (e.g. adopt an approach/a method;

Table 4.14 Co-occurrents of verbs expressing possibility and certainty in the BNC-AC-HUM Table 4.14a: suggest suggested – it has been suggested that – it is (sometimes, commonly) suggested that – it was (first, also, even) suggested that – it can / could / may be suggested that – this is suggested by – as (already) suggested by – as suggested above – (as) I (have) (already) suggested suggests – NP / it / this (ADV: strongly, also) suggests (that) – . . ., which suggests (that) – as NP suggests

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suggest – NP / it / this might / may / would suggest (that) – NP does suggest (that) – there is evidence to suggest – I (would / want to) suggest – NP / it / this seems to suggest (that)

suggesting – … , (ADV: strongly) suggesting (that) – I am (not) suggesting that

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proved – NP / it / this proved to – NP / it / this proved (ADV) ADJ (to) with ADJ: difficult, unable, abortive, impossible, inadequate, successful, possible – NP / it / proved to be (ADV) ADJ – NP proved NP

prove – ADJ (likely, difficult, easy, possible) to prove . . . may / might / would prove ADJ to – NP was to prove ADJ – attempt to prove – seek to prove

proves – NP proves ADJ (impossible, necessary, inadequate, successful) – NP proves that

proving – BE proving – . . ., proving that – . . . by proving – . . . of proving

Table 4.14c: appear appeared – it appeared (ADJ) that – there appeared to be – this appeared to V – . . . which appeared ADJ/ to V

appears – NP / it / this appears to V – which appears to V – what appears to V – there appears to V – it appears that – as appears from/in

appear NP would/might/may appear to be/V

appearing /

Table 4.14d: tend tended – NP tended to V (be, favour, take, see)

tend – NP tend to V (be, see, look, regard)

tends – NP tends to V – . . . which tends to V – it tends to V V: be, confirm, ignore, obscure, become, support, conclude

tending /

draw an analogy/a comparison/a distinction; reach a conclusion/a consensus/a point; develop an idea/a method/a model; carry out a task/a test/a study). In academic prose, the category of textual phrasemes consists of three types of phraseme (cf. Figure 4.6). The first is complex prepositions (e.g. with respect to, in addition to) and complex conjunctions (e.g. so that, as if, even

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Phrasemes

Referential function Referential phrasemes (Lexical) collocations Grammatical collocations

Textual function Textual phrasemes

Communicative function Communicative phrasemes

Complex prepositions complex conjuctions Linking adverbials Textual formulae (including textual sentence stems and rhemes)

Attitudinal formulae

Figure 4.6 The phraseology of rhetorical functions in academic prose

though) which are used to establish grammatical relations (cf. Burger’s (1998) category of structural phrasemes). The second is multiword linking adverbials, used to connect two stretches of discourse. Although the majority of linking adverbials are single adverbs, and are therefore not part of the phraseological spectrum, prepositional phrases functioning as adverbs (e.g. for example, in other words, in addition, in conclusion, as a result) and clausal linking adverbials (e.g. that is, that is to say, what is more, to conclude) are also common in academic prose (Conrad, 1999: 11–12). These first two categories of textual phraseme broadly correspond to Moon’s (1998) set of organizational fixed expressions and idioms. Textual sentence stems and rhemes constitute the third type of textual phrasemes, which I refer to as ‘textual formulae’. Textual sentence stems are multiple clause elements involving a subject and a verb, which ‘form the springboard of utterances leading up to the communicatively most important — and lexically most variable — element’ (Altenberg, 1998: 113). Examples include It has been suggested; Another reason is . . . ; and It is argued that. . . . Rhemes typically consist of a verb and its post-verbal elements (e.g. . . . is another issue). They also sometimes function as textual phrasemes but are less frequent than sentence stems, possibly because rhemes are ‘usually tailored to expressing the particular new information the speakers want to convey to their listeners, and are therefore, as Altenberg (1998: 111) points out, “composed of variable items drawn from an open set”’ (De Cock, 2003: 269). Textual formulae are particularly prominent in academic writing and display different degrees of flexibility, from flexible fragments such as ‘DET (a, another) ADJ (typical, classic, prime, good, etc.) example of [NP] is . . .’ to more inflexible phrasemes such as ‘to be a case in point’.

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Attitudinal formulae make up a large proportion of communicative phrasemes in academic prose. They largely consist of sentence stems such as it is important/necessary that, it seems that or it is noteworthy that. This group is similar to Biber et al.’s (2004) category of stance bundles that ‘provide a frame for the interpretation of the following proposition, conveying two major kinds of meaning: epistemic and attitude/modality’ (Biber et al., 2004: 389). The frequency-based approach adopted to study the phraseology of rhetorical functions has also helped uncover a whole range of word combinations that do not fit traditional phraseological categories. Co-occurrences such as direct result, evidence suggests, final outcome, and outstanding example have traditionally been considered as peripheral or falling outside the limits of phraseology (Granger and Paquot, 2008a: 29) but results suggest that they are essential for effective communication and are also part of the preferred lexical devices used to organize scientific discourse.

4.4. Summary and conclusion In this chapter, I have shown that a high proportion of words in the Academic Keyword List (AKL) fit my definition of academic vocabulary and serve rhetorical or organizational functions in academic prose. The analysis of exemplifiers presented in Section 4.2 has also validated the method used to select AKL words: the lexical items which were automatically extracted included the most frequent exemplifiers in academic writing (such as, example, for example and for instance) and lexical items which are not as frequent but which are more common in academic prose than in other genres (illustrate, exemplify, e.g., notably). The AKL could be very useful for curriculum and materials design as it includes a high number of words that serve rhetorical functions in academic prose. The list, however, still needs to be refined in various ways. To be useful to apprentice writers, it should include the word combinations (frequent co-occurrences, collocations, textual phrasemes, etc.) in which each AKL word is commonly found in academic prose, together with information on the word’s frequency (see Coxhead et al. (forthcoming) for a similar project for Coxhead’s (2000) Academic Word List). This means that each AKL word has to be described in context, as was done above (Section 4.2) for the function of exemplification. Such a contextual analysis will also make it possible to decide whether each word fits my definition of academic vocabulary and deserves to be retained in the Academic Keyword List.

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The type of data analysis presented in this chapter has also offered valuable insights into the distinctive nature of the phraseology of rhetorical functions in scientific discourse. Most notably, results have shown that textual phrasemes make up the lion’s share of multiword units that ensure textual cohesion in academic prose. This type of phraseme, however, has often been neglected in theories of phraseology (cf. Granger and Paquot, 2008a: 34–5). Attitudinal formulae serve a major role in a restricted number of functions such as ‘expressing personal opinion’ and ‘expressing possibility and certainty’. Results have also pointed to the prominent role of free combinations to build the rhetoric of academic texts. My findings thus support Gledhill’s call for a rhetorical or pragmatic definition of phraseology: Phraseology is the ‘preferred way of saying things within a particular discourse’. The notion of phraseology implies much more than inventories of idioms and systems of lexical patterns. Phraseology is a dimension of language use in which patterns of wording (lexico-grammatical patterns) encode semantic views of the world, and at a higher level idioms and lexical phrases have rhetorical and textual roles within a specific discourse. Phraseology is at once a pragmatic dimension of linguistic analysis, and a system of organization which encompasses more local lexical relationships, namely collocation and the lexico-grammar. I claim that the phraseological analysis of a text should not only involve the identification of specific collocations and idioms, but must also take account of the correspondence between the expression and the discourse within which it has been produced. (Gledhill, 2000: 202) In line with this call, the functions of all AKL words and their preferred phraseological and lexico-grammatical patterns should be identified by examining them in context. Another objective of this chapter has also been to assess the adequacy of the treatment of rhetorical functions in EAP textbooks and investigate whether the AKL should be supplemented with additional academic words. To do so, I listed the words and phrases given in academic writing textbooks as typical lexical devices to perform the five rhetorical functions analysed in detail in this book and compared them with the AKL. I identified the words that were not part of the AKL and examined their use in the BNC-AC-HUM. Some of these lexical items turned out not to be typical of academic prose or to be extremely rare (e.g. to name but a few, by way of illustration) and should therefore not deserve the attention they have been given in

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pedagogical materials. By contrast, a large proportion of AKL words were not found in textbooks in spite of their relatively high frequency and major discourse functions in academic prose. These findings show the power of a data-driven approach to the selection of academic vocabulary and clearly call for a revision of the treatment of rhetorical functions in academic writing textbooks. A pedagogically-oriented investigation of academic vocabulary cannot rest solely on native speaker data. It is essential to examine what learners actually do with lexical devices that serve rhetorical functions. For example, do they use exemplifiers? Do they rely on words and phrasemes that are typical of academic prose? Do they use the expressions to name but a few and by way of illustration? If so, do they use them correctly? And do they use them sparingly or do they make heavy use of these infrequent exemplifiers? These questions can only be answered by an analysis of learner corpus data. Such an analysis is presented in the next chapter.

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Academic vocabulary in the International Corpus of Learner English

This chapter is devoted to academic vocabulary in learner writing. Section 5.1 presents a detailed comparison of exemplificatory devices in native and learner writing. This illustrates the type of results obtained when the range of lexical strategies available to EFL learners is compared to that of expert writers. Differences between learner and native writing are highlighted by means of log-likelihood tests. The UCREL log-likelihood calculator website (http://ucrel.lancs.ac.uk/llwizard.html) was used to compute log-likelihood values; 6.64 (p < 0.01) was taken as the threshold value. The whole learner corpus was compared to the BNC-AC-HUM but the results are only reported if they are common to learners from a majority of the mother tongue backgrounds considered. The same methodology was used to examine learners’ use of words that serve the rhetorical functions of ‘expressing cause and effect’, ‘comparing and contrasting’, ‘expressing a concession’ and ‘reformulating: paraphrasing and clarifying’. However these analyses are not presented in as much detail as for exemplification, both for reasons of space and because the presentation would soon become cumbersome. Instead, the focus of Section 5.2 is on the general interlanguage features that emerge from these analyses. These fall into six broad categories: limited lexical repertoire, lack of register awareness, learner-specific phraseological patterns, semantic misuse, clusters of connectives and unmarked position of connectors. However not all learner specific-features can be attributed to developmental factors. The learner’s first language also plays a considerable part in his or her use of academic vocabulary. In Section 5.3, I focus on transfer effects on French learners’ use of multiword sequences with rhetorical functions.

5.1. A bird’s-eye view of exemplification in learner writing A general finding of the comparison between the International Corpus of Learner English (ICLE) and the British National Corpus – Academic Humanities

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(BNC-AC-HUM) subcorpus is that exemplificatory lexical items are significantly more frequent in learner writing than in professional academic prose. This result highlights the importance of analysing several learner populations and comparing them so as to avoid faulty conclusions about EFL learner writing in general. Siepmann (2005) finds that the adverbials for example and for instance are less frequent in German learner writing than in native and non-native professional writing and argues that ‘under-use of exemplification as a rhetorical strategy in student writing may (. . .) bespeak a general lack of concern for comprehensibility’ (Siepmann, 2005: 255). This explanation for German learners’ underuse of exemplifiers is not entirely satisfactory, and does not apply to EFL learner writing in general: most L1 learner populations overuse exemplificatory discourse markers. The bar chart in Figure 5.1 shows the frequencies per 100,000 words of exemplifiers in the ICLE and the BNC-AC-HUM. The lexical items are ordered by decreasing relative frequency in the ICLE. The bar chart shows that EFL learners’ use of exemplifiers differs from that of professional writers in at least two ways. First, they do not choose the same exemplifiers. Thus the most frequent exemplifier in the ICLE is the adverbial for example, whereas the most frequent one in the BNC-AC-HUM is such as. The frequencies of individual items also differ widely. Figures and log-likelihood values for each corpus comparison are given in Table 5.1. This shows that EFL learners’ overuse of the function of exemplification is largely explained by their massive overuse of the adverbials for example and for instance, the noun example 2 and the preposition like. The overuse of for instance has already been reported by Granger and Tyson (1996) for French learners and Altenberg and Tapper (1998) for Swedish learners. Overuse of for example has also been found in other learner populations such as Japanese and Taiwanese learners (Narita and Sugiura, 2006; Chen, 2006). By contrast, learners tend to make little use of the verbs illustrate and exemplify and the adverb notably, which are underused in the ICLE. There is no significant difference in the use of the preposition such as, the abbreviation e.g., the nouns illustration and case in point and the expressions to name but a few and by way of illustration when comparisons are based on the total number of running words in each corpus. Except for the preposition such as and the abbreviation e.g., these lexical items are quite infrequent in both nativespeaker and learner writing. As explained in Section 4.1, the frequency of each exemplificatory lexical item can also be calculated as a proportion of the total number of exemplifiers. Corpus comparisons based on the total number of running words have shown that exemplification is used significantly more in the ICLE than

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Figure 5.1 Exemplifiers in the ICLE and the BNC-AC-HUM

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A comparison of exemplifiers based on the total number of running

ICLE

BNC-AC-HUM

LogL

Abs.

Rel.

Abs.

Rel.

61.17 40.9 19.7 0.3 0.1 0.1 1.5 1.4 0.1 0.86

1285 665 620

38.68 20 18.7

illustration illustrations (BE) a case in point

713 477 230 4 1 1 17 16 1 10

TOTAL NOUNS

740

63.5

1380

41.5

4.38 2.5 1.2 0.7 0 0.43 0.2 0.2 0.18 0.1 0.1 0

259

7.8 2.9 1.9 2.5 0.5 2.38 0.3 0.5 1.6

57

4.8

338

10.2

32.1 (− −)

489 468 957

42 40.2 82.1

1494 532 2026

45 16 61

1.8 199.6 (++) 55.3 (++)

73.5

1263

38.00

209.9 (++)

for instance e.g. notably to name but a few by way of illustration TOTAL ADVERBS

857 854 3 344 94 5 3 1 1304

29.5 8 0.4 0.3 0.1 111.9

609 259 77 4 3 2215

18.3 7.8 2.3 0.1 0.1 66.7

47.3 (++) 0.1 22.1 (− −) 0.9 0 208.3 (++)

TOTAL

3058

262.4

5959

179.4

279.2 (++)

Nouns example example examples *exemple1 *exampl *examle illustration

77 63 14 18

91.6 (++) 134 (++) 0.5

2.3

3.3

2 0.4 0.5

1.3 83.6 (++)

verbs illustrate

51 illustrate illustrates illustrated illustrating

exemplify

29 14 8 0 6

exemplify exemplifies exemplified exemplified *examplified exemplifying TOTAL VERBS

2 2 2 1 1 0

97 63 84 15 79 9 15 53

2

0

16.1 (− −) 0.6 2.6 17.7 (− −) 9 20.32 (− −) 0.4 2.1 20.09 (− −)

1.2

prepositions such as like TOTAL PREP. Adverbs for example for example *for exemple

Legend: (++) significantly more frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM; (− −) significantly less frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM

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Table 5.2 A comparison of exemplifiers based on the total number of exemplifiers used ICLE

BNC-AC-HUM

LogL

Abs.

%

Abs.

%

713 17 10 740

23.3 0.6 0.3 24.2

1285 77 18 1380

21.6 1.3 0.3 23.2

2.8 11.7 (− −) 0 0.9

51 6 56

1.7 0.2 1.8

259 79 338

4.4 1.3 5.7

47.7 (− −) 35 (− −) 77.3 (− −)

489 468 957

16 15.3 31.3

1494 532 2026

25 8.9 34

80 (− −) 70.7 (++) 4.5

for example for instance e.g. notably to name but a few by way of illustration TOTAL ADVERBS

854 344 94 5 3 1 1301

28 11.3 3 0.2 0.1 0 42.6

1263 609 259 77 4 3 2215

21.2 10.2 4.3 1.3 0.1 0 37.2

39 (++) 2 8.1 (− −) 36.9 (− −) 0.2 0.2 15.3 (++)

TOTAL

3054

100

5959

100

Nouns example illustration (BE) a case in point TOTAL NOUNS Verbs illustrate exemplify TOTAL VERBS Prepositions such as like TOTAL PREP. Adverbs

Legend: (++) significantly more frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM; (− −) significantly less frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM

in the BNC-AC-HUM, and that the four lexical items discussed above are largely responsible for this overuse (Table 5.1). Comparisons based on the total number of exemplifiers allow us to ask and answer different research questions. They give information about which lexical item(s) EFL learners prefer to use when they want to give an example, and in what proportions. Thus Table 5.2 shows that EFL learners select for example on 28 per cent of the occasions when they introduce an example, whereas native-speaker academics only use it to introduce 21 per cent of their examples. Both methods indicate that EFL learners overuse the preposition like and the adverbial for example. As shown in Table 5.3, however, the two methods may also give different results. The noun example appears to be overused in the ICLE when comparisons are based on the total number of running

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Two methods of comparing the use of exemplifiers

Lexical item

example illustration (be) a case in point

Comparison based on total number of running words

Comparison based on total number of exemplifiers

++ // //

// −− //

TOTAL NOUNS

++

//

illustrate exemplify

−− −−

−− −−

TOTAL VERBS

−−

−−

Such as Like

// ++

−− ++

TOTAL PREPOSITIONS

++

//

for example for instance e.g. notably to name but a few by way of illustration

++ ++ // −− // //

++ // // −− // //

TOTAL ADVERBS

++

++

Legend: ++ significantly more frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM; − − significantly less frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM; // no significant difference between the frequencies in the two corpora

words in each corpus. However, a comparison based on the total number of exemplifiers suggests that the learners choose the noun example about as often as professional academics when they want to introduce an example (23.3% vs. 21.6%). More lexical items are significantly underused when figures are based on the total number of exemplifiers. In addition to illustrate, exemplify and notably, the noun illustration and the preposition such as are selected proportionally less often by EFL learners than by professionals to introduce an example. This first broad picture of the use of exemplifiers in the ICLE points to EFL learners’ limited repertoire of lexical items used to serve this specific EAP function. This characteristic of learner writing is discussed in more detail in Section 5.2.1. By comparison with academics, EFL learners overuse the preposition like and underuse such as. Figure 5.2 shows the relative frequencies per 1,000,000 words of like and such as in four sub-corpora of the British National Corpus representing different ‘super genres’ (see Section 3.3): academic writing, fiction, newspaper texts and speech (BNC-SP) as well as in the ICLE. The

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2500 2000 1500 1000 500 0 Academic writing

News

Fiction

like

Speech

Learner writing

such as

freq. per million words

Figure 5.2 The use of the prepositions ‘like’ and ‘such as’ in different genres

50 45 40 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0 speech

Fiction

Learner writing

News

Academic writing

Figure 5.3 The use of the adverb ‘notably’ in different genres

preposition like is much more frequent than such as in speech3, fiction, news and learner writing but is less frequent in academic prose. By contrast, such as is more frequently used in academic prose. Learners’ use of these exemplificatory prepositions thus differs from academic expert writing, but resembles more informal genres such as speech. Learners’ underuse of the adverb notably in their academic writing is another illustration of the same point (Figure 5.3).

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for instance

for example 14%

20%

2% 7% 10% 59% 11% 77% Academic writing

News

Fiction

Speech

Figure 5.4 Distribution of the adverbials ‘for example’ and ‘for instance’ across genres in the BNC

A large proportion of EFL learner populations make repeated use of the word-like unit for instance. The use of this adverbial by native-speakers, however, differs significantly from that of for example, both in terms of frequency and register. Figure 5.4 shows that 77 per cent of all instances of for example in the BNC are found in the academic sub-corpus. However only 59 per cent of the occurrences of for instance appear in academic prose while 30 per cent are found in more informal genres such as speech and fiction. Lee and Swales (2006: 64) also showed that the use of these two adverbials differs across academic disciplines: for instance is more frequent in the social sciences and humanities while in natural sciences, technology and engineering, for example is strongly favoured to clarify a difficult or complex point through exemplification. Lack of register awareness manifests itself in a number of ways in learner academic writing. This will be the focus of Section 5.2.2. The phraseology of academic words is also a major source of difficulties to EFL learners. One of the main advantages of using a noun rather than the adverbials for example and for instance is that the use of a noun allows the writer to qualify the example with an adjective (see Section 4.2.2). However only 18 per cent of the adjective co-occurrents (types) of the noun example in the ICLE are significant co-occurrents in the BNC-AC-HUM (Table 5.4). A quarter of the adjective co-occurrents of example in the ICLE do not appear at all in the 100-million word British National Corpus (Table 5.5). A large proportion of these adjectives have been described by our

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Table 5.4 Significant adjective co-occurrents of the noun ‘example’ in the ICLE Adjective

freq.

Adjective

freq.

good extreme above clear striking simple Well-known

77 12 8 8 7 6 5

excellent typical classic interesting numerous outstanding

4 3 2 2 2 1

Table 5.5 Adjectives co-occurrents of the noun ‘example’ in ICLE not found in the BNC Adjective big warning absolute bright cruel present day evident frightening impermissible

freq.

Adjective

freq.

2 2 1 1 1 1 1 1 1

manipulative mere model opposite overstated polemic hair raising stirring upsetting

1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1

native-speaker informant as forming awkward co-occurrences with example as illustrated in the following sentences: 5.1. The story of Cinderella is one more impermissible example. Cinderella is a neglected child, and once again the step-family is the guilty party. (ICLE-DU) 5.2. For example a disliked politician will be shot through such a zoom as to expose his ugly bits. Which may most probably influence our feeling towards him. We all know thousands of such manipulative examples. (ICLE-PO) 5.3. This mere example proves that the ideal union people dream of is not yet a total reality: national conflicts are still at work, every nation defends its own interests before fighting for those of “the group” they joined. (ICLE-FR) 5.4. The opposite example is (the former?) USSR, where the union was imposed by a central power without real approbation of the states and against people’s will. (ICLE-FR) 5.5. Of course, that was an overstated example, extreme, so to speak. (ICLE-RU)

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Similarly, only 23 per cent of the verb types that are used with example in the ICLE are significant co-occurrents of the noun in the BNC-AC-HUM (see Table 5.6). Some 27 per cent of the verb co-occurrents (types) of the noun example in the ICLE do not appear with example in the whole BNC. They are listed in Table 5.7. Like adjective co-occurrents, several of these verbs form awkward co-occurrences with the noun example: 5.6. In a new society made with less inequality, less poverty and more social justice we would not find the same quantity of crime that we find in our society. I can make the example of Naples: here there is everyday an incredible lot of crimes. (ICLE-IT) Table 5.6 Significant verb co-occurrents of the noun ‘example’ in the ICLE Left co-occurrents

Right co-occurrents

Verb

freq.

Verb

freq.

be take give find show serve illustrate provide cite consider

162 36 28 10 10 4 3 2 2 1

be show illustrate concern suggest Suffice

119 31 15 2 1 1

TOTAL

258

TOTAL

169

Table 5.7 Verb co-occurrent types of the noun ‘example’ in ICLE not found in BNC Left co-occurrents Verb

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Right co-occurrents freq.

Verb

freq.

culminate into glide into state plaster with derive write help as appear

1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1

say reinforce criticize point out express

1 1 1 1 1

TOTAL

8

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The distribution of ‘example’ and ‘be’ in the ICLE and the BNC-AC-

ICLE BNC-AC-HUM

be + example

example + be

TOTAL

Rel. freq.

LogL

162 (57.7%) 139 (62.3%)

119 (42.3%) 84 (37.7%)

281 223

24.1 6.71

199.76 (++)

Table 5.9 The distribution of ‘there + BE + example’ in ICLE and the BNC-AC-HUM there + BE + example

ICLE BNC-AC-HUM

Abs. freq. 31 15

Rel. freq. 2.66 0.45

LogL

34.52 (++)

5.7. Their understanding of the outside world differs. It originates in dissimilar climate, life-style, social organization, political and economical stability of the country. To glide into an extreme example, unequality appears even between people living in towns and villages. (ICLE-CZ) 5.8. The rules of the road you have to learn to pass your driving license are plastered with examples of children who cross the road unexpectedly, running after a ball. (ICLE-GE) The copular be is the most frequent left and right co-occurrent of the noun example in learner writing. Textual sentence stems and rhemes with the verb be are significantly more frequent in learner writing than in professional academic writing (Table 5.8). These results differ markedly from those reported in Paquot (2008a) in which French, Spanish, Italian and German learners were shown to underuse stems and rhemes with the verb be. This difference may be explained by the fact that the reference corpus used for comparison in Paquot (2008a) was a collection of native-speaker student essays. Table 5.9 shows that the structure there + be + example is more frequently used in learner writing than in professional academic writing. It appears in all 10 learner corpora (i.e. irrespective of the learner’s mother tongue) as illustrated by the following sentence: 5.9. There is the example of Great Britain where a professional army costs less than, for example, the French army based on conscription. (ICLE-RU)

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In professional academic writing, the verb take is mainly used in sentence-initial exemplificatory infinitive clauses with the noun example (Example 5.10). This pattern is very infrequent in ICLE. EFL learners prefer to use the verb take in active structures introduced by the personal pronoun I (Example 5.11) or in first person plural imperative sentences (Example 5.12). 5.10. To take one example, at the beginning of the project seven committees were established, each consisting of about six people, to investigate one of a range of competing architectural possibilities. (BNC-AC-HUM) 5.11. I can take the example of the ‘Société Générale de Belgique’ which is directed by ‘Suez’. (ICLE-FR) 5.12. Let’s take the example of painting. (ICLE-FR) As illustrated by Examples 5.13 and 5.14, learners often use the verb have in the same structures as take to introduce an example. The imperative sentence, however, was judged to be awkward by our native-speaker informant. 5.13. Let us have an example — an extract out of the famous Figaro’s soliloquy: There is a liberty of the press in Madrid now, so that I can write about anything I like, providing I will have it checked by two or three censors and an condition that I will not write against the government and religion. (ICLE-CZ) 5.14. I have a good example in my family. (ICLE-PO) Interestingly, the verb have and the first person plural imperative let’s are not significant left co-occurrents of example in the BNC-AC but they are in the BNC-SP corpus of spoken language. The verb have is often used in speech with an inclusive we as subject (Example 5.15); let’s is typically used with the verb take + example (Example 5.16). 5.15. Er in relation to existing employment sites er and Mr Laycock referred to National Power, erm there we have an example of the attitude that the the council is taking towards the the re-use of employment sites. (BNC-SP) 5.16. Let’s take the example of a cooker. (BNC-SP) The verb give is the most significant co-occurrent of the noun example in the BNC-SP. It is used in questions and first person plural imperative sentences (Examples 5.17 and 5.18), two patterns that are not found in the BNC-ACHUM despite the fact that the verb is also a significant co-occurrent of

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example in academic prose. By contrast, first person plural imperative sentences with the verb give do appear in the ICLE (Example 5.19).4 5.17. Can you give an example when you say that the law is designed? (BNC-SP) 5.18. Let me give you some examples. (BNC-SP) 5.19. Let me give you one example – appaling shots from the war in ex-Yugoslavia that we can see nearly every day. (ICLE-CZ) In summary, verb co-occurrents of the noun example provide further evidence for the genre-bound nature of phrasemes: the preferred phraseological environment of the noun differs in academic writing and speech (see Biber et al. 1999; 2004; Luzón Marco, 2000). Results suggest that EFL learners sometimes select co-occurrences that are more typical of speech, which can be interpreted as further indication of their lack of register awareness. Differences in phraseological or lexico-grammatical preferences are often revealed by patterns of overuse and underuse of word forms. Thus, the different forms of the verbs illustrate and exemplify are not all underused in learner writing. Table 5.1 above shows that the two verbs are underused in their –ed form only. This underuse corresponds to an underuse of the passive constructions BE illustrated by/in (Example 5.20) and BE exemplified by/in (Example 5.21), the past participle exemplified following a noun phrase (Example 5.22) and the patterns as illustrated/exemplified by/in (Example 5.23): 5.20. The contrast between the conditions on the coast and in the interior is illustrated by the climatic statistics for two stations less than 30 km (18.5 miles) apart. (BNC-AC-HUM) 5.21. The association of this material with the clerk is clearly exemplified by Chaucer’s Wife of Bath’s fifth husband, the clerk Jankyn, who, in the Wife of Bath’s Prologue, reads antifeminist material to her from his book Valerie and Theofraste. (BNC-AC-HUM) 5.22. Piaget’s claim that thinking is a kind of internalized action, exemplified in the assimilation-accommodation theory of infant learning mentioned above, is really a global assumption in search of some refined, detailed and testable expression. (BNC-AC-HUM) 5.23. He assumed, without argument, that science, as exemplified by physics, is superior to forms of knowledge that do not share its methodological characteristics. (BNC-AC-HUM)

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The verb illustrate is more often used with human subjects (11.76%) in learner writing, and more specifically with the personal pronoun I: 5.24. I would like to illustrate that by means of some examples which, as you will see, are very diverse; . . . (ICLE-DU) 5.25. In the worst cases people decide to suicide. I can illustrate that by a real example. (ICLE-CZ) It is also frequently used in sentence-initial infinitive clauses (13.72%): 5.26. To illustrate the truth of this, one has only to mention people’s disappointment when realizing how little value has the time spent at university. (ICLE-SP) 5.27. To illustrate this point, it would be interesting to compare our situation with the U.S.A.’s. (ICLE-FR) As in professional academic writing, the noun case in point is very rarely used in learner writing. When used, however, it sometimes appears in lexico-grammatical patterns that are not found in expert academic writing, e.g. in an infinitive clause with the verb take (Example 5.28) or determined by a definite article and followed by the verb be and a that-clause (Example 5.29). 5.28. However, wars always break out for economical reasons; For example, the first world war, to take a case in point, did not start because the murder of archduke Frank Ferdinand, heir of Autro-Hungary; that was only the straw that broke the camel’s back. (ICLE-SP) 5.29. Professional observers see some even deeper danger in the emerging situation. A great number of children spend more and more time watching television. They take into consideration the behaviour patterns of film stars, they want to be like them. The case in point is that little children learn how to smoke how to drink how to be cunning and clever and get round the adults. Film stars are usually very attractive and it’s not a surprise that children want to follow them. (ICLE-RU) EFL learners’ phraseological and lexico-grammatical specificities will be discussed in detail in Section 5.2.3 below. EFL learners may also experience difficulty with the meaning of single words and phrasemes. For example, they sometimes use the abbreviation i.e. instead of e.g. as an exemplificatory discourse marker (Examples 5.30

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to 5.32). The abbreviation i.e., however, is a synonym of ‘that is’ used to reformulate by paraphrasing or clarifying, and not an exemplifier at all. 5.30. The states mostly tend to solve their politic problems in a peaceful way (*i.e. [e.g.] the split of Czech federation or the unification of Germany). (ICLE-CZ) 5.31. One of the examples that makes this point is related to children’s toys, because nowadays children play with technological toys (*i.e.: [e.g.] video games), and these toys do not let the children develop their imagination and, in many cases, they are so inactive that playing with these toys does not permit physical exercise. (ICLE-SP) 5.32. It might seem absurd, but many progressive social changes (*i.e. [e.g.] an increase of individual liberty) may lead to further increase of crime. (ICLE-RU) Learners also sometimes use as in lieu of the complex preposition such as (Examples 5.33 to 5.37). It should be noted, however, that this erroneous use is more frequently found in learner populations with Romance mother tongue backgrounds. 5.33. Thus soldiers learned mostly bad habits *as [such as] smoking, drinking (if possible) and being lazy in their leisure time. (ICLE-CZ) 5.34. In addition to the familiar subjects *as [such as] reading, writing and mathematics, time should be reserved for making children conscious of the fact that there is more to life than the things we see. (ICLE-DU) 5.35. There should be particular institutions for those who are mentally alienated *as [such as] the rapists, others for the young people, etc. (ICLE-FR) 5.36. In this essay I would like to show how, in my opinion, crime is caused by a predisposition of the individuals and how, of course, other factors *as [such as] society, culture and politics can influence this natural inclination. (ICLE-IT) 5.37. Another proof will be the role that imagination plays in all the Arts *as [such as] Literature, Music and Painting. (ICLE-SP) As illustrated in Example 5.38, the adverb namely is also sometimes misused by EFL learners who use it instead of notably or another exemplifier. 5.38. This new wave of revolting trivial events is all the more worrying since it is linked to a rise of the small delinquance, implying a generalized climate of terror and a total mistrust of the citizens towards the police forces and the law, both accused of all vices and *namely [(most) notably] of being too lax with those evils. (ICLE-FR)

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Pour donner des exemples

for instance, for example, such as, like namely (c' est-à-dire) above all (surtout) http://page sperso-orange fr/frat. st.paul/BACK itde Survie.pdf

Example: for example, for instance, just as, in particular, namely, one example, such as, to illustrate http://fr.wikibooks.org/wiki/utilisateur:Jean-Francois_Gagnon/Anglais:Connective_words

Figure 5.5

The treatment of ‘namely’ on websites devoted to English connectors

This confusion is relatively common, which is not surprising as it is even found on websites supposed to help learners master English connectors (Figure 5.5). More generally, namely is very often misused in learner writing and it is not always clear what learners mean when they use this adverb: 5.39. Because the campus consists of modern buildings, built closely together, it is no more than a ten minute’s walk to get where you need to be for lectures and seminars. All the academic facilities are ?namely located on the main campus. (ICLE-DU) 5.40. Why, then, so many people object to gay marriages and, at the same time, yearn for equality? It is ?namely just equality what gay marriages are about, isn’t it? (ICLE-FI) 5.41. The efforts made by the firms are obvious. They ?namely create replacement products: they replace the gas in the aerosols and so we have ozone-friendly aerosols, . . . (ICLE-FR) 5.42. Reluctance to eventually join The Common Market is ?namely caused by fear, disbelieves, inferiority complex, short-sightedness or even nationalistic and xenophobic tendencies. (ICLE-PO) More examples of semantic misuse are illustrated and discussed in Section 5.2.4. Another explanation for the general overuse of the function of exemplification in learner writing may be that exemplifiers are repeatedly used when they are superfluous, redundant or even when other rhetorical functions should be made explicit. In Example 5.43, the logical relation between the two sentences is a causal link that is left implicit while an unnecessary exemplifier is used: 5.43. I described there only some examples from the great number of criminal offences. After some years many of those criminals will be set free because of their

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relatively mild punishment. They had for example youthful age. (Youthful age – by the way in contrast to the punishment of 16 years old boys in our country, who got off with the light punishment, in England were recently sentenced two 10 years old boys for murder of a 3 years old boy to the lifelong punishment!) (ICLE-CZ) Section 5.2.5 will focus on the unnecessary use of lexical items that serve rhetorical or organizational functions as well as on learners’ tendency to clutter up their texts with too many logical devices. EFL learners’ use of exemplifiers also differs from that of expert writers with respect to positioning. A sentence-initial position for the adverbials for example and for instance is clearly favoured in the ICLE, compared to the BNC-AC-HUM: 5.44. But there are actually a number of things we all can do that make a difference. For example, there ought to be information about different ways to save electricity. (ICLE-SW) 5.45. There were a lot of wars due to the religion. For instance, England has always been divided according to the kind of religion in which a person believed. (ICLE-SP) The two adverbials are also repeatedly found at the end of a sentence in the learner subcorpora (7.14% of the occurrences of for example and 8.4% of the occurrences of for instance), although this position is rare in academic professional writing (1.6% for for example; 1.3% for for instance): 5.46. Let us have a good look at television for example. (ICLE-PO) 5.47. They only want an easy to operate camera, a Single Use Camera for instance. (ICLE-DU) Aspects of sentence position are dealt with in Section 5.2.5. In Section 4.4, I argued that Academic Keyword List (AKL) lexical items and their phraseological patterns should be taught to EFL learners. Learner corpus data support this claim as all the AKL words that are used to give examples in academic prose present one or more learner-specific difficulties. The adverb notably and the abbreviation e.g. are semantically misused; the adverbials for example and for instance are predominantly used in sentence-initial position; and the noun example and the verbs illustrate and exemplify are used in learner-specific phraseological patterns. It was also argued that the pedagogical relevance of non-AKL items – the preposition

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like, the nouns illustration and case in point and the expressions to name but a few and by way of illustration – depended on whether learners already used these exemplifiers and how they used them. The analysis of the ICLE corpus suggests that: – A word of caution is needed against excessive reliance on the preposition like; – The noun illustration should be specifically taught to upper-intermediate and advanced learners as it is underused in the ICLE; – The specific lexico-grammatical patterns of case in point should also be taught as this phraseme is repeatedly used in ‘unidiomatic’ patterns. The pedagogical implications of learner corpus-based findings will be further considered in Chapter 6.

5.2. Academic vocabulary and general interlanguage features A comparison of words that serve the rhetorical functions of ‘giving examples’, ‘expressing cause and effect’, ‘comparing and contrasting’, ‘expressing a concession’ and ‘reformulating: paraphrasing and clarifying’ in learner and expert academic writing has made it possible to identify six specific areas of where learner English varies from native-speaker academic English. Section 5.2.1 focuses on learners’ limited lexical repertoire by examining aspects of over- and underuse. In Section 5.2.2, the characteristics of learner’s lack of register awareness are presented. Section 5.2.3 explores the type of phraseological and lexico-grammatical patterns that are found in most learner sub-corpora. Section 5.2.4 discusses patterns of semantic misuse of connectors and abstract nouns. Learners’ tendency to clutter their texts with unnecessary connectives is the focus of Section 5.2.5 and Section 5.2.6 illustrates their preference for placing connectors at the beginning of sentences.

5.2.1. Limited lexical repertoire Several studies based on one or more ICLE subcorpora have argued that ‘these EFL writers are not equipped with the type of lexical knowledge necessary for the type of writing task they are undertaking’ (Petch-Tyson, 1999: 60). An analysis of learners’ use of potential academic words from the

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Academic Keyword List (AKL) supports this view. Table 5.10 shows that almost 50 per cent of the words in the AKL are underused in the ICLE, a percentage that rises to 52.1 per cent for nouns and 56.3 per cent for adverbs. By contrast, the proportion of words in the AKL that are overused in learner academic writing is only 21.4 per cent . The largest percentages of overused items are found in nouns and in the ‘other’ category which includes prepositions, conjunctions, determiners, etc. Table 5.11 gives examples of overused and underused AKL words in the ICLE. It could be argued that ‘learner usage tends to amplify the high frequencies and diminish the low ones’ (Lorenz 1999b: 59). For example, overused items such as the nouns idea and problem, the verbs be and become and the adjectives difficult and important are very frequent words in general English (relative frequencies of more than 200 occurrences per million words in the whole BNC). Conversely, underused items such as the nouns hypothesis and validity, the verbs exemplify and advocate, the adverbs conversely and ultimately and the prepositions as opposed to and in the light of are much less frequent in English (relative frequencies of less than 30 occurrences per million words in the whole BNC). The picture, however, appears to be more complex than Lorenz’s quote suggests. Not all high frequencies are amplified in EFL learner writing. Many AKL words that appear with a relative frequency of more than 100 occurrences per million words in the whole BNC are underused in the ICLE, e.g. the nouns argument, difference and effect, the verbs argue and explain, the adjectives likely and significant and the adverbs generally and particularly (in bold in Table 5.11). Key function words such as between, in, by, and of are quite representative of the nominal style of academic texts, where 60 per cent of all noun phrases have a modifier (Biber, 2006). However, these highly frequent prepositions are underused in the ICLE, a fact that can be related to EFL learners’ tendency to avoid prepositional noun phrase postmodification (Aarts and Granger, 1998; Meunier, 2000: 279). Table 5.10 The distribution of AKL words in the ICLE

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overused

no statistical difference

underused

nouns verbs adjectives adverbs other

86 [24.2%] 40 [17.2%] 34 [18.9%] 16 [18.4%] 21 [28.0%]

84 [23.7%] 93 [39.9%] 59 [32.8%] 22 [25.3%] 21 [28.0%]

185 [52.1%] 100 [42.9%] 87 [48.3%] 49 [56.3%] 33 [44.0%]

TOTAL

199 [21.4%]

277 [29.8%]

454 [48.8%]

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Table 5.11 Examples of AKL words which are overused and underused in the ICLE overused

underused

nouns

advantage, aim, benefit, change, choice, conclusion, consequence, degree, disadvantage, example, fact, idea, influence, possibility, problem, reality, reason, risk, solution, stress

addition, argument, assumption, basis, bias, comparison, concept, contrast, criterion, difference, effect, emphasis, evidence, extent, form, hypothesis, issue, outcome, perspective, position, scope, sense, summary, theme, theory, validity

verbs

aim, allow, avoid, be, become, cause, choose, concern, consider, consist, contribute, create, deal, depend, develop, exist, improve, increase, influence, participate, prove, solve, study, treat, use

adopt, advocate, argue, assert, assess, assume, cite, comprise, conduct, contrast, define, derive, describe, emphasise, enhance, ensure, examine, exemplify, explain, highlight, indicate, note, propose, reflect, reveal, specify, suggest, view, yield

adjectives

common, different, difficult, important, interesting, main, necessary, obvious, possible, practical, real, special, true, useful

adequate, appropriate, comprehensive, critical, detailed, explicit, extensive, inherent, likely, major, misleading, parallel, particular, prime, relative, representative, significant, similar, subsequent, substantial, unlikely

adverbs

also, consequently, especially, extremely, however, mainly, more, moreover, often, only, secondly, successfully, therefore

adequately, conversely, effectively, essentially, generally, hence, increasingly, largely, notably, originally, particularly, potentially, previously, primarily, readily, relatively, similarly, specifically, subsequently, ultimately

other

according to, because, due to, during, each, for, less, many, or, same, several, some, than, this

although, an, as opposed to, between, by, despite, from, given that, in, in relation to, in response to, in terms of, in the light of, including, its, latter, of, prior to, provided, rather than, subject to, the, to, unlike, upon, which

The preposition despite is underused, while its much less frequent synonym, the complex preposition in spite of, is overused in learner writing (Figure 5.6), irrespective of genre. In addition, words such as the noun disadvantage, the verbs participate and solve, and the adverbs consequently and moreover (underlined in Table 5.11) are overused although they appear with frequencies of less than 50 per million words in the BNC. The amplification of a restricted set of low frequency words in learner writing may be partly explained by teaching-induced factors. Words such as consequently, moreover and secondly usually appear in the long and

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250 200 150 100 50 0 Academic writing

News

Fiction

despite

Speech

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in spite of

Figure 5.6 The use of ‘despite’ and ‘in spite of’ in different genres

undifferentiated lists of connectors provided in EFL/EAP teaching materials (see Section 6.1). This situation may be compounded by problems of semantic misuse as will be discussed in Section 5.2.4. The underuse of some frequent, but semantically specialized, words probably stems from learners’ tendency to rely on all-purpose, general, and vague words where more precise vocabulary should be used (Granger and Rayson, 1998; Petch-Tyson, 1999). Another tentative explanation may be that EFL learners do not amplify any high frequencies words except those that are common in speech. As argued by Baayen et al. (2006), ‘the complexity of the frequency variable has been underestimated’ and it may be that more emphasis should be placed on the explanatory potential of spoken frequency counts. Underused words such as argument, issue, assume, indicate, appropriate, and particularly are quite frequent in general English (as represented by the whole BNC), but their frequencies are significantly less when the conversation component is analysed separately. In Section 5.1, it was shown that, although they generally overuse exemplifiers, EFL learners make little use of a number of EAP-specific lexical devices such as the verbs illustrate and exemplify or the adverb notably. They rely instead on a restricted lexical repertoire mainly composed of the adverbials for example and for instance, the noun example and the prepositions like and such as. The same conclusion holds for learners’ use of cause and effect lexical items, which is compared with that of expert writers in Appendix 1. Broadly speaking, learners overuse logical links signifying cause and effect in their argumentative essays. This overuse does not, however, affect all grammatical categories. When corpus comparisons are based on the total

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Table 5.12 Two ways of comparing the use of cause and effect markers in the ICLE and the BNC

nouns verbs adjectives adverbs prepositions conjunctions

Absolute frequency / total number of words

Absolute frequency / total number of ‘cause and effect’ markers

// // // ++ ++ ++

−− −− // // ++ ++

Legend: ++ significantly more frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM; − − significantly less frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM; // no significant difference between the frequencies in the two corpora

number of running words in each corpus, the overuse seems to be generally attributable to adverbs, prepositions and conjunctions. The categories of nouns, verbs and adjectives do not display significant patterns of over- or underuse. By contrast, when frequencies are compared to the total number of cause and effect lexical items, only prepositions and conjunctions are significantly overused, while nouns and verbs are underused (Table 5.12). This means that, compared to expert writers, EFL learners prefer to use prepositions, conjunctions and, to a lesser extent, adverbs to express a cause or an effect, and tend to avoid nouns and verbs. Table 5.13 shows that, even though EFL learners prefer to use prepositions, conjunctions and adverbs to express cause and effect, not all individual connectors are overused in learner writing. The overuse of conjunctions largely stems from learners’ marked preference for because, which represents 19.9 per cent of all cause and effect markers in the ICLE. Lorenz (1999b) examined the use of causal links in essays written by 16-to-18-year-old German learners and described the marked overuse of the conjunction because as ‘wild-card use’. He argued that ‘if a linguistic element is used as an all-purpose wild card, that usage is bound to include a number of instances of over-extension. In other words, it can be expected that learners may disregard target-language restrictions which are not that obvious, or even accounted for in the standard grammars, but which are nevertheless observed by the native speakers. Such “simplification” is one of the most frequently cited features of learner language’ (Lorenz, 1999b: 60–1). Several of the overused lexical items are massively overused in learner writing. The adverb so represents 11.5 per cent of the ‘cause and effect’

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Table 5.13 The over- and underuse by EFL learners of specific devices to express cause and effect (based on Appendix 1) overuse

no statistical difference

2 [19%] nouns

root, consequence 1 [6%] cause

4 [37%]

5 [45%]

cause, factor, reason, result

source, origin, effect, outcome, implication

3 [18%]

13 [76%]

bring about, contribute to, lead to

generate, give rise to, induce, prompt, stem, provoke, result in, yield, arise, derive, emerge, follow, trigger

1 [50%]

1 [50%]

verbs

adjectives

0

responsible (for) 4 [40%]

adverbs

consequently, as a result, as a consequence, so 3 [27%]

prepositions

because of, due to, thanks to

2 [40%] conjunctions TOTAL

2 [20%] therefore, in consequence

consequent

accordingly, thus, hence, thereby 2 [18%]

as a result of, owing to, as a consequence of, on the grounds of, in consequence of, on account of

in view of, in (the) light of

0

3 [60%] for, so that, on the grounds that

16 [29%]

TOTAL

11 [100%]

17 [100%]

2 [100%]

4 [40%]

6 [54%]

because, this/that is why 12 [21%]

underuse

28 [50%]

10 [100%]

11 [100%]

5 [100%] 56 [100%]

lexical items used by learners while it only accounts for 7.2 per cent of those in expert writing. Other examples of ‘lexical teddy bears’ (Hasselgren, 1994) or ‘pet’ discourse markers (Tankó, 2004) are the prepositions because of and due to. In their study of expressions of doubt and certainty, Hyland and Milton (1997) reported similar findings: Cantonese learners used a more limited range of epistemic modifiers, with the ten most frequently used items (will, may, think, would, always, usually, know, in fact, actually, and probably) accounting for 75 per cent of the total.5

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On the other hand, 50 per cent of the lexical devices which serve to express cause or effect in expert writing are underused by learner writers. While underuse was found in all grammatical categories, the proportions varied significantly. Nouns and verbs constitute a large proportion of the possible ways of expressing a cause or an effect in academic prose, but 64.3 per cent of them are underused in the ICLE (e.g. the nouns source, effect and implication; the verbs induce, result in, yield, arise, emerge and stem from). As will be discussed in Section 6.1, this may be explained by teachinginduced factors, as lexical cohesion has been largely neglected in teaching materials (textbooks and especially grammars), where the focus has generally been on adverbial connectors. An analysis of the lexical items which serve to express a comparison or a contrast in academic prose shows that the rate of underuse is also quite high in this function. Table 5.14 shows that almost half of all comparison and contrast markers are underused. As with cause and effect lexical items, the degree of underuse varies significantly. Nouns and adjectives (e.g. resemblance, similarity, contrast, similar, distinct, and unlike) account for 59 per cent of all underused lexical items in the comparison and contrast category. The rate of overuse is relatively low, but once again overused items include words and phrasemes that are more frequent in speech (e.g. look like, in the same way) (see Section 5.2.2) as well as commonly misused expressions such as on the contrary (see Section 5.2.4). Unlike the cause and effect lexical items, overused comparison and contrast word do not compensate for the underused ones. Comparisons and contrasts are generally underused in learner writing. In summary, EFL learners tend to rely heavily on a restricted set of greatly overused adverbs, prepositions or conjunctions to establish textual cohesion. Logical links can also be provided by nouns (cf. the concept of ‘labelling’ explained in Section 1.3), verbs and adjectives, which often account for a large proportion of the lexical strategies used to serve a specific rhetorical or organizational function in expert academic prose. These cohesive devices, however, do not seem to be readily accessible to upper-intermediate/advanced EFL learners. This is not particularly surprising, as lexical cohesion has generally been neglected in teaching materials. These findings are not restricted to EFL learners: although they may become fluent in English conversational discourse, English as a Second Language (ESL) speakers have also been reported to ‘continue to have a restricted repertoire of syntactic and lexical features common in the written academic genre’ (Hinkel, 2003: 1066). Tables 5.13 and 5.14 provide useful

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TOTAL

4 [19%]

as … as,

11 [13.9%]

1 [25%]

0

like, by/in comparison with + erroneous expressions

2 [22%]

+ erroneous expressions

in the same way, on the other hand, on the one hand, on the contrary,

same, different

2 [11%]

look like, compare

2 [22%]

5 [33%]

0

12 [67%]

31 [39.2%]

in the same way as/ that, compared with/to, CONJ compared with/to 37 [46.8%]

0

as, while6 whereas 3 [75%]

2 [66.67%]

unlike, as opposed to, as against, versus

4 [44%]

similarly, likewise, correspondingly, by/in comparison, conversely, by/in contrast, distinctively

7 [33%]

similar, analogous, common, comparable, identical, parallel, contrasting, differing, distinct, distinctive, distinguishable, unlike

parallel, contrast

2 [22%]

resemblance, similarity, parallel, analogy, contrast, comparison, differentiation, distinction, the same, the reverse

10 [67%]

underuse

1 [33.33%]

in parallel with, in contrast to/with, contrary to

3 [33%]

analogously, differently, identically, parallely, reversely, contrariwise, by way of contrast, contrastingly, quite the contrary, comparatively

10 [48%]

alike, contrary, opposite, reverse

4 [22%]

resemble, correspond, differ, distinguish, differentiate

5 [56%]

parallelism, difference, distinctiveness, the contrary, the opposite

no statistical difference

overuse

79

4 [100%]

3 [100%]

9 [100%]

21 [100%]

18 [100%]

9 [100%]

15 [100%]

TOTAL

The over- and underuse by EFL learners of specific devices to express comparison and contrast (based on Appendix 2)

other expressions

conjunctions

prepositions

adverbs

adjectives

verbs

nouns

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information about learners’ particular needs. Section 6.3 will discuss how they can be used to inform pedagogical material. In this section, the breadth of EFL learners’ lexical repertoire has been examined in terms of the proportion of over- and underused AKL single words and mono-lexemic units used to perform specific rhetorical functions. In Section 5.2.3, it will be shown that the limited nature of EFL learners’ lexical repertoire also stems from a restricted use of the phrasemes and lexico-grammatical patterns typically found in expert academic prose. 5.2.2. Lack of register awareness Many learner corpus-based studies have reported on EFL learners’ lack of register awareness (e.g. Granger and Rayson, 1998; Lorenz, 1999b; Altenberg and Tapper, 1998; Meunier, 2000; Ädel, 2006). These studies, however, have often focused on learners with the same mother tongue background. The large-scale study undertaken here allows for a more systematic description of register awareness, by exploring the way EFL learners with different mother tongue backgrounds use academic vocabulary. In the ICLE, most rhetorical functions are characterized by the overuse of at least one lexical item that is more typical of speech than of expert writing (Table 5.15). Examples 5.48 to 5.52 illustrate overused lexical items that are more frequent in the BNC spoken component than in the BNC-ACHUM: the adverb so to express an effect, the adverb though to introduce a concession, the adverbial of course to express certainty, the stem I am going to talk about to introduce a new topic, and the adverbial all in all which is used to ‘show that you are considering every part of a situation’ (Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English (LDOCE4)). 5.48. Many people who are in this situation think that this is a waste of time: you lose an entire year. So they want to get rid of the military service. (ICLE-DU) 5.49. Spanish holds an important position in South America and increasingly so in the United States, too. According to Crystal it has little further potential ouside Spain, though. (ICLE-FI) 5.50. But practically everybody is able to dream. Of course, there are different people with different concepts of happiness, different thoughts and emotions. (ICLE-RU) 5.51. In this essay I am going to talk about the link between crime and politics; what I want to demostrate is that a good way of making politics can cut the roots to crime. (ICLE-IT)

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Table 5.15 Speech-like overused lexical items per rhetorical function Rhetorical function

Speech-like overused lexical item

Exemplification

like

Cause and effect

thanks to so because that/this is why

Comparison and contrast

look like like

Concession

the (sentence-final) adverb though

Adding information

sentence-initial and the adverb besides

Expressing personal opinion

I think to my mind from my point of view it seems to me

Expressing possibility and certainty

really of course absolutely maybe

Introducing topics and ideas

I would like to/want/am going to talk about thing by the way

Listing items

first of all

Reformulation: paraphrasing and clarifying Quoting and reporting

say

Summarizing and drawing conclusions

all in all

5.52. Thanks to them anyone willing to broaden his/her general knowledge of the world has an easy access to useful information. All in all, there are many ways in which mass media affect our approach to reality and they are, by no means, all positive or good for us. (ICLE-PO) Gilquin and Paquot (2008) examined the use of some of the lexical items listed in Table 5.15 in the ten learner corpora used here as well as in four L1 sub-corpora (Norwegian, Japanese, Chinese, and Turkish) from the second version of the International Corpus of Learner English (ICLEv2) (Granger et al., 2009). The corpus totalled around 1.5 million words.

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We compared the frequencies of speech-like lexical items in learner writing with their frequencies in the 10-million word spoken component (BNC-SP) and the 15-million word academic sub-corpus of the British National Corpus. Our findings support Lorenz’s (1999b: 64) statement that there is ‘mounting evidence that text-type sensitivity does indeed lie at the heart of the NS/NNS numerical contrast.’ They show that the relative frequency of these speech-like lexical items in learner writing is often situated between their frequency in academic prose and in speech (see the bar charts for maybe, I would like/want/am going to talk about, really, absolutely, definitely, by the way and though in Figure 5.7). However some of these items (so expressing effect, it seems to me, of course and certainly) are even more frequent in learner writing than in speech. The overuse of several of these speech-like lexical items has been highlighted in a number of studies focusing on specific L1 learner populations. For example, Chen (2006) reports on the overuse of besides in Taiwanese student writing; Lorenz (1999b) discusses the marked overuse of the conjunction because and the adverb so in German learner writing; French, Spanish and Swedish learners’ heavy reliance on I think to express their personal opinion is reported by Granger (1998b), Neff et al. (2007) and Aijmer (2002); Japanese, French and Swedish learners’ overuse of of course is highlighted by Narita and Sugiura (2006), Granger and Tyson (1996) and Altenberg and Tapper (1998). Using the ICLE, my results suggest that these features are often shared by a large proportion of the learners investigated, irrespective of their mother tongues, and are therefore likely to be developmental or teaching-induced. It remains to be seen, however, whether lack of register awareness is a typical feature of EFL learner writing or whether it is a more general characteristic of novice writing. This issue will be touched upon in Section 5.4. Different EFL learner populations, however, do not use speech-like lexical items similarly. Although all L1 learner populations overuse the adverb maybe when compared to the BNC-AC-HUM, Table 5.16 shows that relative frequencies differ widely across L1 populations. Another example is EFL learners’ use of I think, which is overused by all L1 learner populations while showing marked differences across learner L1 sub-corpora. As shown in Table 5.17, relative frequencies range from 17.29 occurrences per 100,000 words in the Polish learner sub-corpus (ICLE-PO) to 143.57 occurrences per 100,000 words in the Swedish one (ICLE-SW). This huge difference may be partly explained by L1 influence. Studies in contrastive rhetoric (e.g. Connor, 1996; Vassileva, 1998) have shown that features of writer visibility in academic prose may differ markedly across languages.

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Figure 5.7 The frequency of speech-like lexical items in expert academic writing, learner writing and speech (based on Gilquin and Paquot, 2008)

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48.18 38.34 35.13 32.88 32.28 31.21 24.74 20.34 16.37 13.26 1.93

++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++

Legend: ++ frequency significantly higher (p < 0.01) than in the BNC-AC-HUM

Table 5.17 The frequency of ‘I think’ in learner corpora relative freq. per 100,000 words ICLE-SW ICLE-IT ICLE-RU ICLE-CZ ICLE-FR ICLE-GE ICLE-SP ICLE-FI ICLE-DU ICLE-PO BNC-AC-HUM

143.57 134.06 121.13 101.7 94.61 72.11 66.59 55.87 51.77 17.79 6.14

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Legend: ++ frequency significantly higher (p < 0.01) than in the BNC-AC-HUM

5.2.3. The phraseology of academic vocabulary in learner writing In this section, I first present the major results of an analysis of recurrent word sequences in EFL learner writing. I focus on aspects of overand underuse of word sequences that include AKL words before discussing learner-specific clusters that are not found in professional academic prose. Learner writing is also typically recognizable by a whole range of cooccurrences that differ from academic prose in quantitative and qualitative

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terms. I illustrate this with a comparison of the co-occurrents of the noun conclusion in academic and learner writing and examine EFL learners’ phraseological infelicities and lexico-grammatical errors. An analysis of word sequences in EFL learner writing The results presented in this section are based on an analysis of 2-to-5 word sequences that are over- or underused in learner writing. The comparison between the ICLE and the BNC-AC-HUM was performed with the Keywords option of the software tool WST4. The results show that learner writing is characterized by a marked underuse of a large proportion of the 2-to-5 word sequences that include AKL words and that are typically used to serve specific rhetorical and/or organizational functions in academic prose. EFL learners rely instead on a restricted set of clusters which they massively overuse (e.g. for example, main reason, it depends, more and more, in order to, the problem is that). Granger (1998b) suggests that the use of these sequences ‘could be viewed as instances of what Dechert (1984: 227) calls “islands of reliability” or “fixed anchorage points”, i.e. prefabricated formulaic stretches of verbal behaviour whose linguistic and paralinguistic form and function need not be “worked upon”’ (Granger, 1998b: 156). This is also consistent with the author’s statement that ‘while the foreignsoundingness of learners’ productions has generally been related to a lack of prefabs, it can also be due to an excessive use of them’ (Granger, 1998b: 155). The foreign-soundingness of EFL learner writing also stems from learners’ overuse of AKL words in clusters that are not typical of the particular genre of academic prose but are more frequently used in speech or more informal types of writing (e.g. people claim that, I will discuss, from my point of view, because of the fact7). Table 5.18 shows that EFL learners overuse adjective + noun sequences with ‘nuclear’ adjectives (see Section 1.1.1) such as main (e.g. main reason, main cause, main problem), real (e.g. real problem, real value), important (e.g. important role, important question, important factor), great (e.g. great number, great importance), different (e.g. different points, different problems, different reasons) and big (e.g. big problem) to the detriment of more EAP-like phrasemes such as extensive use, crucial importance, central issue, significant number, integral part, lesser extent and wide variety. Similarly, they overuse adverb + adjective/adverb /conjunction sequences with highly frequent adverbs such as mainly (e.g. mainly because), quite (e.g. quite clear) and very (e.g. very important) but make little use of phrasemes such as readily available, relatively few, significantly different, almost entirely, closely associated, particularly interesting, more generally, highly significant and precisely because.

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in terms of, the absence of, the view that, extent to which, the implications of, an account of, a theory of, in relation to, an attempt to, closely associated with, a considerable degree, as distinct from, high degree of, high proportion of, it seems likely, various forms of, a concern with, to this extent, despite the fact, the hypothesis that, the issue of, this need not, at any rate, by reference to, in certain respects, were subject to, in his view, in view of, it was claimed, it follows that, by showing that, this suggests that, be ascribed to, when compared with, as noted above, is described in it may be that, may well have been, to the effect that, are likely to be, would seem to be, to the extent that, with the exception of, it does not follow, it seems likely that, in the presence of, the edge of the, it was difficult to, the immediate aftermath of, it is possible that, can be related to, similar to that of, the total number of, it is unlikely that, a wide variety of, in the absence of, to the advantage of, on the assumption that, as an attempt to, on the basis of, in the belief that, might have been expected, with the exception of, the extent to which, was by no means, in the presence of, no reason to suppose, with the result that, it would appear that, it is assumed that, may have been used

as a result, as a consequence, in my view, more and more, more or less, take into account, advantages and disadvantages, aim of this, pay attention to, as a conclusion, take into consideration, of great importance, it means that, affect our approach, people claim that, I will discuss, may say that, prevents us from, provides us with,

the problem is that, it is very difficult, the fact is that, is the fact that, it is also true, there are also people, a great number of, it is high time, it is obvious that, as much as possible, it is true that, to a great extent, because of the fact, to answer this question, in order to achieve, it is necessary for,

as in the case of, it has been suggested that, it could be argued that, in so far as they, it is more likely that, it is hardly surprising that, be defined in terms of, it is worth noting that, be explained in terms of

by contrast, in particular, was probably, a similar, the view, suggestion that, described as, suggested above, was effectively, still further, more generally, readily available, relatively few, more significantly, is ultimately, he concludes, on average, central issue, certain respects, radically different, consistent with, crucial importance, significantly different, extensive use, final analysis, they suggest, inferred from, listed above, general principles, inherent in, major source, particular attention, highly significant, by comparison, considerable degree, perhaps because, much emphasis, he cites, provide evidence, little evidence, central figure, in practice, reports that, allowing for, what appears, discussed in, may suggest, reported by, precisely because, crucial role, integral part, wide variety, they argued, partly because, somewhat different, almost entirely, he remarks, his method

for example, for instance, important to, main reason, opportunity of, therefore I, and therefore, have problems, are concerned, another important, mainly because, only because, quite clear, different reasons, totally different, different way, more difficult, great importance, very important, main cause, main problem, absolutely necessary, because I, negative consequences, real problem, great amount, good idea, I consider, great part, important part, big problem, best solution, allows us, conclusion I, different points, we can, can choose, it depends, good use, good example, real value, important question, important factor, I can, different problems

from my point of view, far as I am concerned, there are more and more, it is very difficult to, but it is true that, this is not the case, as a matter of fact, it is very important to, it is a fact that, one of the most important

Underused clusters

Examples of overused and underused clusters with AKL words Overused clusters

Table 5.18

2-word clusters

3-word clusters

4-word clusters

5-word

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The results also seem to support the widely held view that EFL learners’ academic writing is characterized by ‘firmer assertions, more authoritative tone and stronger writer commitments when compared with native speaker discourse’ (Hyland and Milton, 1997: 193) (see also Petch-Tyson, 1998; Lorenz, 1998; Neff et al., 2004a). EFL learners state propositions more forcefully and make a more overt persuasive effort: they overuse communicative phrasemes that serve as attitude markers (e.g. it is very difficult to, it is very important to) and boosters (e.g. but it is true that, it is a fact that, it is obvious that). By contrast, they underuse hedges such as it is (more) likely that, it may be that, it seems likely that, it is possible that, it is unlikely that, and it would appear that. Word sequences used as self mentions are also much more frequent in learner writing than in academic prose (Aijmer, 2002; De Cock, 2003; Ädel, 2006). Examples include therefore I, because I, I consider, we can, I can, in my view, I will discuss, provides us with, and from my point of view. Conversely, academic writers use more clusters with third person pronouns with an evidential function, e.g. he remarks, she cites, his method, they suggest, a difference which can be related to the more intertextual nature of professional academic texts. EFL learners also underuse a whole set of word sequences involving the –ed form of verbs, and more precisely, their past participle form. For example, they underuse the 2-word clusters described as, suggested above, inferred from, listed above, discussed in and reported by, the 3-word clusters closely associated with, it was claimed, be ascribed to, when compared with, as noted above, is described in; the 4-word clusters can be related to, might have been expected, it is assumed that, may have been used; and the 5-word clusters it has been suggested that, it could be argued that, be defined in terms of, and be explained in terms of. This is consistent with Granger and Paquot’s (2009b) finding that past participles are the most frequent verb forms in academic prose, but are highly underused in learner writing. Verbs may have similar frequencies as lemmas in learner writing and academic prose, but still display over- or underuse of some forms (Granger and Paquot, 2009b). Examples of AKL verbs following this pattern are differ and discuss. The lemmas do not differ significantly in their use. However, differ is underused in its –ing form while discuss is overused in its unmarked form (discuss) and underused in its –ed form. Similarly, some verbs are under- or overused as lemmas without this affecting all forms of the verb. For example, the lemma provide is underused in learner writing compared to expert writing, but an analysis of word forms indicates that this only applies to provided; use of other forms of the verb does not differ significantly in the two corpora. Table 5.19 shows that the picture can even be more complex: verb forms may be overused in some specific lexical bundles,

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Table 5.19 Clusters of words including AKL verbs which are over- and underused in learners’ writing, by comparison with expert academic writing Lemmas and their word forms

Overused clusters

Underused clusters

affect (++) affect (++) affects (++)

affect our, media affect, affect us, affects the, affect our approach, media affect our, mass media affect, affect our approach, media affect our approach, mass media affect our, affect our approach to reality, media affect our approach to

was affected, not affect the

allow (++) allowed (++)

allowed to, not allowed, are allowed, not allow, be allowed, allow them, it allows, allows us, are not allowed, are allowed to, not allowed to, allow them to, be allowed to, allows us to, are not allowed to

allow them, allowed him, by allowing, allow it, allows for, to allow, allowing for, allow that, which allowed, allowed him, to allow for

concern (++) concerning (++)

is concerned, are concerned, am concerned, concerned about, it concerns, concerning the, I am concerned, as I am concerned, far as I am concerned

was concerned, been concerned, concerned to, concerned with, we are concerned, been concerned with, was concerned with, concerned with the, is concerned with the

depend (++) depends (++) depending (++) depended (− −)

depends on, it depends, depending on, much depends, it depends on, depends on the, depending on the

depending upon, depended on, depended upon, will depend, depends upon the, depend upon the, will depend on

differ (//) differing (− −)

-

differed from, differs from the

discuss (//) discuss (++) discussed (− −)

will discuss, to discuss, I will discuss

was discussed, already discussed, and discussed, discussed below, in discussing, discussed in, discussed in chapter

tend (//) tend (++) tended (− −)

tend to, people tend, we tend, they tend, people tend to, we tend to, they tend to

they tended to, and tended to, has tended to, have tended to, tended to be

provide (− −-) provided (− −)

provides us, provide us, provide them, can provide, provide us with, provides us with, provide them with

might provide, provide the, provides that, provide an, provide evidence, to provide, provide a, provides an, provides a, was to provide, to provide an, to provide a

Legend: ++ significantly more frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM; − − significantly less frequent (p < 0.01) in ICLE than in BNC-AC-HUM; // no significant difference between the frequencies in the two corpora

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Table 5.20 Examples of overused clusters in learner writing Examples 2-word clusters

in sum, of course, in fact, is why, let us, I think, instead of, look at, we must, or maybe, really think, there are, my opinion, if you, but I, if we, there is, thanks to, we want, sure that, I believe, people say, people think, when I, said that, I agree, many things, no matter, means that, opinion is, I want, everybody knows, people often, let them, we look, I hope, at all, people believe, even worse, I really, so why, we think, people feel, we get, I guess, just imagine, think twice, quite sure, why we, I must, very serious, helps us

3-word clusters

in my opinion, in spite of, to sum up, first of all, I think that, in order to, I would like, that is why, on the contrary, I believe that, to my mind, we have to, all kinds of, I would say, we all know, people think that, if we want, it means that, by the way, a look at, on one hand, I am convinced, people believe that, I will try, I agree that, and of course, everybody knows that, many people think

4-word clusters

on the one hand, last but not least, I would like to, some people say that, we can say that, in this essay I, are more and more, I am sure that, there are a lot, it is impossible to, I don’t agree with, I want to say, but if we look, I am afraid that, it is easy to

5-word clusters

I do not think that, as a matter of fact, from my point of view, I would like to say, far as I am concerned, it seems to me that, I do not agree with, but at the same time, due to the fact that, I do not think so

while being underused in others. For example, the verb form concerned is overused in as I am concerned and concerned about but underused in been concerned with or we are concerned. Similarly, EFL learners overuse the sequences it allows and allows us to and underuse the EAP sequence allows for. A keyword analysis of recurrent word sequences is indispensable if we want to build up a full picture of all the possible lexical realizations of rhetorical functions in learner writing. It makes it possible to uncover a whole range of words and word sequences that are not typical of academic prose but which are nevertheless used by EFL learners to organize scientific discourse and build the argument of academic texts. Examples of learnerspecific sequences that do not include an AKL word are given in Table 5.20. They include: – word sequences that are more frequently used in speech, e.g. of course, I think that, there are a lot of (see Section 5.2.2); – sequences that are not used in English to establish the logical link intended by the EFL learner, e.g. on the other side (see Section 5.2.4 on semantic misuse); – sequences that exist in English but are very rare in all types of discourse, e.g. the sequence as far as I am concerned which is repeatedly used to express a personal opinion in the ICLE;

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– ‘unidiomatic’ sequences such as as a conclusion used as a textual phraseme to introduce a conclusion (see below for a co-occurrence analysis of the noun conclusion in the ICLE); – erroneous sequences such as in contrary, by the contrary, in the contrary, in contrary to that are used to express a contrast in EFL learner writing. EFL learners’ overuse of sequences that are rarely used by native-speakers (such as as far as I am concerned or last but not least) or ‘unidiomatic’ sequences (such as as a conclusion) may be partly explained by poor teaching materials and/or the influence of their mother tongue. For example, Les fiches essentielles du Baccalauréat en anglais (published in 2008 by Clairefontaine) give a list of linking words that French students are encouraged to use in the English test of the ‘Baccalauréat’ (the final secondary school examination which gives successful students the right to enter university) to ‘enrich their essay and give more clarity to their argumentation’. This includes as a conclusion but not in conclusion.8 The rare expression as far as I am concerned is also given as a key expression for voicing one’s own opinion. Preferred co-occurrences in EFL learner writing In Section 5.2.1, it was shown that EFL learners manifest a marked preference for a restricted set of single words and mono-lexemic phrasemes to express logical links. They also use learner-specific functional equivalents of these markers such as the sequence as a conclusion instead of in conclusion. This learner-specific word combination represents 39.2 per cent of the concluding textual phrasemes involving the noun conclusion in the ICLE. In a longitudinal study of German learners’ use of the noun conclusion, Mukherjee and Rohrback (2006) commented that the sequence as a conclusion is gaining ground in learner writing to the extent that it is even more frequent than in conclusion in the more recent corpus they use: Interestingly, the most frequent phrase is no longer in conclusion, but as a conclusion. This certainly is a problematical development because in conclusion is much more frequent and idiomatic than as a conclusion, the latter being notoriously overused by German learners of English at university level as well. (Mukherjee and Rohrback, 2006: 224) This development may be related to the increasing use of the internet for study purposes and of the type of teaching materials available on this channel, as discussed above. Another example of a learner-specific logical

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In conclusion 59 As a conclusion 40 As conclusion 3

I

37 (36%)

would

21 (20.6%)

like to

161

say emphasize tell 13 (12.7%) mention speak about reiterate quote

6 2 1 1 1 1 1

Figure 5.8 Phraseological cascades with ‘in conclusion’ and learner-specific equivalent sequences

marker is on the other side which they use instead of on the other hand to compare and contrast (see Section 5.2.4 below for more details of learners’ use of on the other side). In Section 4.2.1, it was shown that mono-lexemic phrasemes such as for example have their own phraseological patterns in academic prose. However, these do not seem to be readily available to EFL learners, who tend to produce their own phraseological ‘cascades’, ‘collocational patterns which extend from a node to a collocate and on again to another node (in other words, chains of shared collocates)’ (Gledhill, 2000: 212).9 Figure 5.8 shows that the textual phraseme in conclusion (or one of its learner-specific functional equivalents) is very often directly followed by the personal pronoun I in the ICLE. This is consistent with Ädel’s (2006) finding that personal metadiscourse, i.e. metadiscourse items that refer explicitly to the writer and/or reader, serves a wide range of rhetorical functions (including exemplifying, arguing, anticipating the reader’s reaction, and concluding) in Swedish learner writing. The sequence in conclusion, I is generally followed by the modal would to produce the word sequence in conclusion, I would, which, in turn, very often introduces the sequence like to. The sequence in conclusion, I would like to either introduces the verb say or another verb of saying such as tell or mention. EFL learners use AKL nouns and verbs in different lexico-grammatical or phraseological patterns than professional writers. This has already been illustrated by learners’ use of the noun example and the verbs illustrate and exemplify in Section 5.1. Another example is learners’ use of the noun conclusion. Table 5.21 lists the verb co-occurrents of the noun conclusion in the ICLE. Some 30.8 per cent of verb co-occurrent types are significant cooccurrents of the noun conclusion in the BNC-AC . However almost half of the verb co-occurrent types (46.2%) used in the ICLE do not appear in the BNC-AC. When tokens are analysed, the percentage of verb co-occurrents

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add up to apply approach arrive at bring bring sb to come to *come into confirm contain draw *draw up end with escape express find gather get give have influence jump to lead to

1 1 1 5 1 2 52 1 1 1 25 1 1 1 1 2 1 1 1 1 1 2 4

Freq. in ICLE

− − − ** − − ** − ** − ** − − ** ** − − − − − − ** **

Statistically significant co-occurrent in BNC-AC x x x √ x √ √ x √ x √ x x √ √ x x √ √ √ √ √ √

Appearance in the BNC-AC

Verb co-occurrents of the noun conclusion in the ICLE

Verb + conclusion as object

Table 5.21

emerge arise contain be come need bring sb to

conclusion as subject + verb

1 1 1 23 1 1 1

Freq. in ICLE

** − − ** − − −

Significant co-occurrent in BNC-AC √ √ X √ X √ X

Appearance in the BNC-AC

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1 1 11 1 1 1 3 1 128 tokens (32 types)

− − − * − − ** −

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TOTAL

leave sb with look for make point to put put forward reach write as

x x √ √ x x √ x TOTAL

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that are significant co-occurrents of the noun conclusion in the BNC-AC rises to 75.8 per cent as several of the verbs are repeatedly used in learner writing (e.g. come to and draw). Conversely, the percentage of verb co-occurrents that are not found in the BNC-AC falls to 12 per cent as ‘non-native’ co-occurrences are rarely repeated. EFL learners use the collocations arrive at + conclusion, come to + conclusion, draw + conclusion, lead + conclusion and reach + conclusion. However, they do not always use them in native-like lexico-grammatical patterns. In Examples 5.53 and 5.54, the indefinite article a is used instead of the definite article the, which is always used in the BNC-AC when the conclusion (underlined in the examples) is introduced by a that-clause. In Example 5.55, the frequent phraseme lead to the conclusion that is used with the personal pronoun us, a pattern which is very rarely found in academic prose. In the context of EFL teaching/learning, these findings support Nesselhauf’s (2005: 25) argument that collocations should not be viewed as involving only two lexemes; other elements closely associated with them should also be taught. 5.53. However, when we consider all the pros and cons of fast food we will certainly arrive at a conclusion that it is not an ideal way of eating. (ICLE-PO) 5.54. And taking into consideration that Marx was a materialist we can come to a conclusion that he himself would be attracted by the advantages of television, and religion for him would remain the opium of the masses. (ICLE-RU) 5.55. To sums up, all I have mentioned before lead us to the conclusion that if our lifes were a little ‘easier’ and we wouldn’t be dominated by a world that is constantly changing, due to new techniques and industrialization, we could enjoy doing things as dream and imagine more frequently. (ICLE-SP) The collocation escape + conclusion appears in two phraseological patterns in academic prose: ‘it is difficult to escape the conclusion that’ and ‘we cannot escape the conclusion that’. The single occurrence of the collocation that appears in the ICLE is used in the native-like lexico-grammatical pattern ‘cannot escape the conclusion that’ but its subject is a nominal phrase headed by the noun evaluation: 5.56 However, a more objective evaluation of the problem cannot escape the conclusion that, drug use and abuse have occurred in all civilizations all over the world, and that it is the criminalization of drugs that has created a much heavier burden on society. (ICLE-DU)

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In the collocation express + conclusion, the verb express has acquired a semi-technical sense and means ‘make something public’. It is mainly used in legal discourse and thus conveys a rather formal tone as illustrated in Example 5.57. Its single occurrence in the ICLE can be qualified as ‘nonnative like’ as it appears with the first person singular pronoun I as subject and the possessive determiner my (Example 5.58). It may be hypothesized that the learner who wrote this sentence has been influenced by the nativelike co-occurrence ‘express one’s opinion/view’. 5.57. The Divisional Court expressed its conclusion in the following terms: . . . (BNC-AC-HUM) 5.58. Finally, I wanted to express my conclusions. (ICLE-SP) There are many other examples of EFL learners’ attempts at using nativelike collocations, which result in crude approximations. In Example 5.59, the phrasal verb draw up is used in place of draw and in Example 5.60, the preposition into replaces to, and no article is used in an attempt to produce the native-speaker sequence ‘came to the conclusion that’. 5.59. Finally, a conclusion can be drawn up emphasizing our first statement, that is: technology, science and industrialization have not killed dreams and imagination. (ICLE-SP) 5.60. The woman started to think about the price of progress and came into conclusion that automation causes more problems than it solves. (ICLE-PO) In Example 5.61, the verb put forward is used with the noun conclusion. This verb is commonly used with the abstract nouns plan and proposal, two nouns that, like conclusion, combine with the verb draw to form collocations. However, the verb put forward is not used with the noun conclusion in English (see Figure 5.9). Howarth (1996; 1998) refers to this phenomenon as a collocational overlap, i.e. a set of nouns which have partially shared collocates (see also Lennon, 1996).

plan draw proposal put forward conclusion

Figure 5.9 Collocational overlap

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5.61. Without putting forward premature conclusions, we can nevertheless notice that a certain importance is granted to them. (ICLE-FR) The semantic incongruity of the co-occurrence ‘put forward a conclusion’ is made apparent by contrasting the definitions of put forward and conclusion. The verb put forward means ‘to suggest an idea, explanation etc, especially one that other people later consider and discuss’ (LDOCE4) while a conclusion is ‘something you decide after considering all the information you have’ (LDOCE4). Thus, a conclusion can hardly be put forward as it is supposed to be more than a suggestion and the result of serious consideration and discussion. As already pointed out by Nesselhauf (2005), EFL learners also produce deviant verb + noun free combinations. The noun conclusion enters into combinations that are not found in academic prose and which are semantically awkward: 5.62. Looking for the conclusion I would like to say that every person is individual and each has his or her own character. (ICLE-RU) 5.63. Having considered the various aspects of capitalism a conclusion must be gathered: the system cannot provide for the basic needs of the population; consequently it needs to take steps in order to prevent combativity which will endangered their interests. (ICLE-SP) The same remark can be made about several adjective + conclusion co-occurrences (Example 5.64). More importantly, however, adjective co-occurrents of the noun conclusion in learner writing are not the most typical ones in academic prose even though a large proportion of them occur in the BNC-AC (see Table 5.22). The first ten most significant adjective co-occurrents of the noun conclusion in the BNC-AC are general, logical, tentative, similar, foregone, main, firm, different, opposite, and definite. None of these appear in learner writing except for logical. This reveals learners’ weak sense of native speakers’ ‘preferred ways of saying things’. 5.64. Looking at this idea from the Polish point of view, also brings double standard conclusions. (ICLE-PO) The phraseology of EFL learner writing is also characterized by a number of lexico-grammatical infelicities and errors. Learners sometimes use the preposition about after the abstract noun account (e.g. an account *about a murder (ICLE-RU)) or the preposition of instead of for after the noun demand (e.g. the demand *of raw material (ICLE-GE)). They also use

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Table 5.22 Adjective co-occurrents of the noun conclusion in the ICLE Adjectives

Frequency

Significant co-occurrents of conclusion in the BNC-AC

Appearance in the BNC-AC

absolute awful certain clear clever concrete depressing double standard fair

1 1 3 1 1 1 1 1 1

−

√

− ** ** − − ** − −

x √ √ x √ √ x √

false final frightening interesting liberal logical long-searched for obvious overall only own personal premature private radical right sad same satisfactory satisfying sensible successful terrifying understated unequivocal wrong

1 5 1 1 1 4 1 1 1 1 4 1 1 1 1 2 1 2 2 1 2 1 1 1 1 1

− ** − − − ** − ** ** − ** − − − − − − ** ** − − ** − − − −

√ √ x √ x √ x √ √ √ √ √ √ x √ √ x √ √ x √ √ x x √ √

TOTAL

51 tokens (35 types)

Legend: ** significant co-occurrent in the BNC-AC (p < .01); − not significant co-occurrents in the BNC-AC; √ the co-occurrent appears in the BNC-AC; x the co-occurrent is not found in the BNC-AC.

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a to-infinitive structure after the noun possibility instead of an –ing form (e.g. the possibility *to learn a good job (ICLE-FR)). Other examples of colligational errors include suggest *to, related *with, attempt *of, and discuss *about. Example 5.65 illustrates learners’ confusion between the prepositions despite and in spite of, which results in the blend *despite of (cf. Dechert and Lennon, 1989): 5.65. Despite *of [Despite] the absence of such professionalism our nation overcame fascists. (ICLE-RU) Learners also have a tendency to use the impersonal pronoun it in the subject position after as: 5.66. It is a matter of fact that these ‘things’ cannot be bought and sold like shares on the stockmarket. Luckily, I would say because otherwise only the rich would be able to posses them as *it is [as is] unfortunately the case with many products in other areas of living. (ICLE-GE) 5.67. Because of the ambition for the power, their rivalry made them hold continuous battles, as *it was [as was] the case of Catholics and Protestants. (ICLE-SP) Another source of error is the adjective same which is sometimes preceded by the indefinite article in the ICLE: 5.68. The negative image of feminism makes it twice as hard for women to rise above it than it would be if men were facing *a [the] same kind of dilemma. (ICLE-FI) 5.69. When different people read *a [the] same book they have probably various imaginations while reading. (ICLE-CZ) It should be noted that very few of these errors are widespread in learner writing and that some of them may be partly L1-induced. For example, French learners use the erroneous colligation discuss *about as a translation of the French discuter de (Granger and Paquot, 2009b). 5.2.4. Semantic misuse In Section 5.2.1, the function of comparing and contrasting was shown to be generally underused in learner writing. An analysis of individual lexical

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items, however, reveals that the adverbials on the contrary and on the other hand are overused in the ICLE. As Lorenz (1999b: 72) has demonstrated, overuse is often accompanied by patterns of non-native usage. EFL learners’ semantic misuse of the phraseme on the contrary has already been reported for different learner populations: In Hong Kong, we are all familiar with students who use ‘on the contrary’ for ‘however/on the other hand’, thus adding an unintended ‘corrective’ force to the merely ‘contrastive’ function sought. (Crewe, 1990: 317) Granger and Tyson (1996) report the same conceptual problems for French learners. Lake (2004) states that a large proportion of EAP non-native speakers who use on the contrary do so inappropriately. This is confirmed by our corpus-based analysis of EFL learners from different mother tongue backgrounds (see also Celce-Murcia and Larsen-Freeman, 1999: 534-535). EFL learners typically use on the contrary erroneously (instead of a contrastive discourse marker such as on the other hand or by contrast) to contrast the qualities of two different subjects (underlined in Examples 5.70 to 5.72). Thus, in Example 5.70, the fact that Onasis had everything is contrasted with the fact that Raskolnikov had nothing and the phraseme by contrast would have been more appropriate. 5.70. Raskolnikov differs from Onasis, of course. Onasis had everything but he wanted to have more. Raskolnikov, *on the contrary [by contrast], had nothing. (ICLE-RU) 5.71. The young like crazy driving, overtaking and leading on the roads. Sports cars are created for this use and this may be the reason why their price is so high and use is expensive. *On the contrary [By contrast], station wagons are not expensive in maintenance. The main users of this kind of vehicles are families. (ICLE-PO) 5.72. For instance, most Americans have moved to the USA from different countries as immigrants. *On the contrary [By contrast], Europeans have lived in their countries for hundreds of years. (ICLE-FI) The semantic inappropriacy of on the contrary in EFL learner writing has been attributed to teaching practices. Teaching materials often provide lists of connectors in which the adverbial on the contrary is described as a phrase of contrast, that is, as an equivalent alternative to on the other hand, by contrast, etc. (cf. Crewe, 1990). For pedagogical purposes, Lake (2004)

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proposes a checklist of contextual features that should be present when on the contrary is employed: As for the implications for learners, it now becomes possible to consult a checklist of contextual features that should be present in order for on the contrary to be appropriate: one subject; two contrasting qualities; one positive statement and one negative statement open to similar interpretations; an argument, either genuinely present or implied, to which the two statements, adjacent to the phrase both form a refutation. Such a checklist may be simplistic in that it does not cover all the possible lexico-syntactical environments in which the phrase might be encountered; but as a guideline for production, it ought to prove a useful starting point from which EAP teachers can devise their own practice materials. (Lake, 2004: 142) Lake (2004) rules out the possibility of an L1 influence on EFL learners’ semantic misuse of on the contrary on the basis that over 70 per cent of international students from widely different mother tongue backgrounds produced two distinctly separate L1-equivalent items in a cloze test in which they were required to insert on the contrary or on the other hand and provide an equivalent phrase for both adverbials. It is, however, probable that misguided teaching practices and L1 interact here. The L1 equivalent forms to on the contrary and on the other hand may be characterized by different patterns of usage and thus be the source of negative transfer. Granger and Tyson (1996), for example, argued that French learners’ overuse and misuse of on the contrary is probably due to an over-extension of the semantic properties of the French ‘au contraire’, which can be used to express both a concessive and an antithetic link. The potential influence of the first language on French learners’ use of on the contrary is discussed in Section 5.3 below. Lake (2004) considers EFL learners’ misuse of on the contrary to be ‘something of an exception’ and writes that ‘in the EAP context, such functional phrases [connectives] are usually familiar to learners from an early stage, and do not pose great problems of usage’ (Lake, 2004: 137). This view, however, is over-optimistic and is clearly not reflected in our corpus-based learner data. In Section 5.1, EFL learners’ inappropriate use of the abbreviation i.e. (in lieu of e.g.), the preposition as (instead of such as) and the

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adverb namely was discussed. Other examples of semantically misused lexical items in learner writing include on the other hand, on the other side, moreover, besides, and even if. Field and Yip (1992: 25) reported that on the other hand is frequently used by Cantonese speakers to make an additional point, with no implied contrast. They suggested that this semantic misuse might be L1 induced: the Chinese equivalent of on the other hand is often misused by novice L1 writers, who use it to mean ‘another side or aspect’. Although L1 influence may play a part in Hong Kong Chinese students’ inappropriate use of the adverbial, erroneous uses of on the other hand are found in most ICLE sub-corpora, which suggests that there are other contributing factors to this learner difficulty. The following extracts are examples of the use of on the other hand in the ICLE where it would have been more appropriate to use no connector or an additive marker: 5.73. I strongly believe that there is still a place for dreaming and imagination in our modern society. [P]10 Firstly, where there is a child, there are always dreams and imagination. Everybody knows that children like inventing funny stories and amusing plays by using their wide fantasy. This is one reason why children always bring happiness and awake the adults’ childish part. *On the other hand, fantasy is [also] a useful mean used by teachers in primary schools to teach school subjects to their little students. So, it is children who keep dreams and imagination alive! (ICLE-IT) 5.74. The re-introduction of the death penalty may have positive sides, too. Criminality would be limited, because criminals would be afraid of the severe punishment. [P] This might be an illusion, because *on the other hand [ø] the death penalty develops violence and is incompatible with the basic laws of humanity. (ICLE-GE) 5.75. The function of punishment is to show that crimes are not acceptable or that they can solve any problems. *On the other hand the aim of punishments is [also] to make the criminals obey the laws and show example to other’s so that they will not follow the bad example and commit the same crime. (ICLE-FI) The word combination on the other side sometimes appears in the ICLE in places where a contrast seems to be the logical link intended by EFL learners. This does not occur in academic prose. It is illustrated in the following examples: 5.76. Poland cannot reply with isolation as the unification still remains the best solution to its problems. On the other side, all countries should understand

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that history and its consequences cannot divide the continent. The successful process of unification should be carried out with respect to nations’ rights and without special privileges given to the powerful. (ICLE-PO) 5.77. Another big problem is our environment. There is pollution wherever you look. We can no longer enjoy the sun in summer because of the hole in the ozone layer. This hole is caused by technical improvements in the last decades. But on the other side it is sometimes hard to live without car or aerosols. (ICLE-GE) 5.78. Europe 92 means well a loss of identity since we’ll be no longer Belgians, Italians, English ... but Europeans. But on the other side we will form a new nation with new hopes, new ideas . . . (ICLE-FR) There is also some confusion between the conjunctions even if and even though in EFL learner writing. Learners often use even if in lieu of even though to introduce a concession: 5.79. However,*even if [even though] I agree that the American public school system is defective, home schooling to me is no real alternative, as I feel that parents are not the best teachers for their own children. (ICLE-GE) 5.80. We must forget about refrigerators containing CFC-11 and CFC-12, *even if [even though] they are cheaper. (ICLE-PO) 5.81. We are as much a part of Europe as any other country here, *even if [even though] we are not in the European Union. (ICLE-SW) Even if should be used to introduce a condition, not a concession. Compare: 5.82. Even if these descriptions are valid they still leave open a number of questions, particularly why the same mechanisms do not operate with girls. 5.83. Even though these descriptions are valid they still leave open a number of questions, particularly why the same mechanisms do not operate with girls. In the second sentence, the writer knows and accepts that the descriptions are valid. In the first sentence, he or she does not. Semantic misuse has often been discussed in the literature in relation to logical connectives. However, EFL learners also experience difficulty with the semantic properties of other types of cohesive devices, and more specifically, labels, i.e. abstract nouns such as issue, argument, and claim that are inherently unspecific and require lexical realization in their co-text, either beforehand or afterwards (Flowerdew, 2006). In addition to phraseological and lexico-grammatical infelicities, EFL learners’ use of labels is

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characterized by semantic infelicity or lack of semantic precision. Learners, for example, use the noun problem as an ‘all purpose wild card’ (cf. Lorenz, 1999b) in lieu of more specific nouns such as issue or question as illustrated in the following sentences: 5.84. This short discussion of the main points linked to the problem [issue] of capital punishment leads to the final question. (ICLE-PO) 5.85. The most important question concerning genetic engineering is the problem [that] of gen manipulation with humans. (ICLE-GE) 5.86. If we are aware of the fact that such time-tables are very common for people living in a modern society like ours, the problem [question] of the place of imagination and dreaming is not even worth examining. Industrialisation has transformed dreaming into a waste of time which is now “cleverly” linked to money. (ICLE-FR) The noun argument also seems to cause difficulty to EFL learners. In Example 5.87, the rather unidiomatic expression ‘familiar arguments about’ should be rephrased as ‘widespread or popular beliefs about’. In Example 5.88, the sentences that follow the label argument would be better described as ‘reasons’ why Big Tobacco did not depart from prepared statements. 5.87. Female participation in making decisions concerning war and peace, economy and environmental protection would be to the benefit of all. However it will not be possible until males re-think and, hopefully, reject familiar arguments [widespread/popular beliefs] about women being unreliable, irrational and dependent on instincts. (ICLE-PO) 5.88. There are two main arguments [?reasons] that help us understand why Big Tobacco stuck to their statements for so long. [P] First, the companies feared the consequences that would follow a confession. They feared that there was going to be even more legislation and regulation if they would ever admit to lying. . . . . (ICLE-DU) Other problematic labels include, among many others, aspect and issue. In Example 5.89, another aspect introduces a second example (about the unemployed and housewives) of the fact that you are judged by what you do rather than by what you are, contrasting it with the first example (about physicists and mathematicians). In Example 5.90, in certain aspects stands for in some respects and the aspect of money probably refers to the ‘money issue’ or the ‘money question’ in Example 5.91.

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5.89. Our modern western society puts a lot of pressure on people as far as work is concerned. Your job is your “trademark”. Or, in other words, you are judged by what you do rather than by what you are. Sad, but true. For example, according to popular opinion you must be very intelligent if you are a physicist or a mathematician. And another aspect is that [?by contrast,] the unemployed or housewives are sometimes treated as social outcasts. (ICLE-GE) 5.90. Actually, bits of information from the remotest parts of the globe reach us in an instant. Human beings can eventually feel as one great family, but only *in certain aspects [in some respects], for as far as real good relations among countries are concerned, it is still a matter of distant future. (ICLE-PO) 5.91. A legend exists that money was invented by the devil to tempt the mankind. The aspect [?issue/question] of money includes the problem of equality. There were and there are different ideas about making all people equal, because it was considered that this would lead to common happiness. (ICLE-RU) In Example 5.92, it is not quite clear what her issues refer to and in Example 5.93, issue most probably stands for ‘product’: 5.92. Uta Ranke-Heinemann, the most famous woman in the field of Catholic theology, tries to provide answers to them. Her issues [?] lies on the verge of theology, philosophy and first of all, religion. She is employed in defining the relation between faith and the mind. (ICLE-PO) 5.93. The picture I draw from my dear old houseman admittedly is nothing but a mere cliché, a hyperbolic issue [product] of my vivid imagination. (ICLE-GE) 5.2.5. Chains of connective devices EFL learners’ texts are sometimes characterized by the use of too many connective devices (Crewe, 1990; Chen, 2006; Narita and Sugiura, 2006). The following text is an excerpt from an essay written by a French-speaking EFL learner. Each sentence contains at least one connective device – typically an adverbial connector or a sentence stem – which is often found in sentence-initial position (see Section 5.2.6 below). 5.94. [1] But what about these prestigious institutions today? [2] To caricature them rapidly one could say that universities consist of courses given by professors (competent in their fields) in front of a silent audience who is conscientiously taking notes. [3] So one can wonder if a university degree really prepare students for real world and what his value is nowadays. [4] I think it is true that lectures in themselves are theoretical. [5] Firstly because students spend

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most of their time sitting in big classrooms which do not allow practical exercises but only ex cathedra lectures. [6] Secondly because the subjects of the lectures are theoretical. [7] For example: during a general methodology course (which, we think, could be more practical) different theories as Krashen’s, Lado’s are studied in detail but practical points are hardly ever considered. [8] However is it true that this formation does not prepare students for real world? [9] I am of the opinion that the answer is no. [10] First I think that university degrees are theoretical on purpose (as opposed to high schools which are more practical.). [11] The reason is that, thanks to the theoretical background they have learned, university students are able to build up their own way to achieve their aim. [12] Moreover they are also able to adapt or to modify their method according to the situation. [13] To take the example of a teacher again, I could say that a teacher in front of a classroom does not think about particular methodological theories again but that he has created his own methodology. [14] Secondly, I think that academic studies develop a critical mind. [15] The students are indeed trained to analyse pieces of information coming from different horizons from a critical point of view, which means that they have to dissect them, to confront them and then to be able to pass judgment on them. [16] That is the way they should create a personal opinion for themselves. [17] Nevertheless, I do not want to go too far. [18] I really think that theory is essential but I am convinced that practice should also be present. [19] Let’s take the example of a student in economics who has his certificate in his pocket and proudly goes working in a big firm for the first time. [20] I would compare this business man to a gentleman who perfectly knows the highway code and who knows how to start and how to run through the gears but who finds himself in the center of Paris at the peak hours the first time he really drives! [21] By this example, I want to show that theory must always be accompagnied by practical applications, which is not often the case at university. [22] I think that this is a fully justified criticism against this institution. Some EFL learners use many logical connectives between sentences simply to indicate to the reader that they are adding another point (e.g. firstly, secondly, for example, first, moreover, to take the example of). Several of these connectors are superfluous and sometimes wrongly used (e.g. moreover in sentence [12], indeed in sentence [15]). Crewe (1990) attributed EFL learners’ massive overuse of connective devices to their attempt at imposing ‘surface logicality on a piece of writing where no deep logicality exists’ (Crewe, 1990: 320). He added that ‘over-use at best clutters up the text unnecessarily, and at worst causes the thread of the argument to zigzag about, as each connective points it in a different direction’ (ibid: 324). The following excerpt from an EFL learners’ essay is a good example

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of EFL learners’ use of logical connectors as ‘stylistic enhancers’, i.e. ‘words or expressions that may be sprinkled over a text in order to give it an “educated” or “academic” look’ (Crewe, 1990: 316) but whose presence will not make the text coherent. 5.95. Furthermore, Hobbes is a stern determinist. He regards man, like nature, as subject to the chain of cause and effect. Therefore a concept like ‘free will’ is impossible. Hobbes even considers people as artificial creatures, not belonging to nature, because they are not able to live together in harmony, something which animals like bees and ants are capable of, because they are natural. Of course, these ideas were as much an insult to man’s estimation of himself as Darwin’s allegation, two hundred years later, that our ancestors used to live in trees. As a consequence, Hobbes was accused of being an atheist and forbidden to publish any more books. (ICLE-DU) As Aijmer (2001) showed in a study of Swedish EFL student writing, learners use I think to make their claims more persuasive rather than to express a tentative degree of commitment. They often use I think or an equivalent expression (e.g. I am of the opinion that, I am convinced that) when it is communicatively unnecessary in the flow of argumentation. For example, Sentence [18] in Example 5.94 could be rephrased as ‘Theory is essential but practice should also be present’. The sequence I think it is true in Sentence [4] corresponds to what Aijmer (2001) described as a ‘rhetorical overstatement’, which the author regards as typical of non-native-speaker argumentative essays. The clusters To me, I think and as far as I am concerned, I think that in Examples 5.96 and 5.97 respectively are two more instances of rhetorical overstatement. 5.96. To me I think technology and imagination are very much interrelated, and then on the other hand I understand that they also can be seen as separate. (ICLE-SW) 5.97. I agree with George Orwell, because as far as I am concerned I think that in every country there are few people which are rich and many people which are poor. (ICLE-IT) The pedagogical implication of these findings is that, ‘important as these links are, learning when not to use them is as important as learning when to do so. In other words, students need to be taught that excessive use of linking devices, one for almost every sentence, can lead to prose that sounds both artificial and mechanical’ (Zamel, 1983: 27).

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5.2.6. Sentence position Linking adverbials occur in different sentence positions. They often occur initially, as does however in Example 5.98. They can also occur in a medial position, i.e. within the sentence, often immediately after the subject, as shown in Example 5.99. The final position is also possible, but is more typical of speech as illustrated in Example 5.100. 5.98.

In practice, the Red Army units did nothing to conciliate the Ukrainian Left or the peasants. Agriculture was brutally collectivized and no concessions were made in the use of the Ukrainian language and culture. However, Denikin’s White armies counter-attacked and after seven months the Red Army was obliged to withdraw. (BNC-AC-HUM) 5.99. Coysevox’s bust of Lebrun repeats – again with a certain restraint – the general outlines of Bernini’s bust of Louis XIV. The face, however, shows a realism and subtlety of characterization that are Coysevox’s own. (BNCAC-HUM) 5.100. It’d be worth asking him first, though. (BNC-SP) EFL learners’ marked preference for the sentence-initial position has been reported in various studies focusing on one L1 learner populations (Field and Yip, 1992; Lorenz, 1999b; Zhang, 2000; Narita and Sugiura, 2006). Granger and Tyson (1996: 24) commented that ‘it is likely that this tendency for learners to place connectors in initial position is not languagespecific’. Our analysis of connectors in the ICLE supports this hypothesis. Table 5.23 shows that the total proportion of sentence-initial connectors in learner writing is much higher than that found in academic prose (13.2% compared to 6%). Examples include the preposition despite which appears in sentence-initial position in 52 per cent of its occurrences in the ICLE but only in 34.5 per cent in the BNC-AC-HUM (see Example 5.101), and sentence-initial due to which is repeatedly used in learner writing but hardly ever occurs in academic prose (Example 5.102). 5.101.

Despite its commercial character Christmas still means a lot to me. (ICLE-FI) 5.102. Due to these developments the production expanded enormously, which meant that a greater number of people could be fed. (ICLE-DU)

Another example is the adverb therefore which often appears in sentenceinitial position in the ICLE but is not often used in that position in the BNC-AC-HUM:

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Table 5.23 The frequency of sentence-initial position of connectors in the BNC-AC-HUM and the ICLE ICLE

BNC-AC-HUM

S-I

Total freq.

%

Rel. freq. pmw

S-I

Total freq.

%

Rel. freq. pmw

although and as a result as a result of as far as X is concerned because because of consequently despite due to even if even though for example for instance furthermore however in spite of moreover nevertheless on the contrary on the other hand so thanks to therefore thus

263 1456 71 24 96

522 32,236 103 79 167

50.4 4.5 68.9 30.4 57.5

225.6 1249 60.9 20.6 82.4

676 1374 65 22 31

2,276 91,306 102 194 59

29.7 1.5 63.7 11.3 52.5

203.5 413.6 19.6 6.6 9

107 62 103 50 29 83 46 235 93 113 673 47 255 170 92

2,493 530 179 96 246 274 127 854 344 127 1,128 106 292 250 164

4.3 11.7 57.5 52 11.8 30.3 36.2 27.5 27 96.6 59.7 44.3 87.3 68 56.1

91.8 53.2 88.4 42.9 24.9 71.2 39.5 201.6 79.8 96.9 577.4 40 218.8 145.8 78.9

151 46 60 235 3 94 28 233 86 176 882 42 365 392 48

2,207 599 143 681 195 451 248 1263 609 217 3,353 159 495 676 95

6.79 7.67 42 34.5 1.5 20.8 11.3 18.4 14.1 81.1 26.3 26.4 73.7 58 50.5

45.4 13.8 18 70.7 0.9 28.2 8.4 70 25.9 53 265.5 12.6 109.9 118 14.4

228

418

54.5

195.6

155

372

41.7

46.7

805 68 340 221

1,436 199 689 446

56 34.2 49.3 49.5

690 58.3 291.7 189.6

675 5 75 756

1,894 35 1,412 1,767

35.6 14.3 5.3 42.8

203.2 1.5 22.5 227.6

TOTAL

5,730

43,505

13.2

4,916.24

6,675

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5.103. Scientific research as well as individual observations prove that eating habits have a great impact on the condition of the human body and soul and, consequently, on rest, sleeping and even dreams. Therefore people should pay more attention to what they consume. (ICLE-PO) These findings provide evidence for EFL learners’ lack of knowledge of the preferred syntactic positioning of connectors in English.11 This lack has often been attributed to L2 writing instruction. Flowerdew (1993) argued that teaching materials do not provide students with authentic descriptions of syntactic patterns of words. He showed that, contrary to what is often

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taught in course books, the adverbial connector then rarely occurs in sentence-initial position, but is more usually found in a medial position. Similarly, Milton (1999: 225) discussed the problematic aspects of teaching connectors by means of lists of undifferentiated items, and suggested that one way in which instruction may skew EFL learners’ style is ‘by the presentation of these expressions as if they occurred in only sentence-initial position’ (see also Narita and Sugiura, 2006). Thus, EFL learners’ tendency to place connectors in unmarked sentence-initial position seems to be reinforced by teaching (see Granger, 2004: 135). Unmarkedness provides another possible explanation for EFL learners’ massive overuse of sentence-initial connectors. Conrad (1999) studied variation in the use of linking adverbials across registers. She showed that, in both conversation and academic prose, the highest percentage of linking adverbials appear in sentence-initial position and concluded that ‘initial position seems the unmarked position for linking adverbials’ (Conrad, 1999:13) (see also Biber et al., 1999 and Quirk et al., 1985). EFL learners seem to use the unmarked sentence-initial position as a safe bet. Contrary to our expectations, the proportion of sentence-initial because is lower in learner writing than in professional writing. However, sentenceinitial because is significantly more frequent (relative frequencies of 9.18 in learner writing and 4.54 in academic prose). It is also used to serve different functions in learner writing. In academic prose, sentence-initial becauseclauses are attached to a main clause. As shown in the following examples, they introduce the cause of something that is described in the main clause: 5.104. Because these changes were worldwide, Europe’s history is inseparable from world history between 1880 and 1945. (BNC-AC-HUM) 5.105. Because the death-rate was high, marriages were usually short-term. (BNCAC-HUM) Unlike expert writers, EFL learners sometimes use sentence-initial because to introduce new information in independent segments and give the cause of something that was referred to in the previous sentence: 5.106. The crime rate would also strongly reduce and this is of course the main objective of all this measures. Because everybody wants to live in a safe society. (ICLE-DU) 5.107. To directly try to change people with ‘experience of life’ would, at best, only be to win Pyrrhic-victories, compared to this effective investment. Because deep inside every man’s heart lies the ‘Indian’-insight that we are only borrowing the earth from our children. (ICLE-SW)

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5.108. In my opinion it is useful only for them, for their trial. Because their sorrow is found as the extenuating circumstance. (ICLE-CZ) EFL learners share this characteristic with ESL writers. In a comparison of strategies for conjunction in spoken English and English as a Second Language (ESL) writing, Schleppegrell (1996) found that students who had spent most of their lives in the US and learnt English primarily through oral interaction, transferred conjunction strategies from speech to essay writing. They employed both an ‘afterthought’ because (Altenberg, 1984) to add information in independent segments, and other types of speech-like clause-combining strategies. Conrad (1999) reported that, in academic prose, most linking adverbials are placed in sentence-initial or medial position. Three types of medial position are particularly frequent (Conrad, 1999: 14–15): 1. Linking adverbials which occur immediately after the subject as illustrated in Example 5.99 above. 2. Linking adverbials which occur between an auxiliary and the main verb, such as: All estimates of population size must therefore allow for a large measure of conjecture, a fact stressed by all reputable modern historians who have worked on this intractable subject. (BNC-AC-HUM) 3. Linking adverbials which occur between the main verb and its complement, e.g.: It is difficult to believe therefore that one of these mosaics was not influenced by the other. (BNC-AC-HUM) A medial position for connectors is quite typical of academic prose. However, it is clearly less favoured by EFL learners. As indicated above, teaching materials tend to focus on sentence-initial position, and EFL learners probably feel unsafe about other syntactic positionings for connectors. Table 5.24 shows that several connectors are also repeatedly used in sentence-final position in the ICLE, which is quite uncommon in the BNC-AC-HUM. The final position is frequent in conversation, but rare in academic prose. Conrad (1999) found that three highly frequent items – then, anyway and though — account for the relatively high proportion of sentence-final linking adverbials in native-speaker’s conversation. She argued that these linking adverbials are commonly found in sentence-final position as they serve important interpersonal functions: Adverbials in conversation, in addition to showing a link with previous discourse, can also play important roles in the interpersonal interaction

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Table 5.24 Sentence-final position of connectors in the ICLE and the BNC-ACHUM ICLE

anyway for example for instance indeed of course then though

BNC-AC-HUM

S-F

Tot. freq.

%

Rel. freq.

S-F

Tot. freq.

%

Rel. freq.

25 63 31 15 34 35 11

132 854 344 257 750 1054 256

18.9 7.4 9.0 5.8 4.5 3.3 4.3

2.1 5.4 2.7 1.3 2.9 3.0 0.9

20 20 8 18 14 17 7

71 1263 609 1413 863 3062 178

28.2 1.6 1.3 1.3 1.6 0.5 0.9

0.6 0.6 0.2 0.5 0.4 0.5 0.2

that takes place. These roles are often particularly noticeable for the common adverbials in final position. (. . . ) [A] final though often occurs when speakers are disagreeing or giving negative responses, final anyway is often associated with expressions of doubt or confusion, and (. . . ) then typically indicates that a speaker is making an inteference (sic) based on another speaker’s utterance. The placement of these adverbials in final position is consistent with previous corpus analysis of conversation that has found that elements with particular interpersonal importance are often placed at the end of a clause (. . . ). It may be, then, that in some cases in conversation there is a tension between placing the linking adverbial at the beginning of the clause, due to its linking function, and at the end of the clause, due to its interactional function. (Conrad 1999:14) The type of interpersonal interaction that takes place in conversation is not typical of academic prose. Thus, none of the linking adverbials commonly associated with the final position in conversation are common in formal writing. These findings suggest that the positioning of linking adverbials in native discourse is directly influenced by the register in which they appear, and the textual and/or interpersonal functions they serve.

5.3. Transfer-related effects on French learners’ use of academic vocabulary The focus of Section 5.2 was on interlanguage features that are shared by most learner populations when compared to expert academic writing, and which are therefore likely to be developmental. Multiple factors, however, may combine to influence learners’ use of academic vocabulary. It has, for example, been suggested that learners’ preference for the sentence-initial

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position for connectors may be attributed to the influence of instruction or ‘transfer of training’ (Selinker, 1972). The marked difference in frequency of I think across the learner sub-corpora may be partly explained by different academic writing conventions in the different mother tongues. As Granger (1998b: 158) put it, ‘learners clearly cannot be regarded as “phraseologically virgin territory”: they have a whole stock of prefabs in their mother tongue which will inevitably play a role – both positive and negative – in the acquisition of prefabs in the L2’. Claims made about the nature of L1 influence and its interaction with other factors, however, have often been built on shaky methodological foundations and suffer from what Jarvis (2000: 246) referred to as a ‘you-know-it-when-you-see-it’ syndrome. To remedy this situation, Jarvis (2000) incorporated three types of L1 observable effects into a unified framework for the study of L1 influence and proposed the following working definition of L1 influence, which is intended as a methodological heuristic to be used by transfer researchers: L1 influence refers to any instance of learner data where a statistically significant correlation (or probability-based relation) is shown to exist between some features of learners’ IL performance and their L1 background. (Jarvis, 2000: 252) Jarvis translated his working definition of L1 influence into a list of specific types of L1 observable effects that should be examined when investigating transfer. He argued that transfer studies should minimally consider at least three potential effects of L1 influence when presenting a case for or against L1 influence: 1. Intra-L1-group homogeneity in learners’ IL performance is found when learners who speak the same first language behave as a group with respect to a specific L2 feature. To illustrate this first L1 effect, Jarvis used Selinker’s (1992) finding according to which Hebrew-speaking learners of English as a group tend to produce sentences in which adverbs are placed before the object (e.g. I like very much movies).12 Intra-L1-group homogeneity is verified by comparing the interlanguage of learners sharing the same mother tongue background. 2. Inter-L1-group heterogeneity in learners’ IL performance is found when ‘comparable learners of a common L2 who speak different L1s diverge in their IL performance’ (Jarvis, 2000: 254). To illustrate this effect, Jarvis referred to a number of studies reported by Ringbom (1987) that

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have shown that Finnish-speaking learners are more likely than Swedishspeaking learners to omit English articles and prepositions. Jarvis argued that ‘this type of evidence strengthens the argument for L1 influence because it essentially rules out developmental and universal factors as the cause of the observed IL behaviour. In other words, it shows that the IL behaviour in question (omission of function words) is not something that every learner does (to the same degree or in the same way) regardless of L1 background’ (Jarvis, 2000: 254–5). Inter-L1-group heterogeneity is identified by comparing the interlanguage of learners from different mother tongue backgrounds. 3. Intra-L1-group congruity between learners’ L1 and IL performance is found where ‘learners’ use of some L2 feature can be shown to parallel their use of a corresponding L1 feature’ (Jarvis, 2000: 255). Selinker (1992) uses this type of evidence to show that Hebrew-speaking learners’ positioning of English adverbs parallels their use of adverbs in the L1. The added value of this third L1 effect is that it also has explanatory power by showing ‘what it is in the L1 that motivates the IL behavior’ (Jarvis, 2000: 255). Intra-L1-group congruity is confirmed by an IL/L1 comparison. These three effects can emerge in circumstances in which transfer is not at play and can thus be misleading when considered in isolation. As shown in Table 5.25, Jarvis concluded that, despite differences in the degree of reliability, none of the three effects is sufficient by itself to verify or characterize L1 influence. The identification of two simultaneous L1 effects is necessary to present a convincing case for L1 influence. Identifying the three L1 effects would be even more convincing if it were not that ‘the ubiquity of conditions that can obscure L1 effects renders the three-effect requirement unrealistic in many cases’ ( Jarvis, 2000: 255).

Table 5.25 Jarvis’s (2000) three effects of potential L1 influence L1 effect Intra-L1-group homogeneity in learners’ IL performance Inter-L1-group heterogeneity in learners’ IL performance Intra-L1-group congruity between learners’ L1 and IL performance

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reliability

sufficient criterion

poor

no

strong

no

strongest

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Table 5.26 Jarvis’s (2000) unified framework applied to the ICLE-FR L1 effect

Corpus comparisons

Intra-L1-group homogeneity in learners’ performance

A comparison of the use of a specific lexical item in all the essays written by French learners

Inter-L1-group heterogeneity in learners’ IL performance

A comparison of the use of a specific lexical item in the ICLE-FR against other L1 subcorpora

Intra-L1-group congruity between learners’ L1 and IL performance

A comparison of a specific lexical item in the ICLE-FR to the use of its equivalent form in a comparable corpus of French native student writing

I made use of Jarvis’s (2000) unified framework to investigate the potential influence of the first language on multiword sequences that serve rhetorical functions in French learners’ argumentative writing. The International Corpus of Learner English appears to be ideally suited to analysing the three potential effects of L1 influence described by Jarvis (2000). Table 5.26 lists the three steps needed to investigate the influence of French on recurrent word sequences in the ICLE-FR. Intra-L1-group homogeneity in learners’ performance is investigated by comparing all the essays written by French learners to verify whether they behave as a group with respect to a specific L2 feature. Inter-L1-group heterogeneity in learners’ IL performance is verified by a comparison of the number of texts in which a specific lexical item is used in the ICLE-FR and in other L1 sub-corpora. Unlike Jarvis (2000), I made use of comparison of means tests and post hoc tests such as Ryan’s procedure and Dunnett’s test to confirm this second L1 effect.13 To establish intra-L1-group congruity between learners’ L1 and IL performance, French EFL learners’ use of a specific lexical item is compared to the use of its equivalent form in a 225,174-word comparable corpus of essays written by French-speaking students collected at the University of Louvain, i.e. the Corpus de Dissertations Françaises (CODIF). Applying Jarvis’s (2000) framework to the ICLE texts reveals the potential influence of transfer on French learners’ use of multiword sequences that serve specific rhetorical functions in English. For example, the three transfer effects are found in French learners’ use of on the contrary, indicating that L1 influence most probably reinforces the conceptual problems and misguided teaching practices that were identified in Section 5.2.4 as potential explanations for the frequent misuse of the adverbial. This strongly supports Granger and Tyson’s (1996) suggestion that French learners’ overuse and misuse of the connector is probably due to an over-extension

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of the semantic properties of the French au contraire, which can be used to express both a concessive and an antithetic link. Most transfer studies have focused on what we can call ‘transfer of form’ (e.g. borrowing), ‘transfer of meaning’ (cf. semantic transfer, semantic extension) or ‘transfer of form/meaning mapping’ (e.g. cognates) (see Jarvis and Pavlenko, 2008; Odlin, 1989; 2003 and Ringbom, 2007 for excellent syntheses on lexical and semantic transfer). Next to knowledge of form and meaning, however, knowing a word also involves knowing in what patterns, with what words, when, where and how to use it (Nation, 2001: 27). These other types of knowledge can also give rise to transfer. For example, research into learners’ use of cognates has highlighted transfer effects on style and register (cf. Granger and Swallow 1988; Van Roey 1990; Granger 1996b). Studies focusing on learners’ use of phrasemes have brought to light transfer effects on collocational restrictions and lexico-grammatical patterns (e.g. Biskup, 1992; Granger, 1998b; Nesselhauf, 2003). However, much remains to be done regarding ‘transfer of use’. Applying Jarvis’s (2000) unified framework on learner corpus data brings to light interesting findings relating to L1 influence on word use. It helps to identify a number of transfer effects that remain largely undocumented in the SLA literature: transfer of function, transfer of the phraseological environment, transfer of style and register, and transfer of L1 frequency. These four transfer effects often accompany transfer of form and meaning and may also reinforce each other. They are illustrated in the remaining of this section. Multiword sequences with a pragmatic anchor seem to be quite easily transferred. French learners’ use of the idiosyncratic expression *according to me is a good example of transfer of function. This sequence is repeatedly used in the ICLE-FR; it does not appear in other learner sub-corpora except for the ICLE-DU and the ICLE-SW, where it is extremely rare. Moreover, there is congruity between French learners’ use of according to me in English and selon moi in French, which are probably regarded as translation equivalents by French EFL learners. The English preposition according to and the French selon both mean ‘as shown by something or stated by someone’ (e.g. According to George Heard Hamilton, Rodin became “a figure of international significance, the most admired, prolific, and influential sculptor since Bernini”, BNC-AC-HUM). However, they differ in one significant way: according to me is usually not accepted as a correct English phraseme. By contrast, selon moi is perfectly fine in French and is, in fact, quite frequent in French native-speaker students’ writing. This may explain why French EFL learners are keen to use what they regard as a direct translation of a common French expression.

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The following examples illustrate French students’ use of selon moi and French EFL learners’ use of according to me: 5.109. Selon moi, la chanson est un vecteur de culture parce qu’elle est un art qui impose l’engagement des différents acteurs. (CODIF) 5.110. Selon moi, tout le monde pense ce qu’il veut et comme il veut, agit comme il l’entend en respectant la loi et les codes établis. (CODIF) 5.111. According to me, the real problem now is not that man refuses to pay heed but that man refuses to make some sacrifices for the sake of ecology and to understand that the values that we have chosen are the wrong ones. (ICLE-FR) 5.112. According to me, the prison system is not outdated: it has never been a solution per se. (ICLE-FR) Figure 5.10 represents graphically how the misleading translation equivalent may be created by French EFL learners. Transfer effects are also detectable in French learners’ use of lexicogrammatical and phraseological patterns. The English verb illustrate is a case in point. Although it is not found in many texts written by French learners, it is much more frequent in ICLE-FR overall than in any other learner sub-corpus. Table 5.27 shows that French EFL learners frequently use the verb illustrate in its infinitive form. The percentage of use of this form (40%) is quite similar to that of the infinitive form of the French cognate verb illustrer in CODIF, but differs significantly from the proportion of infinitive forms of the English verb illustrate that were found in the BNC-ACHUM (23.6%) (cf. Table 4.6 in Section 4.2.2). A closer look at the occurrences of the infinitive form of illustrate in ICLE-FR reveals that it is repeatedly used in sentence-initial to-infinitive structures (Examples 5.113 and 5.114), a pattern that is also the preferred lexico-grammatical environment of illustrer in the corpus of French essays (Example 5.115). 5.113. To illustrate this, we can mention the notion of culture and language in the north of Belgium. (ICLE-FR) 5.114. To illustrate this point, it would be interesting to compare our situation with the U.S.A.’s. (ICLE-FR) 5.115. Pour illustrer cela, prenons l’exemple des pâtes alimentaires italiennes. (CODIF) French learners’ knowledge of the verb illustrer in their mother tongue probably influences the type of word combinations and lexico-grammatical patterns in which they use the English verb illustrate.

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FRENCH

'selon' 'selon' + [+HUM] 'selon X'

'selon' + [-HUM]

'selon moi'

e.g. idée, loi, principe, philosophie, argument, théorie, norme, etc.

e.g. lui, Hugo, monsieur Bernanos, certains, etc.

FRENCH LEARNERS' INTERLANGUAGE 'according to' 'according to' + [+HUM]

'according to X'

e.g. Civil Liberty Members, supporters, Judge Kamins, Xavier Flores, etc.

'according to' + [+HUM]

*'according to me'

e.g. idea, article, theory, argument, situation, etc.

'according to' + [+HUM]

'according to' + [-HUM]

'according to' ENGLISH

Figure 5.10 A possible rationale for the use of ‘according to me’ in French learners’ interlanguage

Similarly, French EFL learners almost always use the verb conclude in the sentence-initial discourse marker To conclude followed by an active structure introduced by a first person pronoun + modal verb. This pattern is less frequent in the writing of EFL learners with other mother tongue backgrounds and parallels a very frequent way of concluding in French, viz. sentenceinitial Pour conclure. The following examples show that longer sequences

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Table 5.27 A comparison of the use of the English verb ‘illustrate’ and the French verb ‘illustrer’ En. ‘illustrate’ in ICLE-FR

Fr. ‘illustrer’ in CODIF

simple present infinitive past participle imperative past

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and phraseological cascades (see Section 5.2.3) may also be transferrelated. 5.116. Pour conclure, nous pouvons dire que les deux stades sont aussi importants l’ un que l’ autre : il est nécessaire que l’ homme soit membre d’ un groupe mais il est tout aussi primordial qu’ il s’ en détache pour construire son identité propre. (CODIF) 5.117. To conclude, we can say that many people are today addicted to television. (ICLE-FR) 5.118. Pour conclure, je dirais que chaque individu est unique, différent et qu’il est facile de vouloir ressembler aux autres plutôt que de s’accepter tel qu’on est. (CODIF) 5.119. To conclude, I would say that science, technology and industrialisation certainly stand in the way of human relationships but not in people’s dreams and imagination. (ICLE-FR) My findings also point to a transfer of style and register. In Section 5.2.3, the first person plural imperative form let us was shown to be overused by all L1 learner populations when compared to expert academic writing. As shown in Table 5.28, the two-word sequence occurs in 25.9 per cent of the texts produced by French learners and is much more frequent in the ICLE-FR than in any other learner sub-corpus. This difference in use between ICLE-FR and the other ICLE sub-corpora proved to be statistically significant. An analysis of concordance lines for let us shows that this sequence is repeatedly used by French speaking students to serve a number of rhetorical and organisational functions. For example, it is used as a code gloss to

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Table 5.28 ‘let us’ in learner texts Rel. freq. of ‘let us’ and ‘let’s’ per 100,000 words

Number of texts including ‘let us’ or ‘let’s’

Number of texts

%

French Czech Dutch Finnish German Italian Polish Russian Spanish Swedish

71.88 25.24 12.33 8.78 13.69 20.95 19.21 38.57 26.23 18.73

59 19 19 10 14 10 23 47 14 9

228 147 196 167 179 79 221 194 149 81

25.9% 12.9 9.7 6 7.8 12.7 10.4 24.2 9.4 11.11

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introduce an example (Example 5.120), a transition marker to change topic (Examples 5.121 and 5.122), and an attitude marker (Example 5.123). 5.120. To illustrate the truth of this, let us take the example of Britain which was already fighting its corner alone after Mrs Thatcher found herself totally isolated over the decision that Europe would have a single currency. (ICLE-FR) 5.121. Let us then focus on the new Europe as a giant whose parts are striving for unity. (ICLE-FR) 5.122. Let us now turn our attention to the students who want to apply for a job in the private sector. (ICLE-FR) 5.123. Let us be clear that we cannot let countries tear one another to pieces and if we closed our eyes to such an atrocity, our behaviour would be cowardly. (ICLE-FR) As explained in Section 4.2.3, the first person plural imperative form let us is found in professional academic writing, but it is not frequent (relative frequency of 5.46 occurrences per 100,000 words). It is also restricted to a limited set of verbs (see Swales et al., 1998; Hyland, 2002). In the BNC-ACHUM, there are only eight significant verb co-occurrents of let us: consider, say, suppose, return, begin, look, take and have. There is no lexically equivalent form to En. let us in French. Equivalence is however found at the morphological level as French makes use of an inflectional suffix to mark the first imperative plural form. Thus, to investigate the third L1 effect, i.e. intra-L1 group congruity between learners’ L1 and IL

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performance, I compared the use of let us in ICLE-FR with that of first person plural imperative verbs in CODIF. The rhetorical and organisational functions fulfilled by let us in French EFL learner writing can be paralleled with the very frequent use of first person plural imperative verbs in French student writing to organize discourse and interact with the reader (Paquot, 2008a): 5.124. Prenons l’exemple des sorciers ou des magiciens au Moyen Age. (CODIF) 5.125. Ajoutons qu’une partie plus spécifique de la population est touchée. (CODIF) 5.126. Comparons cela à la visite de la cathédrale d’Amiens. (CODIF) 5.127. Envisageons tout d’abord la question économique. (CODIF) 5.128. Examinons successivement le problème de l’abolition des frontières d’un point de vue économique, juridique et enfin culturel. (CODIF) 5.129. Imaginons un monde ou règne une pensée unique. (CODIF) 5.130. Considérons un instant le cinéma actuel. (CODIF) First person plural imperative verbs serve specific discourse strategies in French formal types of writing, and more specifically in academic writing. French EFL learners seem to transfer their knowledge of French academic writing conventions (Connor, 1996) and make use of imperatives in English academic writing in the same way as in French academic writing. Imperative forms that are repeated in the ICLE-FR often have formal equivalents that are found in CODIF (e.g. let us take the example of ‘prenons l’exemple de’; let us consider ‘considérons’; let us hope ‘espérons’; let us examine ‘examinons’; let us take ‘prenons’; let us (not/never) forget ‘oublions/n’oublions pas que’; let us think ‘pensons’). This generalized overuse of the first person plural imperative in EFL French learner writing as a rhetorical strategy does not conform to English academic writing conventions but rather to French academic style. In English, let us (and more precisely its contracted form let’s) is much more typical of speech (relative frequency of 42.5 occurrences per 100,000 words in the BNC-SP but only 5.3 per 100,000 in the BNC-AC). As a result, the speech-like nature of let us in French EFL learner writing leads to an overall impression of stylistic inappropriateness. This example points to yet another type of transfer effect, namely transfer of L1 frequency. As shown in Table 5.29, the frequency of let us in the ICLE-FR is much closer to the frequency of first person plural imperative verbs in student writing in French, than in English expert or novice writing. Other examples of sequences that have French-like frequencies in the ICLE-FR include on the contrary, on the other hand, let us take the example, to illustrate this, to conclude and *according to me.

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Table 5.29 The transfer of frequency of the first person plural imperative between French and English writing Corpus

Relative frequency per 100,000 words of first person plural imperative verbs

French L1 students (CODIF) French EFL learners (ICLE-FR) English expert writers (BNC-AC-HUM) English novice writers (LOCNESS)

95.5 71.9 5.7 3

FRENCH

ENGLISH

Fr. 1st plural imperative

En. 1st plural imperative

Fr. ‘prenons’ example de’ Fr. ‘n’ oublions pas’ Fr. ‘examinons’

En. ‘let us take the example of’ En ‘let us not forget’ En. ‘let us examine’

FREQUENCYFR

FREQUENCYEN

REGISTERFR FUNCTIONFR

REGISTEREN FUNCTIONEN

PHRASEOLOGYFR

PHRASEOLOGYEN

FRENCH EFL LEARNERS' INTERLANGUAGE En. 1st plural imperative En. ‘let us take the example of’ En ‘let us not forget’ En. ‘let us examine’ ... FREQUENCYFR REGISTERFR FUNCTIONFR PHRASEOLOGYFR

Figure 5.11 A possible rationale for the use of ‘let us’ in French learners’ interlanguage

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Transfer effects often interact in learners’ use of English lexical devices. Thus, French EFL learners use English first person plural imperatives in academic writing with the frequency of French imperative verbs in the corresponding register, in French-like phraseological patterns and to serve the same organizational and interactional functions. As illustrated in Figure 5.11, French EFL learners’ use of textual phrasemes such as let’s take the example of, let’s examine or let us not forget mirror the stylistic profile of the French sequences prenons l’exemple de .., examinons et n’oublions pas in French academic writing. The transfer effects identified in this section – transfer of function, transfer of lexico-grammatical and phraseological patterns, transfer of style and register, and transfer of frequency – make up what, following Hoey (2005: 183), I refer to as ‘transfer of primings’. EFL learners’ knowledge of words and word combinations in their mother tongue includes a whole range of information about their preferred co-occurrences and sentence position, stylistic or register features, discourse functions and frequency. Primings for collocational and contextual use of (at least a restricted set of frequent or core) L1 lexical devices are particularly strong in the mental lexicon of adult EFL learners. They are the result of many encounters with these lexical items in L1 speech and writing. Mental primings in the L1 lexicon probably influence EFL learners’ knowledge of English words and word sequences by priming the lexico-grammatical preferences of an L1 lexical item to its English counterpart.

5.4. Summary and conclusion The data presented in this chapter support the idea that the ‘English of advanced learners from different countries with a relatively limited variation of cultural and educational background factors share a number of features which make it differ from NS language’ (Ringbom, 1998: 49). The focus of the analysis has been on the lexical means available to learners to perform specific rhetorical and organizational functions in academic writing, and more precisely in argumentative essays. This textual dimension is particularly difficult to master and has been described by Perdue (1993) as the last developmental stage before bilingualism in second language acquisition. My results show that the expression of rhetorical and organizational functions in EFL writing is characterized by: A limited lexical repertoire: EFL learners tend to massively overuse a restricted set of words and phrasemes to serve a particular rhetorical

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function and to underuse a large proportion of the lexical means available to expert writers. They also seem to prefer to use conjunctions, adverbs and prepositions rather than phraseological patterns with nouns, verbs and adjectives. A lack of register awareness: texts produced by EFL learners often ‘give confusing signals of register’ (Field and Yip, 1992: 26) as they display mixed patterns of formality and informality. The frequency of informal words and phrases in learner writing is often closer to their frequency in native-speakers’ speech than in their academic prose. Lexico-grammatical and phraseological specificities: EFL learners’ writing is distinguishable by a whole range of lexico-grammatical patterns and co-occurrences that differ from academic prose in both quantitative and qualitative terms. Preferred co-occurrences in the ICLE are often not the same as in academic prose, which reveals learners’ weak sense of native speakers’ ‘preferred ways of saying things’. Learners’ attempts at using collocations are not always successful and sometimes result in crude approximations and lexico-grammatical infelicities. My results also support Lorenz’s (1999b) remark that ‘advanced learners’ deficits are most resilient in the area of lexico-grammar, where lexical items are employed to signal grammatical and textual relations’ and that ‘a lack of coherence in advanced learners’ writing must at least partly be attributable to lexico-grammatical deficits’ (Lorenz, 1999b: 56). Semantic misuse: As Crewe (1990: 317) commented, ‘the misuse of logical connectives is an almost universal feature of ESL students’ writing’. What is less well-documented in the literature, however, is that EFL learners also experience difficulty with the semantics of other types of cohesive devices, and specifically, with labels, i.e. abstract nouns that are inherently unspecific and require lexical realization in their co-text, either beforehand or afterwards. Chains of connective devices: EFL learners’ texts are sometimes characterized by the use of superfluous (and sometimes semantically inconsistent) connective devices. A marked preference for sentence-initial position of connectors: connectors are often used in the unmarked sentence-initial position in learner writing. A medial position is not favoured by EFL learners, although it is typical of academic prose. The methodology used in the first part of this chapter has made it possible to draw a general picture of the writing of upper-intermediate to advanced EFL learners from different mother tongue backgrounds. Most

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of these features have already been mentioned in the literature, but they have always been reported on the basis of only one or two L1 learner populations. My methodology makes it possible to avoid hasty interpretations in terms of L1 influence. Consider the following quotations by Zhang (2000), who attributes a number of features to the influence of the learners’ mother tongue, in this case Chinese: The overuse of this expression [more and more] was most probably due to language transfer since a familiar expression in the Chinese language ye lai yue was popularly used. (Zhang, 2000: 77); The reason for the initial positioning of conjunctions was again due to the transfer of the Chinese language where conjunction devices with similar meaning are mostly used at the beginning of a sentence. (Zhang, 2000: 83). As explained above, sentence-initial positioning of conjunctions is common to most learner populations. The mother tongue may reinforce learners’ preference for sentence-initial position but cannot be regarded as a complete explanation for this learner-specific feature. In Section 5.2.6, teaching-induced factors have been identified as a possible cause for learners’ preference for sentence-initial position. Syntactic positioning of connectors is rarely taught and EFL learners often consider the sentenceinitial position to be a safe strategy. As for the overuse of the expression more and more, although it is indeed very significant in the Chinese component of the second edition of the ICLE (Granger et al., 2009), this feature is actually common to all learner populations represented in the corpus. This suggests that, while transfer may be at work in Chinese learners’ use of more and more, it is probably not the only explanation. It is not always possible to attribute learner-specific features to a single factor, as developmental, teaching-induced and transfer-related effects can reinforce each other (Granger, 2004: 135–6). Another advantage of the method I used is that, once linguistic features of upper-intermediate to advanced EFL learner writing have been identified, we can check to what extent they are specific to EFL learners or just typical of novice writing. This is precisely where a corpus of essays written by English native university students such as LOCNESS (see Section 2.1) has a role to play. Tripartite comparisons between professional writing, foreign learner writing and native student writing make it possible to distinguish between learner-specific and developmental features (e.g. Neff et al., 2008).

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Whether a feature is learner-specific or developmental varies from lexical item to lexical item, but as a general rule, the findings suggest that the main feature shared by native and non-native novice writers is a lack of registerawareness. Figure 5.12 shows that a whole range of lexical items that Gilquin and Paquot (2008) found to be overused in EFL learners’ writing – maybe, so expressing effect, it seems to me, really, sentence-final though, this/that is why, I think and first of all –are also more frequently used by native-speaker student writers than in expert academic prose.14 The overuse of I think in both EFL learner and native-speaker student writing has already been reported by Neff et al. (2004a) who described it as a general ‘novice-writer characteristic of excessive visibility’ (Neff et al, 2004a: 152). Figure 5.12 also shows that not all learner-specific speech-like lexical items are overused in the writing of native-speaking students. Thus, the lexical items of course, certainly, absolutely, by the way and I would like/want/am going to talk about are quite rare in LOCNESS. They are even less frequent in native-speaker students’ writing than in academic prose, which suggests that native novice writers do not transfer all spoken features to their 3000 200

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Figure 5.12 Features of novice writing – Frequency in expert academic writing, native-speaker and EFL novices’ writing and native speech (per million words of running text)

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2000 1500 1000 500 0 really

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45 40 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0

definitely

120 100 80 60 40 20 Freq. of by the way (pmw)

0 Freq. of sentence-final though (pmw)

Figure 5.12 Continued

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academic writing. It seems that lexical items which are not particularly frequent in speech and are rare in academic prose (e.g. I want/would like/ am going to talk about) are less likely to be overused by native novice writers. By contrast, lexical items that are very frequent in speech, and acceptable in academic prose, are very likely to be overused (e.g. maybe, so expressing effect). Other linguistic features are limited to EFL learners. These include lexico-grammatical errors (*a same, possibility *to, despite *of, discuss *about), the use of non-native-like sequences (e.g. according to me and as a conclusion), and the overuse of relatively rare expressions such as in a nutshell. As Gilquin, Granger and Paquot (2007a: 323) have argued, the issue of the degree of overlap between novice native writers and non-native writers has far-reaching methodological and pedagogical implications and is clearly in need of further empirical study. Developmental factors in L1 and L2 acquisition cannot, however, be held responsible for all learner specific-features. In addition to teachinginduced factors and proficiency, the first language also plays a part in EFL learners’ use of academic vocabulary. In the last part of this chapter, I focused on the potential influence of the first language on multiword sequences that serve rhetorical functions in French learner writing. I made use of Jarvis’s (2000) framework for assessing transfer and identified a number of transfer effects – transfer of function, of the phraseological environment, of style and register, and of L1 frequency – that I referred to as ‘transfer of primings’. These results support Kellerman’s claim that the ‘hoary old chestnut’ according to which transfer does not afflict the more advanced learner ‘should finally be squashed underfoot as an unwarranted overgeneralization based on very limited evidence’ (Kellerman, 1984: 121). However, they also suggest that the main effect of the students’ mother tongue on higher-intermediate to advanced learner writing is not errors, but more subtle transfer effects, especially at higher levels of proficiency.

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Chapter 6

Pedagogical implications

This chapter considers three areas where my findings have major pedagogical implications: teaching-induced factors; the role of the first language in EFL learning and teaching; and the role of corpora in EAP material design. The ways in which corpus data, in particular data from learner corpora, have been used to inform the academic-writing sections of the second edition of the Macmillan English Dictionary for Advanced Learners (MED2) (Rundell, 2007) are also discussed.

6.1. Teaching-induced factors Factors linked to teaching have repeatedly been denounced in the literature as being responsible for a number of learners’ inappropriate uses of connectors (see Zamel, 1983; Hyland and Milton, 1997; Flowerdew, 1998; Milton, 1999). Connectors are often presented in long lists of undifferentiated and supposedly equivalent items, classified in broad functional categories. This can cause semantic misuse (Crewe, 1990; Lake, 2004). For example, Jordan (1999) describes the adverbial on the contrary as a phrase of contrast equivalent to on the other hand and by contrast (see Figure 6.1). The same is said about conversely. However this adverb should only be used to indicate that one situation is the exact opposite of another: 6.1. American consumers prefer white eggs; conversely, British buyers like brown eggs. (LDOCE4) Also problematic are the categorization of besides as a marker of concession, and the misleading presentation of the conjunctions even if and even though as synonyms. Overuse of connectors such as nevertheless, in a nutshell, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand, and on the other hand can also be attributed to the long

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A. Contrast, with what has preceded:

instead conversely then on the contrary by (way of ) contrast in comparison (on the one hand) . . . on the other hand . . .

B. Concession indicates the unexpected, surprising nature of what is being said in view of what was said before: besides (or) else however nevertheless nonetheless notwithstanding only still while (al)though

yet in any case at any rate for all that in spite of/despite that after all at the same time on the other hand all the same even if/though

Figure 6.1 Connectives: contrast and concession (Jordan, 1999: 136)

lists of connectors found in most textbooks (Granger, 2004: 135) as no information is given about their frequency or semantic properties. Milton (1999) has shown that there is a strong correlation between the words and phrases overused by Hong Kong students and the functional lists of expressions distributed by tutorial schools (private institutions which prepare most high school students in Hong Kong for English examinations). The selection of connectors to be taught may also lend itself to criticism. It was shown in Section 5.2.3 that sequences that are rarely used by native speakers (e.g. as far as I am concerned or last but not least) or ‘unidiomatic’ sequences (e.g. as a conclusion) are sometimes found in teaching materials, especially in the lists of connectors freely available on the Internet.1 By contrast, the connectors most frequently used to serve rhetorical functions are sometimes missing from these lists. Another direct consequence of these lists is EFL learners’ stylistic inappropriateness, as Milton explains: Students are drilled in the categorical use of a short list of expressions – often those functioning as connectives or alternatively those which are

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colourful and complicated (and therefore impressive) – regardless of whether they are used primarily in spoken or written language (if indeed at all), or to which text types they are appropriate (1998: 190). Thus, the spoken-like expression all the same is given as an equivalent alternative to more formal connectors such as on the other hand or notwithstanding in Jordan (1999) (see Figure 6.1). This example also illustrates the fact that no information about the connectors’ grammatical category or syntactic properties is made available to the learners. The preposition notwithstanding is listed together with adverbs and adverbial phrases (e.g. however, yet) as well as conjunctions (e.g. although, while). Learners’ marked preference for the sentence-initial positioning of connectors has also been related to L2 instruction (see Flowerdew, 1998; Milton, 1999; Narita and Sugiura, 2006). Positional variation of connectors is usually not taught, and learners use the sentence-initial position as a safe bet.2 Another problem of teaching practices (which has not often been documented) is that too much emphasis tends to be placed on connectors, that is, on grammatical cohesion (see Halliday and Hasan, 1976), to the detriment of lexical cohesion.3 However I have shown in this book that nouns, verbs and adjectives all have prominent rhetorical functions in academic prose. Labels, have also been found to fulfil a prominent cohesive role in this particular genre. It is most probable that lexical cohesion has been neglected in EFL teaching because ‘there have been no good descriptions of the forms and functions of this phenomenon’ (Flowerdew, 2006: 345).

6.2. The role of the first language in EFL learning and teaching My findings have at least two important pedagogical implications relating to the role of the first language in EFL learning and teaching. Transfer of primings means that words or word sequences in the foreign language may be primed for L1 use in terms of discourse function, collocational and lexico-grammatical preferences, register and frequency. One of the many roles of teaching should thus be to counter these ‘default’ and sometimes misleading primings in EFL learners’ mental lexicons. Awareness-raising activities focusing on similarities and differences between the mother tongue and the foreign language are clearly needed to achieve this. These activities should not be restricted to ‘helping learners focus on errors typically committed by learners from a particular L1’ (Hegelheimer and

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Fisher, 2006: 259). They should also raise learners’ awareness of more subtle differences such as the register differences and collocational preferences of similar words in the two languages. This recommendation stands in sharp contrast to Bahns’s (1993: 56) claim that collocations that are direct translation equivalents do not need to be taught. Learners have no way of knowing which collocations are congruent in the mother tongue and the foreign language; moreover, the differences between the collocations in L1 and L2 may lie in aspects of use rather than form or meaning. However, as Odlin commented, it is not always possible to make use of the first language in the classroom and to rely on contrastive data: Whatever the merits of contrastive materials in some contexts, it is clear that such materials are not always feasible. For example, when an ESL class consists of speakers of Chinese, Persian, Spanish, Tamil, and Yoruba, there is not likely to be any textbook that contrasts English verb phrases with verb phrases in all of those languages – and even if there were, teachers could not profitably spend the class time necessary to illuminate so many contrasts. Yet even in such classes, one type of contrastive information is frequently available: bilingual dictionaries. Although the comparisons are sometimes restricted to words in the native and target languages, the most carefully prepared dictionaries often provide some comparisons of pronunciation and grammar as well. If the class size allows it, teachers can help individual students in using any contrastive information that their dictionaries provide. (1989: 162) Bilingual dictionaries should ideally facilitate the teacher’s task in multilingual as well as monolingual classrooms. However, it is questionable whether the type of contrastive information they provide is fully adequate. For example, the Robert & Collins CD-Rom (Version 1.1) includes an essay-writing section in which first person plural imperatives in French are systematically translated by structures employing let us in English (Granger and Paquot, 2008b). In Section 5.3, however, I showed that first person plural imperatives are not the best way of organizing discourse and interacting with the reader in English academic writing. Table 6.1 lists examples of infelicitous translation equivalents. Similarly, a web-page devoted to linking words and hosted by the ‘Académie de Lille (Anglais BTS Informatique)’ lists according to me as a direct translation equivalent of the French ‘à mon avis’, and as a conclusion as a possible equivalent of the French ‘pour conclure / pour résumer ’.4

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Le Robert & Collins CD-Rom (2003–2004): Essay writing

Essay writing: function

French sentence

Proposed English equivalence

Developing the argument

Prenons comme point de départ le rôle que le gouvernement a joué dans l’élaboration de ces programmes

= ‘let us take ... as a starting point’

En premier lieu, examinons ce qui fait obstacle à la paix

= ‘firstly, let us examine’

Après avoir étudié la progression de l’action, considérons maintenant le style

= ‘after studying ... let us now consider’

Venons-en maintenant à l’analyse des retombées politiques

= ‘now let us come to’

Examinons les origines du problème ainsi que certaines des solutions suggérées

= ‘let us examine ... as well as’

Sans nous appesantir or nous attarder sur les détails, notons toutefois que le rôle du Conseil de l’ordre a été déterminant

= ‘without dwelling on the details, let us note, however, that’

Nous reviendrons plus loin sur cette question, mais signalons déjà l’absence totale d’émotion dans ce passage

= ‘we shall come back to this question later, but let us point out at this stage’

Avant d’aborder la question du style, mentionnons brièvement le choix des métaphores

= ‘before tackling ... let us mention briefly’

Adding or detailing

Ajoutons à cela or Il faut ajouter à cela or À cela s’ajoute un sens remarquable du détail

= ‘let us add to this or added to this’

Introducing an example

Prenons le cas de Louis dans «le Nœud de vipères»

= ‘(let us) take the case of’

Stating facts

Rappelons les faits. Victoria l’Américaine débarque à Londres en 1970 et réussit rapidement à s’imposer sur la scène musicale

= ‘let’s recall the facts’

Emphasizing particular points

N’oublions pas que, sur Terre, la gravité pilote absolument tous les phénomènes

= ‘let us not forget that’

The other side of the argument

Assessing an idea

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These findings are quite representative of a general lack of good contrastive studies on which pedagogical materials can be based. Multilingual corpora clearly have an important role to play here by providing an empirically-based source of translation equivalents (Bowker, 2003; King, 2003).

6.3. The role of learner corpora in EAP materials design While teaching materials designed to help undergraduate students improve their academic writing skills are legion (e.g. Bailey 2006; Hamp-Lyons and Heasley 2006), few make use of authentic texts and very few are informed by the use of corpora. Even when they are corpusinformed, EAP resources tend to be based on data from native-speakers only. Thus, Thurstun and Candlin’s (1997) Exploring Academic English, which uses concordance lines to introduce new words in context and familiarize learners with phraseological patterns, relies exclusively on data from a native-speakers’ academic corpus. Although this is one of the most innovative EAP textbooks to date, it is arguably less useful for non-native learners, despite Thurstun and Candlin’s (1998) claim that it is equally appropriate for native and non-native writers. As shown in Section 5.2, EFL writing is characterized by a number of linguistic features that differ from novice native-speakers’ writing. The value of pedagogical tools for non-native speakers of English would be greatly increased if findings from learner corpus data were also used to select what to teach and how to teach it. As Flowerdew (1998) put it, ‘when choosing which markers to teach, decisions made should also be based on findings from a parallel student corpus to ascertain where students’ main deficiencies lie. If not, there is a danger that the emphasis on teaching the most frequent markers may focus on ones already familiar to and correctly used by students, or in this case, exacerbate the problem with their overuse’ (Flowerdew, 1998: 338). By showing, in context, the types of infelicities EFL learners produce and the types of errors they make, as well as the items they tend to under- or overuse, learner corpora are the most valuable resources for designing EAP materials which address the specific problems that EFL learners encounter (see also Flowerdew, 2001; Granger, 2009). Yet, such corpora have very rarely been used systematically to inform EAP materials (see Milton, 1998 and Tseng and Liou, 2006 for two exceptions in Computer-Assisted Language Learning).5 The only type of resource in which learner corpus data have been relatively successfully implemented up to now is the monolingual learners’ dictionary (MLD). For example, the Longman Dictionary of Contemporary

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English and the Cambridge Advanced Learner’s Dictionary include a number of learner corpus-informed usage notes which warn against common learner errors (e.g. the confusion between the adjectives actual and current, the countable use of the noun information). Yet, if MLDs are to take further ‘proactive steps to help learners negotiate known areas of difficulty’ (Rundell, 1999: 47), learner corpora should not only be exploited to compile error notes but also to improve other aspects of the dictionary. As put by Cook (1998: 57) referring to Carter’s (1998b) standpoint, however, ‘materials should be influenced by, but not slaves to, corpus findings’ (see also Swales, 2002; Widdowson, 2003). The method used in Chapter 5 has made it possible to identify a number of common features of EFL learners’ expression of rhetorical and organizational functions. A selected list of features were used to inform a 30-page writing section which I and two other members of the Centre for English Corpus Linguistics (CECL), Gaëtanelle Gilquin and Sylviane Granger, designed for the second edition of the Macmillan English Dictionary for Advanced Learners (Gilquin et al. 2007b: IW1–IW29). The writing section includes 12 functions that EFL learners need to master in order to write well-structured academic texts. These were identified in Section 4.1 as typically appearing in EAP textbooks which adopt a functional approach to academic writing: (1) adding information; (2) comparing and contrasting: describing similarities and differences; (3) exemplification: introducing examples; (4) expressing cause and effect; (5) expressing personal opinions; (6) expressing possibility and certainty; (7) introducing a concession; (8) introducing topics and related ideas; (9) listing items; (10) reformulation: paraphrasing or clarifying; (11) reporting and quoting; (12) summarizing and drawing conclusions. Each writing section includes a detailed ‘corpus-based rather than corpus-bound’ description (Summers, 1996: 262) of the many lexical means that are available to expert writers to perform a specific function. Special emphasis is placed on AKL nouns, adjectives and verbs and their phraseological patterns. As shown in Figures 6.2 and 6.3, the sections provide information about how to use these words appropriately by focusing on their: – – – – –

semantic properties, syntactic positioning, collocations, frequency, style and register differences.

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You can use the nouns resemblance, similarity, parallel, and analogy to show that two points, ideas, or situations are similar in certain ways: If there is a resemblance or similarity between two or more points, ideas, situations, or people, they share some characteristics but are not exactly the same: There is a striking resemblance between them. He would have recognized her from her strong resemblance to her brother. There is a remarkable similarity of techniques, of clothes and of weapons.

The noun similarity also refers to a particular characteristic or aspect that is shared by two or more points, ideas, situations, or people: These theories share certain similarities with biological explanations. The orang-utan is the primate most closely related to man; its lively facial expressions show striking similarities to those of humans.

Collocation Adjectives frequently used with resemblance and similarity. Certain, close, remarkable, striking, strong, superficial The distribution of votes across the three parties in 1983 bears a close resemblance to the elections of 1923 and of 1929.

You can also use the noun parallel to refer to the way in which points, ideas, situations, or people, are similar to each other: Scientists themselves have often drawn parallels between the experience of a scientific vocation and certain forms of religious experience. There are close parallels here with anti-racist work in education.

An analogy is a comparison between two situations, processes, etc which are similar in some ways, usually made in order to explain something or make it easier to understand: A usefull analogy for understanding Piaget's theory is to view the child as a scientists who is seeking a 'theory' to explain complex phenomena.

Collocation Adjectives frequently used with analogy and parallel close, interesting, obvious A close analogy can be drawn between cancer of the cell and a society hooked on drugs

Figure 6.2 Comparing and contrasting: using nouns such as ‘resemblance’ and ‘similarity’ (Gilquin et al., 2007b: IW5)

Evidence from learner corpora was used in several ways to inform the writing sections. The sections specifically address the types of problems discussed in Chapter 5 — limited lexical repertoire, lack of register awareness, phraseological infelicities, semantic misuse, overuse of connective

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When you want to explain or define exactly what you mean by something, you can use the abbreviation i.e. (short for 'id est', the Latin equivalent of 'that is') or the expressions that is and that is to say: The police now have up to ninety-six hours, i.e. four days and nights, to detain people without charge. Descartes was obsessed by epistemological questions, that is, questions about what we can know and how we can know it. First, it excludes the public sector, that to say, the nationalized industries.

That is and that is to say are usually enclosed by commas. The abbreviation i.e. follows a comma or is used between brackets: Network emergencies (i.e. network failures) should be reported immediately.

Note that, in academic writing and professional reports, i.e. and that is are much more frequent than that is to say.

Freq. per million words

Academic writing 160 140 120 100 80 60 40 20 0 i.e.

that is

that is to say

Figure 6.3 Reformulation: explaining and defining: using ‘i.e.’, ‘that is’ and ‘that is to say’ (Gilquin et al., 2007b: IW9)

devices and syntactic positioning. Our treatment of these problems is mainly explicit, in that we draw learners’ attention to error-prone items and we provide negative feedback in the form of ‘Be careful!’ notes which focus on problems of frequency (over- and underuse), register confusion and atypical positioning. These notes are typically supported by frequency data, in the form of graphs which help the reader visualize the differences between learners’ language and that of native writers. Thus, in the section on ‘Expressing cause and effect’, a graph is used to show that learners have a strong tendency to use the adverb so, which is relatively rare in academic prose and much more typical of speech (see Figure 6.4). There are also ‘Get it right’ boxes which are intended to give guidance on how to avoid common errors. Numerous authentic examples are provided to illustrate

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Learners often use so to express an effect. This use is correct, but it is more typical of speech and should therefore not be used too often in academic writing and professional reports.

Freq. per million words

so expressing effect 1200 1000 800 600 400 200 0 Academic writing

Learner writing

Speech

Figure 6.4 Expressing cause and effect: ‘Be careful’ note on ‘so’ (Gilquin et al., 2007b: IW13)

all the points we make. The reader is referred to Gilquin et al. (2007a) for more detailed information on the principles that guided the design of these writing sections. My investigation of academic vocabulary has shown that the use of learner corpus data, and their systematic comparison with native corpora, can bring to light a wide range of learner-specific features, not limited to grammatical or lexical errors, but also including over-reliance on a limited set of lexical devices and under-representation of a wide range of typical academic words and phraseological patterns. While Gilquin et al. (2007a; 2007b) have shown how these findings can be integrated into a learner’s dictionary, other writing resources, such as textbooks or electronic writing aids,6 could equally benefit from the use of learner corpus data.

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This book lies at the intersection of three areas of research: English for academic purposes, learner corpus research and second language acquisition. In this final chapter, I take stock of the main findings of the present study and bring out its major contributions to these three research areas. The chapter concludes with some avenues for future research.

7.1. Academic vocabulary: a chimera? The status and usefulness of EAP has been questioned by Hyland who believes that ‘academic literacy is unlikely to be achieved through an orientation to some general set of trans-disciplinary academic conventions and practices’ (Hyland, 2000: 145). This book, however, supports and substantiates the concept of ‘English for (General) Academic Purposes’ both as a macro-genre which subsumes a wide range of text types in academic settings (Biber et al., 1999), and as a teaching practice that deals with ‘the teaching of the skills and language that are common to all disciplines’ (Dudley-Evans and St Johns, 1998: 41) and focuses on ‘a general academic English register, incorporating a formal, academic style, with proficiency in the language use’ (Jordan, 1997: 5). My own contribution to legitimizing EAP has been to demonstrate – on the basis of corpus data – that ‘it is possible to delimit a procedural vocabulary of such words that would be useful for readers/writers over a wide range of academic disciplines involving varied textual subject matters and genres’ (McCarthy, 1991: 78). Academic texts are characterized by a wide range of words and phrasemes that refer to activities which are typical of academic discourse, and more generally, of scientific knowledge. These lexical items also contribute to discourse organization and cohesion, from topic introduction to concluding statements. I have therefore argued in favour of a functional

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definition of ‘academic vocabulary’ (Martínez et al., 2009) and proposed the following definition: academic vocabulary consists of a set of options to refer to those activities that characterize academic work, organize scientific discourse and build the rhetoric of academic texts. Unlike Coxhead’s (2000) definition of the term, a large proportion of what has been referred to as academic vocabulary in this book consists of core words, a category which has so far largely been neglected in EAP courses. Following researchers such as Hanciog˘ lu et al. (2008), I have therefore questioned the fuzzy but well-established frequency-based distinction between general service words and academic words. Teachers should not assume that EAP students know the first 2,000 words of English. Numerous so-called general service words are not mastered productively by L2 learners, even at upper-intermediate to advanced levels of proficiency. However, these words serve important discourse-organizing functions in academic writing; this suggests that they should be the target of teaching, particularly teaching aimed at productive activities. My findings call into question the systematic use of Coxhead’s Academic Word List as the exclusive vocabulary syllabus in a number of recent productivityoriented vocabulary textbooks. Another fact that stands out is that a clear distinction should be made between vocabulary needs for academic reading and writing. As a result, I have derived a productive counterpart to the Academic Word List, and have developed a rigorous and empirically-based procedure to select potential academic words for this list. The methodology makes use of the criteria of keyness, range and evenness of distribution, and provides a good illustration of the usefulness of POS-tagged corpora for applied purposes. One important feature of the methodology adopted here is that it includes the 2,000 most frequent words in English, thus making it possible to appreciate the paramount importance of core English words in academic prose. The outcome of this procedure is the Academic Keyword List. This list should not, however, be regarded as an end product. In its current form (see Table 2.17), the list is the raw result of the application of purely quantitative criteria to native-speaker corpus data. As such, it is not a list of academic vocabulary in a functional sense. Each word still needs ‘pedagogic mediation’ (Widdowson, 2003): its different meanings, lexicogrammatical patterning and phraseology in expert academic prose needs to be carefully described and learner corpus data should be used to

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complement these descriptions. This procedure has already been applied to the study of words that serve discourse functions (such as exemplifying, expressing cause and effect, comparing and contrasting) in academic prose. I have shown that a phraseological approach to the description of academic vocabulary provides a mine of valuable information for pedagogical tools. The first result of this method has been to dethrone adverbs from their dominant position as default cohesive markers. Adverbs do not have a monopoly on lexical cohesion and discourse organization in academic writing. My results have provided ample evidence for the prominent discursive role of nouns, verbs and adjectives and their phraseological patterns, a role which is hardly ever mentioned in EFL/EAP teaching. These partof-speech categories, however, serve organizational functions as diverse as exemplification, comparing and contrasting, and expressing cause and effect. Second, the method has helped to demonstrate that an essential set of phrasemes in academic prose consists of ‘lexical extensions’ (Curado Fuentes, 2001: 115) of academic words (e.g. conclusion, issue, claim, argue). These words acquire their organizational or rhetorical function in specific word combinations that are essentially semantically and syntactically compositional (e.g. as discussed below, an example of . . . is . . ., the aim of this study, the next section aims at . . ., it has been suggested) (Oakey, 2002; Biber et al., 2004) and contribute to push ‘the boundary that roughly demarcates the “phraseological” more and more into the zone previously thought of as free’ (Cowie, 1998: 20). The focus has been on words that are reasonably frequent in a wide range of academic texts and their preferred lexicogrammatical and phraseological patterns, irrespective of discipline. As well as their common core features, these words may also have a discipline-specific phraseology (Granger and Paquot, 2009a). Different disciplines may also have their preferred ways of performing rhetorical or organizational functions. A decade ago, Milton (1999: 223) commented that ‘a great deal of research [was] still necessary to describe with any empirical rigour the lexis that is characteristic of particular purposes, genres, and registers’. Since then, there has been a huge increase in the number of corpus-based studies highlighting the specificity of vocabulary and phraseology in different academic disciplines and genres. The primary motivation of these studies, however, has not been pedagogical. As a result, their findings do not easily lend themselves to being used in general EAP courses and it is now essential to find ways of reconciling research findings and the reality of EAP teaching practice. EAP tutors are left wondering how they can possibly meet the needs of all their

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students in classes which are ‘often composed of students from different disciplines and/or language backgrounds with different purposes for taking the class’ (Huckin, 2003: 6). They do not know either what should be taught, for example, to law students who also have to take courses in economics, history, sociology or psychology. With the emergence of a wide range of interdisciplinary curricula, the problem is likely to become even more acute in the future, not only for students but also for their teachers as ‘it seldom happens, especially in mixed classes, that the LSP [Language for Specific Purposes] teacher has the disciplinary knowledge needed to provide reliably accurate instruction in technical varieties of language’ (Huckin, 2003: 8). Faced with this difficulty, we have advocated elsewhere (Granger and Paquot, 2009a) a balanced approach which concurs with Hyland’s (2002b) plea for more specificity in EAP teaching while also subscribing to Eldridge’s view that an essential function of research is to identify ‘similarities and generalities that will facilitate instruction in an imperfect world’ (Eldridge, 2008: 111). We have shown that it is possible to identify both the common core features of an academic word and its discipline-specific characteristics in terms of meaning, lexico-grammar, phraseological patterns, etc. One way of implementing this ‘happy medium’ approach in the classroom is to apply a data-driven learning methodology, which consists of making use of corpus data as a source of learning materials for language students (Johns, 1994). The study of ‘individualized’ examples derived from specialized corpora can be of considerable benefit in helping learners to appreciate the possible linguistic realisations of rhetorical and organizational functions in their own disciplines. As Charles put it, although it may not be possible in all teaching situations to provide materials that are specifically tailored to the disciplines of the students taught, the process of investigation is itself of great value in raising students’ awareness of the patterned nature of academic discourse. With this understanding, students are better equipped to examine the ways in which grammatical patterns and lexical choices combine to perform rhetorical functions within their own disciplines and hence to apply this knowledge to their own academic writing. (2007: 216) In a heterogeneous EAP class, where disciplinary variability constitutes a serious problem, this approach allows teachers to emphasize general academic words and phrasemes which ‘are not likely to be glossed by the content teacher’ (Flowerdew 1993: 236), while also empowering learners by giving them the tools to investigate authentic texts and practices

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in their own disciplines, ‘thereby allowing considerations of subject specificity and disciplinary variation to inform classroom discussion’ (Groom, 2005: 273). My journey into academic vocabulary – from the extraction of potential academic words through their linguistic analysis in expert and learner corpus data, to the pedagogical implications that can be drawn from the results – has contributed to fleshing out this concept and has convincingly demonstrated that academic vocabulary is anything but a chimera.

7.2. Learner corpora, interlanguage and second language acquisition Contrastive Interlanguage Analysis (CIA) (Granger, 1996) involves two types of comparison. One compares native with non-native (or inter-) language, for example native English and the English produced by French-speaking learners. The other type of analysis compares two (or more) interlanguages, for example the English produced by French-speaking learners and the English produced by Italian-speaking learners. Although the CIA method has become quite popular, most studies using the method have been of the first type. Studies comparing more than one IL usually focus on learners from one mother tongue background and use data from one or two other learner populations only to check whether the features they have highlighted in one corpus are common to other learners, or are L1-specific (and so possibly transfer-related). In this book, I have tried to make the most of CIA by systematically exploiting the two types of comparison it allows to examine EFL learners’ use of academic vocabulary. The results show that academic, and more precisely argumentative, essays written by upper-intermediate to advanced EFL learners share a number of linguistic features irrespective of the learners’ mother tongue backgrounds or language families. The common core of interlanguage features that characterize the expression of rhetorical and organizational functions in EFL writing includes a limited lexical repertoire and a lack of register awareness as well as lexico-grammatical and phraseological specificities, the semantic misuse of connectors and labels, the extensive use of chains of connective devices and a marked preference for placing connectors in the sentence-initial position. Several of these linguistic features, and more specifically, the lack of register awareness, may also be found in novice native-speaker writing. However, other features such as lexico-grammatical errors, the use of non-native-like sequences and the overuse of relatively rare expressions seem to be largely learner-specific.

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A systematic analysis of several interlanguages is necessary to analyse the potential influence of developmental, teaching-induced and transferrelated factors on EFL learner writing. By focusing on shared features across L1 learner populations, I have highlighted the important role played by developmental and teaching-induced factors in learners’ written production. I have also shown that it is not always possible to attribute learner-specific features to a single factor, because developmental, teaching-induced and transfer-related effects can reinforce each other (Granger, 2004:135–6). Applying Jarvis’s (2000) methodological framework to learner corpus data has helped identify a number of transfer effects that until now have been largely undocumented in the SLA literature. Lexical transfer has too often been narrowed down to transfer of form/meaning mappings and the third aspect of word knowledge, i.e. use, has rarely been investigated. My study has helped to identify a number of transfer effects relating to word use that make up what, following Hoey (2005), I refer to as ‘transfer of primings’. Transfer of primings includes L1 influence on collocational use, lexico-grammatical and phraseological patterns, discourse function, style and register preferences, and frequency of use. The valuable theoretical insights provided by a learner-corpus based approach to the study of L1 influence bring to the fore the potential contribution of learner corpora for SLA studies. Learner corpora are probably the best – if not the sole – type of learner interlanguage samples which can be used to investigate these transfer effects. In addition, they arguably provide a good account of the complexity and versatility of L1 influence. With its focus on frequency, register differences and phraseology, corpus linguistics clearly has numerous resources and specific tools to offer SLA researchers who wish to further investigate the manifestations of L1 influence on learners’ interlanguage. There are many other variables that interact in learners’ interlanguage which are also in need of careful operationalization. Learner corpora can clearly act as a test bed for studies that aim to provide empirical evidence for theories of second language acquisition. They are not the exclusive preserve of learner corpus researchers, and should feature prominently in the battery of data types used by all SLA specialists.

7.3. Avenues for future research A promising area of research which has only been touched upon in this book lies in the investigation of patterns of difficulty shared by

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mother-tongue English-speaking students and EFL learners. Such research would enable linguistic features that are characteristic of novice writing to be separated from those features that have commonly been attributed to EFL writing. Novice native-speaker writers have been shown to have difficulty with academic language, and more particularly with its highly conventionalized phraseology. Howarth postulated the existence of a continuum of phraseological competence that would ‘encompass mature NS writers at one extreme and weak NNS writers at the other, with NS and NNS students of varying levels of proficiency in between, and some overlap between native and non-native writers’ (Howarth, 1999: 151). Hoey (2005) insisted that primings are constrained by register and genre. He gave the example of the word research which is primed in the mind of academic language users to occur with recent in academic discourse and news reports on research. The collocation is not primed to occur in other text types or other contexts. A direct implication of Hoey’s theory of lexical priming is that academic phraseology cannot be assumed to be primed in the mental lexicon of novice native-speaker writers who have had little contact with academic disciplines. Further research is clearly needed to shed more light on the similarities and differences between EFL learners’ use of academic words and phrasemes and that of novice native-speaker writers. All in all, I have shown that the research paradigm of corpus linguistics is ideally suited to studying the lexical specificities of academic discourse in native-speaker and learner writing. The many corpora already available make it possible to examine a wide range of genres and text types. However, much more could be achieved in the field if other types of corpora were collected. In particular, longitudinal corpora of learner language are sorely lacking.1 L1 writing skills also need to figure more prominently in future research. It does not make sense to expect learners to write properly in English, and produce coherent and cohesive texts in a foreign language, if they cannot already perform this task in their mother tongue. Learner corpus research would greatly benefit from the design of comparable corpora of L1 and L2 writing produced by the same learners. There is also an urgent need for learner corpora which represent academic text types other than argumentative essays. New corpora such as the British Academic Written Corpus and the Michigan Corpus of Upper-level Student Papers are thus particularly welcome, as they consist of ESP texts produced by writers at different stages of undergraduate and graduate level study, both native and non-native speakers, in a variety of disciplines. A new corpus currently under development at Louvain, the Varieties of English for Specific Purposes dAtabase (VESPA) learner corpus, has been designed as the ESP

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counterpart of the International Corpus of Learner English. It includes English for specific purposes texts written by L2 writers from various mother tongue backgrounds. New avenues of research can now be explored by SLA specialists, corpus learner researchers and teachers alike. Not only have a number of largely unrecognized transfer effects been brought to light, but the potential influence of L1 frequency on learner interlanguage has also been highlighted. The role of frequency is a key issue in second language acquisition. However, it has generally been conceived of in terms of L2 frequency.2 Not a single article in the special issue of Studies in Second Language Acquisition (2002, Volume 24/2) is devoted to L1 frequency effects and their implications for second language acquisition. The volume largely focuses on input frequency, and its relation with language processing, intake3, and implicit vs. explicit learning. Similarly, in a state-of-the-art article on SLA theory, Gregg (2003) only addresses the issue of frequency in relation to the role of input, thus restricting his discussion to the question of ‘how often does input of X need to be provided in order for X to be acquired?’ (Gregg, 2003: 846). The role of L1 frequency is particularly interesting, and can be expected to be the object of much attention in the next few years. My journey into academic vocabulary has led me to explore a large number of fascinating fields of research, and experiment with a wide range of tools and methods. Navigating my way through the complexity of each of these research areas, I have sought to unify several aspects of English for academic purposes, learner corpus research, and second language acquisition into a coherent whole. The challenges presented by such a cross-disciplinary position have quickly been proved worthwhile by the fresh light the approach has shed on key issues such as the nature of academic vocabulary, the relative influence of developmental features and transfer effects, and the methodological aspects of interlanguage studies. I hope that this book will serve as a starting block for further research into the many issues raised. There is still so much to explore.

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Appendix 1: Expressing cause and effect

Comparisons based on total number of running words ICLE

BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Abs.

Rel.

Abs.

Rel.

314 127 186 1

26.9

755 492 263 −

22.7

6.3 (++)

cause causes *causae

229 100 129

19.7

550 244 306

16.6

4.6

factor factors

274 194 78 2

23.5

1,175 577 598 −

35.4

40.2 (− −)

source sources *sourse

60

5.2

500 286 214 −

15

81.2 (− −)

183

5.5

83.3 (++)

nouns cause

factor

source

origin origin origins *origine

48 11 1 173 112 61

14.8

root roots

939 563 374 1 1

80.6

1,802 1105 697 − −

54.3

92.2 (++)

reason reasons *reaons *reasongs

319

27.4

450 223 269 − − − − − − −

13.6

87.1 (++)

root

reason

consequence consequence consequences *consecvencies *consecuence *consecuences *consecuenses *consequencies *consequense *consequenses

76 227 1 2 3 2 4 1 3

72 111

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220

ICLE

BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Abs.

Rel.

Abs.

33.9

1,830 1249 581

55

84.8 (− −)

effect effects efect

395 214 179 2 381 167 213 1

32.7

813 502 311 −

24.5

20.9 (++)

result results *resut

28

2.4

143 135 8

4.3

9.03 (− −)

411

12.4

170.4 (− −)

259.3

2.5

570 133 66 317 54 125 44 6 64 11

17.2

211 (++)

3.8

0.8

276

8.3

2.6

6.8

67.4 (− −)

3

6.2

effect

result

outcome outcome outcomes implication

21 7 12

1

implication implications TOTAL NOUNS

4 8 3,124

Rel.

93 318 268

8,612

verbs cause cause causes caused causing bring about brings brings brought brining contribute to

499 140 106 220 33 51 25 10 14 2 116

contribute contributes contributed contributing *contribuates generate

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10

14

52 18 82 26 − 1.2

3 2 9 0 20

give gives gave given giving

4.4

61 20 21 13 1

generate generates generated generating give rise to

42.8

63 23 119 22 1.7

8 4 3 5 0

227

101 23 21 32 18 7

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induce

Rel.

Abs.

15

1.3

67

7 8 0 0

lead leads led leading

356 184 83 72 17

prompt

12 prompt prompts prompted prompting

provoke

2

arise from/out of

31.8 (++)

115

3.5

22.1 (− −)

4.9

0.6

161

8.6

327 104 18 138 67

9.8

0

0.2

88

2.7

39.1 (− −)

31 16 34 7

489

42

171

5.2

666.1 (++)

8

0.7

145

4.4

46 (− −)

14.3

115.2 (− −)

4 2 2 0 0 39

derive derives derived deriving *derivated

20.2

2 0 0 0

arise arises arose arisen arising derive

671 161 105 334 71

38 11 102 10 − − −

30 33 32 5

yield yields yielded yielding make sb/sth do sth#

2.7

14 13 82 6 4.3

114

Rel. 2

14 8 16 8 1 2 1

result results resulted resulting yield

30.5

1

50

LogL

19 5 35 8

4 2 3 3

provoke provokes provoked provoking provocate provocated provoqued result in/from

BNC−AC−HUM

Abs. induce induces induced inducing lead to

221

31 28 30 4 52 3.4

12 8 15 3 1

476 77 68 297 34 −

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ICLE

emerge

Rel.

Abs.

33

2.8

466 107 95 221 43

14

126.2 (− −)

0.3

74

2.2

23.7 (− −)

1.7

7 (− −)

2.9

13.3 (− −)

125.7

66.8 (++)

11 6 15 1 4

follow follows followed following trigger

1 0 2 1 8

trigger triggers triggered triggering stem from

0.7

7

56 14 3 27 12

0.6

68

1 5 0 1 1,847

Rel.

33 35 5 1

5 0 3 0

stem stems stemmed stemming TOTAL VERBS

LogL

Abs. emerge emerges emerged emerging follow from

BNC−AC−HUM

14 22 23 9 158.5

4,174

adjectives consequent

10

0.9

53

1.6

3.7

responsible (for)

171

14.7

344

10.4

13.3 (++)

TOTAL ADJ.

181

15.5

397

12

4.89

prepositions because of

531

45.6

599

18

229.6 (++)

due to

246

21.1

195

5.9

175.1 (++)

as a result of

79

6.8

196

5.9

1.1

as a consequence of

7

0.6

22

0.7

0.1

in consequence of

5

0.4

1

0

8.7 (++)

in view of

8

0.7

66

2

10.6 (− −)

owing to

17

1.5

52

1.6

0.1

in (the) light of

7

0.6

109

3.3

31.6 (− −)

199

17

35

1

360.1 (++)

3

0.3

22

0.7

3

on account of

7

0.6

24

0.7

0.19

TOTAL PREP.

1,109

95

1,321

39.8

433.4 (++)

thanks to on the grounds of

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223 BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Abs.

Rel.

Abs.

Rel.

701 689 12

60.1

1,412

42.5

54.1 (++)

26

2.2

130

3.9

7.7 (−)

183 179 4

15.7

143

4.3

132.4 (++)

446

38.3

1,767

53.2

41.2 (− −)

Adverbs therefore therefore *therefor accordingly consequently consequently *consecuently thus hence so

42

3.6

283

8.5

33.3 (− −)

1,436

123.2

1,894

57

457.8 (++)

thereby

15

1.3

182

5.5

43.8 (− −)

as a result

103

8.8

101

3

55.7 (++)

as a consequence

35

3

20

0.6

34.3 (++)

in consequence

11

0.9

14

0.4

3.8

by implication TOTAL ADVERBS

0

0

35

1.1

21.1 (− −)

2,998

257.2

5,981

180

243.3 (++)

214

2,207

66.4

1553.8 (++)

955

28.74

17.1 (++)

conjunctions because because *becausae *becaus

2,495 2,493 1 1

since##

428

36.7

##

331

28.4

883

26.6

1

58

5

1,036

31.2

325.9 (− −)

as

for so that

273

23.4

696

PRO is why

220 189 18 12

18.9 16.2 1.5 1

52

0.4

83

that is why this is why which is why on the grounds that TOTAL CONJ. TOTAL

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5 3,810 13,066

326.9 1121

21 22 18 12

5,912 26,407

1.56 0.7 0.5 0.4 2.5 178 794.9

2.4 359 (++) 381.7 (++) 24.7 (++) 0.3 25 (− −) 809.1 (++) 989.9 (++)

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Comparisons based on total number of ‘cause and effect’ lexical items ICLE

BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Abs.

%

Abs.

%

314 229 274 60 173 939 319 395 381 28 12

2.4 1.8 2.1 0.55 1.3 7.2 2.4 3 2.9 0.2 0.1

755 550 1,175 500 183 1,802 450 1,830 813 143 446

2.9 2.1 4.5 1.9 0.7 6.8 1.7 6.9 3.1 0.5 1.7

6.9 (− −) 4.9 145.3 (− −) 153.3 (− −) 36.4 (++) 1.7 23.5 (++) 263.8 (− −) 0.8 24.4 (− −) 274 (− −)

3,124

23.9

8,612

32.6

231.2 (− −)

499 51 116 14 20 15 356 12 50 114 2 489 8 39 33 4 8 7

3.8 0.4 0.9 0.1 0.2 0.1 2.7 0.1 0.4 0.9 0.0 3.7 0.1 0.3 0.3 0.0 0.1 0.1

570 125 276 227 101 67 671 115 161 327 88 171 145 476 466 74 56 68

2.2 0.5 1.1 0.9 0.4 0.3 2.5 0.4 0.6 1.2 0.3 0.7 0.6 1.8 1.8 0.3 0.2 0.3

84.4 (++) 1.4 2.2 106.6 (− −) 16.9 (− −) 9 (− −) 1.1 39.5 (− −) 8.9 (− −) 10.9 (− −) 56 (− −) 463.6 (++) 71.5 (− −) 192.7 (− −) 201 (− −) 36.8 (− −) 14.5 (− −) 23.6 (− −)

1,847

14.1

4,174

15.8

16.2 (− −)

consequent responsible (for)

10 171

0.1 1.3

53 344

0.2 1.3

9.6 (− −) 0

TOTAL ADJ.

181

1.4

397

1.5

0.9

531 246 79 7

4.1 1.9 0.6 0.1

599 195 196 22

2.3 0.7 0.7 0.1

93.3 (++) 95.3 (++) 2.4 1.1

nouns cause factor source origin root reason consequence effect result outcome implication TOTAL NOUNS Verbs cause bring about contribute to generate give rise to induce lead to prompt provoke result in yield make sb/sth do sth# arise from/out of derive emerge follow from trigger stem TOTAL VERBS adjectives

prepositions because of due to as a result of as a consequence of

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225 BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Abs.

%

Abs.

%

in consequence of in view of owing to in (the) light of thanks to on the grounds of on account of

5 8 17 7 199 3 7

0.0 0.1 0.1 0.1 1.5 0.0 0.1

1 66 52 109 35 22 24

0 0.3 0.2 0.4 0.1 0.1 0.1

6.45 20.1 (− −) 2.4 50.2 (− −) 270.7 (++) 6 1.7

TOTAL PREP.

1109

8.5

1321

5

164.1 (++)

therefore accordingly consequently thus hence so thereby as a result as a consequence in consequence by implication

701 26 183 446 42 1,436 15 103 35 11 0

5.4 0.2 1.4 3.4 0.3 11 0.1 0.8 0.3 0.1 0

1,412 130 143 1,767 283 1,894 182 101 20 14 35

5.4 0.5 0.5 6.7 1.1 7.2 0.7 0.4 0.1 0.1 0.1

0.0 21.4 (− −) 72.6 (++) 182.7 (− −) 70.2 (− −) 144.9 (++) 73.4 (− −) 26.2 (++) 21.4 (++) 1.3 28.1 (− −)

TOTAL ADVERBS

2,998

23

5,981

22.7

0.3

adverbs

Conjunctions because since## as## for so that PRO is why that is why this is why which is why on the grounds that

2,495 428 331 58 273 220 189 28 3 5

19.1 3.3 2.6 0.4 2.1 1.7 1.5 0.2 0.0 0.0

2,207 955 883 1,036 696 52 22 18 12 83

8.4 3.6 3.3 3.9 2.6 0.2 0.1 0.1 0.0 0.3

TOTAL CONJ.

3,810

29.2

5,912

22.4

TOTAL

13,066

100

26,407

100

#

790.6 (++) 2.9 19.3 (− −) 507.59 (− −) 10.92 (−) 262.8 (++) 294.5 (++) 14.8 (++) 1.3 39.4 (− −) 158.3 (++)

Estimations based on Gilquin (2008). Estimations based on an analysis of the first 200 occurrences of the word in each corpus.

##

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Comparisons based on total number of running words ICLE Abs.

BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Rel.

Abs.

Rel.

0.2 0.2 0

116 100 16

3.49

2 0 7 16 1 1

2.1 0.6 1.4 0.1 0.1

212 106 106 − −

6.38 3.19 3.19

0.5 0.5 0

147 76 71

4.4

6 0

0.3 0.1 0 0.1 0.1

19 10 9 − −

0.6

1 0 1 1 3 0

0.3 0.3 0

175 133 42

5.3

analogy analogies

25 18 7

2.1 1.5 0.6

522 470 52

15.7 14.2 1.6

178.3 (− −)

contrast contrasts

38 36 0 1 1

3.3 3.1 0 0.1 0.1

311 249 62 − −

9.4

49.3 (− −)

comparison comparisons *comparaison *comparision difference differences *differencies *difference

394 187 191 6 3

33.8 16 16.4 0.5 0.3

1,318 802 516 − −

nouns resemblance resemblance resemblances

2

similarity

25 similarity similarities *similarieties *similiraty

parallel

6 parallel parallels

parallelism

3 parallelism parallelisms *paralelism *parallelim

analogy

3

contrast

comparison

difference

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54.9 (− −)

3 0.5 35.2 (− −)

54 (− −) 2.3 2.1 2 0.3 0.3

82.9 (− −) 4 1.3

7.5 1.9

39.7 24.1 15.5

8 (− −)

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Appendix 2 ICLE Abs. *diference *difference *difference *differency *differene *difference *diffrences

227 BNC−AC−HUM

Rel.

Abs.

LogL

Rel.

1 1 1 1 1 1 1

0.1 0.1 0.1 0.1 0.1 0.1 0.1

− − − − − − −

differentiation differentiation differentiations *differenciation

3

0.3 0.2 0 0.1

76 72 4 −

2.3

2 0 1

distinction

47 38 9

4.1 3.3 0.8

595 498 97

17.9

2

0.2

10

0.3

0.6

16.8

8.5 (+)

distinction distinctions distinctiveness (the) same

246

28.3 (− −) 2.2 0.1 148.4 (− −)

15 2.9

1

21.1 0.1

559

*similars

17 16 1

1.5 1.4 0.1

28 27 1

0.8

3

contrary contraries

44 40 4

3.78 3.4 0.3

85 58 27

2.6

4.2

opposite opposites

(the) contrary

(the) opposite

(the) reverse TOTAL NOUNS

−

5

0.4

56

1.7

12.6 (− −)

860

73.8

4,229

127.3

283.7 (− −)

90.8 13.7 13.5 0.2 0.1 0.1 23.6 1.4 1 0.4 2 0.1 130 129.6 0.2 0.1 0.1 0.3

2,580 1,027

77.7 30.9 30.9

18.8 (++) 110.5 (− −)

55 1055 223 137 52 98 63 2,496 2496 − − − 72

1.7 31.8 6.7 4.1 1.6 3 1.9 75.1 75.1

25.8 (− −) 20.4 (− −) 59.8 (− −) 31.3 (− −) 10.9 (− −) 3.3 30.3 (− −) 268 (++)

2.17

22.75 (− −)

Adjectives same similar similar *similiar *simmilar analogous common comparable identical parallel alike contrasting different different *differents *differrent *diffrent differing

1,058 160 157 2 1 1 275 16 12 5 23 1 1,515 1510 2 1 2 4

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228

ICLE Abs. distinct

distinctive distinguishable unlike contrary opposite reverse

Abs.

Rel.

278 278 −

8.4

7 2

0.8 0.6 0.2

163 33 43 27 127 23

4.9 1 1.3 0.8 3.8 0.7

40.3 (− −) 9.9 (− −) 14.9 (− −) 0.5 1.1 0.1

3 4

1.1 0.2 0.2 0.6 4.6 0.6 0.3 0.3

8,552

257.4

6.4

5.5

13 2 2 7 53 7

reverse *reversed TOTAL ADJECTIVES

LogL

Rel.

9 distinct *distinc

BNC−AC−HUM

3,163

271.4

111.4 (− −) 8.4

verbs resemble

31 16 3 11 1

2.7 1.4 0.3 0.9 0.1

138 51 18 46 23

4.2

resemble resembled resembles resembling

41 27 3 4 7

3.52 2.3 0.3 0.3 0.6

137 73 16 48 28

4.1

correspond corresponded corresponds corresponding

106 72 21 12 1

9.1 6.2 1.8 1.0 0.1

102 42 38 19 3

3.1

look like looks like looked like looking like

129 75 36 2 16

11.1 6.4 3.1 0.2 1.4

278 140 71 17 50

8.4

compare compared compares comparing

2

0.2 0.1 0 0 0.1

56

1.7

1 0 0 1 3 4 0 0

0.6 0.3 0.3 0 0

137 31 47 42 17

correspond

look like

compare

parallel parallel parallels paralleled paralleling contrast

7 contrast contrasted contrasts contrasting

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1.5 0.5 1.4 0.7 0.8 2.2 0.5 1.4 0.8 58.9 (++) 1.3 1.1 0.6 0.1 6.6 (+) 4.2 2.1 0.5 1.5

9 4 38 5

21.7 (− −) 0.3 0.1 1.1 0.2

4.1

45.3 (− −) 6.4 11 (− −)

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229 BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Rel.

Abs.

Rel.

differ differs differed

86 57 29 0

7.4 4.9 2.5 0

242 112 73 57

7.29 3.4 2.2 1.7

5 0.3 34.3 (− −)

107 70 16 12 6 2 1

9.2

distinguish distinguished distinguishes distinguishing *distinquish *distingush

6 1.4 1.0 0.5 0.2 0.1

404 164 116 36 88 − −

12.16 4.9 3.4 2.2 1.7

7.1 (− −) 1.8 15.4 (− −) 0.0 24.5 (− −)

differentiate differentiate differentiates differentiated differentiating *differenciate

18 12 1 2 1 2

1.5 1.0 0.1 0.2 0.1 0.2

74 22 6 31 15 −

TOTAL VERBS

527

45.2

31 26 1 1 3 1 0 0 1 9 38 0 42 9

differ

distinguish

2.2

0.01

2.09 0.7 0.2 0.9 0.5

1.4 0.6 9 (− −) 4.2

1,568

47.2

0.7

2.7 2.2 0.1 0.1 0.3

394

11.9

98.6 (− −)

0.1 0 0 0.1 0.8 3.3 0 3.6 0.8 0.2 0.6 0.1 0 0 0 1.2 1.1 0.1 0 0.1 35.9

2 2 29 − 118 56 3 97 185 116 69 0 23 14 9 69

0.1 0.1 0.9

0.1 1.2 17.4 (− −) − 30.3 (− −) 9.3 (+) 1.8 1.3 62.7 (− −) 54.9 (− −) 13.7 (− −) 2.7 13.8 (− −)

adverbs similarly similarly *similarely *similarily *similary analogously identically correspondingly parallely likewise in the same way contrastingly differently by/in contrast by contrast in contrast by way of contrast by/in comparison by comparison in comparison comparatively comparatively *comparitively contrariwise distinctively on the other hand

2 7 1 0 0 0 14 13 1 0 1 418

3.6 1.7 0.1 2.9

5.6 3.5 0.7 0.4 0.3 2.1

3.9

0.1 0.8 11.2

2.4 9.3 (− −) 258.3 (++)

− 4 25 372

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230

ICLE

BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Abs.

Rel.

Abs.

Rel.

(on the one hand) *on the other side *on the opposite on the contrary on the contrary *on the contray *on the contrairy

100 23 3 164 160 3 1

8.6 2 0.3 14

136 0 0 95 95 − −

4.1 0 0 2.9

Other expressions with contrary *in contrary *by the contrary *to the contrary quite the contrary *in the contrary rather the contrary *quite contrary *contrary

13

1.1

reversely conversely

1 6

0.1 0.5

0 62

0 1.9

12.9 (− −)

875

76.7

1,250

38.7

231.7 (++)

like# unlike in parallel with as opposed to as against in contrast to/with in contrast to in contrast with versus contrary to *in contrary to *opposite to by/in comparison with in comparison with in comparison to by comparison with in comparison with

1,435 26 0 7 0 23 15 8 7 18 2 3 39 28 11 0 0

123.1 2.2 0 0.6 0 2 1.3 0.7 0.6 1.5 0.2 0.3 3.4 2.4 0.9 0 0

2,812 244 8 121 46 82 73 9 53 66 0 0 52 14 4 21 14

84.7 7.3 0.2 3.6 1.4 2.5 2.2 0.3 1.6 2 0 0 1.6 0.4 0.1 0.6 0.4

127.5 (++) 45.8 (− −) 4.8 37.4 (− −) 27.7 (− −) 0.9 4 3.5 7.5 (− −) 0.9

TOTAL PREP.

1,560

133.8

3,484

104.9

62 (++)

Conjunctions as # while #

1,157 206

99.3 17.7

5,045 1264

151.9 38

185.4 (− −) 124.4 (− −)

TOTAL ADVERBS

2

1 1 2 4 2 1 1 1

29.8 (++) 62 (++) 8.1 (++) 158.9 (++)

0.1 0 0 0 2 0 0 0 0

0 0 0 0.1 0 0 0 0

4.4

Prepositions

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whereas whereas wheras TOTAL CONJ.

231 BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Abs.

Rel.

Abs.

Rel.

137 135 2

11.8 11.6 0.2

442

13.3

1.6

1,500

128.7

6,751

203.2

281.3 (− −)

as . . . as in the same way as/that compared with/to compared with compared to

1,287 19 49 12 37

110.4 1.6 4. 1.0 3.2

2,766 38 155 113 42

83.26 1.14 4.67 3.4 1.26

67.5 (++) 1.5 0.4 21.3 (− −) 15.8 (+)

CONJ compared to/with as compared to/with when compared to/with if compared to/with

14

1.2 0.4 0.3 0.5

32 11 20 1

1

29,249

880.5

Other expressions

TOTAL

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5 3 6 9,854

845.5

0.5 0.3 0.6 0.0

0.2 2.3 11 (++) 12.24 (− −)

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232

Comparisons based on total number of ‘comparison and contrast’ lexical items ICLE

BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Abs.

%

Abs.

%

resemblance similarity parallel parallelism analogy contrast comparison difference differentiation distinction distinctiveness (the) same (the) contrary (the) opposite (the) reverse

2 25 6 3 3 25 38 394 3 47 2 246 17 44 5

0.0 0.3 0.1 0.0 0.0 0.3 0.4 4 0.0 0.5 0.0 2.5 0.2 0.5 0.1

116 212 147 19 175 522 311 1,318 76 595 10 559 28 85 56

0.4 0.7 0.5 0.1 0.1 1.8 1.1 4.5 0.3 2.0 0.0 1.9 0.1 0.3 0.2

52.6 (− −) 32.3 (− −) 51.3 (− −) 1.8 79.5 (− −) 168.9 (− −) 45.1 (− −) 4.4 26.9 (− −) 138.9 (− −) 0.5 11.8 (− −) 3.5 5.1 11.7 (− −)

TOTAL NOUNS

860

8.7

4,229

14.5

202.8 (− −)

same similar analogous common comparable identical parallel alike contrasting different differing distinct distinctive distinguishable unlike contrary opposite reverse

1,058 160 1 275 16 12 5 23 1 1,515 4 9 13 2 2 7 53 7

10.7 1.6 0.0 2.8 0.2 0.1 0.1 0.2 0.0 15.4 0.0 0.1 0.1 0.0 0.0 0.1 0.5 0.1

2,580 1,027 55 1055 223 137 52 98 63 2,496 72 278 163 33 43 27 127 23

0.9 3.5 0.2 3.6 0.8 0.5 0.2 0.3 0.2 8.5 0.3 1 0.6 0.1 0.2 0.1 0.4 0.1

28.2(++) 98.8(− −) 24.7(− −) 15.1(− −) 56.2 (− −) 29.2 (− −) 10.1 (−) 2.6 29 (− −) 307.7 (++) 21.5 (− −) 106.2 (− −) 37.7 (− −) 9.3 (− −) 14.1 (− −) 0.4 1.7 0.1

TOTAL ADJECTIVES

3,163

32.1

8,552

29.2

19.82 (++)

31 41 106 129 2

0.3 0.4 1.1 1.3 0.0

138 137 102 278 56

0.5 0.5 0.4 1 0.2

4.5 0.5 63.2 (++) 8.7 (+) 20.6 (−)

Nouns

Adjectives

Verbs resemble correspond look like compare parallel

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LogL

Abs.

%

Abs.

%

contrast differ distinguish differentiate

7 86 107 18

0.1 0.9 1.1 0.2

137 242 404 74

0.5 0.8 1.4 0.3

42.9 (− −) 0.2 5.1 1.6

TOTAL VERBS

527

5.4

1,568

5.4

0

31 1 0 0 1 9 38 0 42 9

0.3 0.0 0 0 0.0 0.1 0.4 0 0.4 0.1

1.4 0.0 0.0 0.1 0 0.4 0.2 0.0 0.3 0.6

92.3 (− −) 0.1 1.2 16.8 (− −) 2.8 28.3 (− −) 10.4 (++) 1.7 1.8 59.4 (− −)

0 0.1

2.8 13.4 (− −)

0.2 0.0 0.1 1.3 0.5 0 0 0.3 0.0

3.3 2.3 8.8 (− −) 275.8 (++) 33 (++) 63.4 (++) 8.3 (++) 166.8 (++) 25.2 (++)

Adverbs similarly analogously identically correspondingly parallely likewise in the same way contrastingly differently by/in contrast by contrast in contrast by way of contrast by/in comparison by comparison in comparison comparatively contrariwise distinctively on the other hand (on the one hand) *on the other side *on the opposite on the contrary Other expressions with contrary reversely conversely TOTAL ADVERBS

14 0 1 418 100 23 3 164 13

0.1 0 0.0 4.2 1.0 0.2 0.0 1.7 0.1

394 2 2 29 0 118 56 3 97 185 116 69 0 23 14 9 69 4 25 372 136 0 0 95 2

1 6

0.0 0.1

0 62

0 0.2

2.8 12 (−)

875

8.9

1,250

4.3

258.6 (++)

1,435 26 0 7 0 23 7 18 2

14.6 0.3 0 0.1 0 0.2 0.1 0.2 0.0

2,812 244 8 121 46 82 53 66 0

9.6 0.8 0.0 0.4 0.2 0.3 0.2 0.2 0

155.8 (++) 42.3 (− −) 4.7 35.3 (− −) 26.7 (− −) 0.6 6.9 (− −) 0.7 5.5

2 7 1 0

0.0 0 0 0

Prepositions like# unlike in parallel with as opposed to as against in contrast to/with versus contrary to *in contrary to

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BNC−AC−HUM

LogL

Abs.

%

Abs.

%

3 39

0.0 0.4

0 52

0 0.2

8.3 (+) 13.4 (+)

1,560

15.8

3,484

11.9

83.9 (++)

as# while# whereas

1,157 206 137

11.7 2.1 1.4

5,045 1264 442

17.3 4.3 1.5

150.5 (− −) 110.6 (− −) 0.7

TOTAL CONJ.

1,500

15.2

6,751

23.1

231.6 (− −)

as … as in the same way as/that compared with/to CONJ compared to/ with

1,287 19 49 14

13.1 0.2 0.5 0.1

2,766 38 155 32

9.5 0.1 0.5 0.1

87.8 (++) 2.7 0.2 0.6

TOTAL

9,854

100

29,249

100

*opposite to by/in comparison with TOTAL PREP. Conjunctions

Other expressions

# Estimations based on an analysis of the first 200 occurrences of the word in each corpus.

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See Stein (2008) for a review of major twentieth-century projects aimed at developing a controlled vocabulary for foreign language learners. This specific set of abstract nouns has variously been referred to as ‘signalling words’ (Jordan, 1984), ‘anaphoric nouns’ (Francis, 1986), ‘carrier nouns’ (Ivanicˇ, 1991), ‘shell nouns’ (Schmid, 2000) and ‘discourse-organising words’ (McCarthy, 1991).

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The BAWE Pilot Corpus was a pilot for the ESRC funded project ‘An investigation of genres of assessed writing in British higher education (RES-000-23-0800). It was created in 2001 under the directorship of Hilary Nesi, with support from the University of Warwick Teaching Development Fund. The British Academic Written English (BAWE) corpus was developed at the Universities of Warwick, Reading and Oxford Brookes under the directorship of Hilary Nesi and Sheena Gardner (formerly of the Centre for Applied Linguistics at Warwick University), Paul Thompson (Department of Applied Linguistics, Reading) and Paul Wickens (Westminster Institute of Education, Oxford Brookes), with funding from the ESRC (RES-000-23-0800). The BAWE corpus contains 2761 pieces of proficient assessed student writing. Holdings are fairly evenly distributed across four broad disciplinary areas (Arts and Humanities, Social Sciences, Life Sciences and Physical Sciences). Thirty-five disciplines are represented. See http://ucrel.lancs.ac.uk/claws7tags.html for a list of tags used in CLAWS C7 tagset (accessed 2 August 2009). If a text is 75,000 words long, it has 75,000 tokens. But a lot of these words will be repeated, and there may be only 2,000 different words (called types) in the text. Sentence examples are taken from the Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English (2005) See the definition of a reference corpus proposed by the Expert Advisory Group on Language Engineering Standards (EAGLES96) at http://www.ilc.cnr.it/ EAGLES96/corpustyp/node18.html (accessed 2 August 2009). Each of these corpora consists of one million words of British or American written English. The four corpora are equivalent in the sense that they were compiled using the same corpus design and sampling methods. For more information about these corpora, see http://khnt.hit.uib.no/icame/manuals (accessed 2 August 2009).

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Katz (1996: 19) distinguishes between ‘document-level burstiness’, i.e. ‘multiple occurrences of a content word or phrase in a single-text document, which is contrasted with the fact that most other documents contain no instances of this word or phrase at all’; and ‘within-document burstiness’ or ‘burstiness proper’, i.e. the ‘close proximity of all or some individual instances of a content word or phrase within a document exhibiting multiple occurrences’. Scott’s (2004) WordSmith Tools 4 can compute Juilland’s D values, but only for words in a single file, based on an arbitrary division of a text into 8 segments of equal size. Available at http://www.lextutor.ca/vp/eng/ (accessed 2 August 2009).

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A random sample of 20 essays from each of the 16 L1 sub-corpora available in the second version of ICLE were submitted to a professional rater who was asked to rate them on the basis of the Common European Framework of Reference for Languages (CEF) descriptors for writing. While 60 per cent of the sample essays were rated as advanced (C1 or C2), the proportion was much higher in some sub-corpora, reaching 100 per cent for students with Swedish mother tongue, but falling as low as 40 per cent for Spanish speakers (Granger et al., 2009: 11–12). ICLEv2 now also includes texts written by students with Chinese, Japanese, Norwegian, Turkish and Tswana mother tongue backgrounds (cf. Granger et al., 2009). ICLE also comprises a Bulgarian sub-corpus. However, essays written by Bulgarian-speaking learners were mainly written without the help of reference tools and were therefore not included in the analysis. Texts longer than 45,000 words were sampled so as to allow for a wider coverage of text types and avoid over-representation of idiosyncratic uses. This design criterion, however, causes problems for certain types of linguistic enquiries. A number of studies in the field of English for academic purposes have shown that words may behave differently and display different preferred lexicogrammatical environments in different sections of a text (see, for example, Gledhill, 2000). Quantitative comparisons between the BNC and ICLE thus have to be treated with caution, especially when the lexical items under study are closely linked to specific parts of texts (e.g. words and phrasemes used to introduce the main topic or a conclusion). See Stefan Evert’s webpage (http: //www.collocations.de/index.html (accessed 2 August 2009)) for a comprehensive list of measures of association and their mathematical interpretation.

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In f[n, c], f is the frequency, n the node and c the collocate. http://www.oed.com (accessed 2 August 2009). These three nouns are listed under the first sense of ‘classic’ in LODCE4.

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These figures are based on disambiguated data. The instances of illustrate used in the sense of ‘to put pictures in a book, article, etc’ are not included. Estimations based on an analysis of the first 200 occurrences of the conjunction in the BNC-AC-HUM. Estimations based on an analysis of the first 200 occurrences of the preposition in the BNC-AC-HUM. This does not mean, however, that there are no idioms, similes, compounds, phrasal verbs, commonplaces and allusions to proverbs and quotations in academic prose. As shown by Gläser, ‘authors of scientific writing are prone to modify idioms, proverbs, and quotations for intellectual punning and sophisticated allusions’ (1998: 143). Studies focusing on terminological terms used in English for Specific Purposes have also revealed the pervasiveness of compounds (e.g. Bourigault et al., 2004) in specialized texts.

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The ‘word list’ option of WST4 was used to search for any misspelt form of the words under study in the ICLE. The relative frequencies of for instance and example are higher in most learner corpora than in the BNC-AC-HUM in most learner corpora. When the learner corpora for different mother tongues are analysed separately, however, the differences in use are only significant for a few groups. Aggregated frequencies thus also help to reveal general, though moderate, overuse in learner corpora in general. See Miller and Weinert (1995), Siegel (2002) and Biber et al. (1999: 562) for specific functions of like in speech. See Müller (2005: 197–228) for an analysis of like as a discourse marker. Other verb co-occurrents that are quite frequent in the BNC-SP but not found in the BNC-AC-HUM are the verbs get and think. So we’ve got some examples here of some patterns that we want to learn using the N tuple method and tuple and tuple. (BNC-SP) Again think of the example of erm erm a social club you know, relationships between members, although they may be close and intimate and friendly and all that, are not the same as a relationship between members of a family. (BNC-SP)

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The noun root is overused in the ICLE largely because it appears in an essay title given to some of the EFL learners, ‘In the words of the old song: “Money is the root of all evil”’, which learners then tend to work into their essays. The underuse of the conjunctions as and while reported here must be treated with caution as it results from estimations based on an analysis of only the first 100 occurrences of each conjunction in each corpus. AKL words are printed in bold in these examples. John Osborne (Université de Haute Savoie, France) kindly pointed out to me that the sequence according to me also appeared in published textbooks such as Ok! (Lacoste and Marcelin, Nathan 1984), which was widely used in French colleges throughout the 1980s and early 1990s.

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Gledhill (2000) uses the term ‘collocational cascade’ but, following Granger and Paquot (2008a), I prefer to avoid using the adjective ‘collocational’ to refer to sequences of co-occurrents. [P] indicates a new paragraph in learner writing A related problem is that of punctuation. EFL learners sometimes omit commas after sentence-initial subordinate clauses or connectors or before and after appositives such as that is and that is to say (e.g. According to von Mayer, however, what matters is relative poverty* that is to say* the sudden decrease of wealth, ICLE-IT). By contrast, they sometimes erroneously use a comma after the conjunctions although or (even) though (e.g. When I compare these languages I do not consider English as an easy language, although, I do admit that I have noticed some things that are easier about English than about the other languages that I had the chance to learn, ICLE-PO). Osborne (2008) compared adverb placement in the various interlanguages represented in the first version of the International Corpus of Learner English and found that ‘V-Adv-O order is most frequent in the productions of learners whose L1 has verb-raising (French, Italian and Spanish), and least frequent with speakers of V2 languages (Dutch, German and Swedish), with speakers of nonraising languages (Russian, Polish, Czech and Bulgarian) in between’ (Osborne, 2008: 77). See Paquot (2008b and in preparation) for details on the corpus linguistics methods and statistical measures used to operationalize Jarvis’s (2000) framework on learner corpus data. The results reported here are only preliminary. The figures should be treated with caution as the LOCNESS corpus is quite small.

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The quality of the teaching material on the use of connectors in English that is freely available on the Internet is generally quite alarming, especially given that students increasingly use the Internet for study purposes. As shown in Section 4.2.1, when the preferred sentence position of individual connectors is taught, the information is often neither corpus-based nor confirmed by corpus data. Cohesion is often dealt with in grammars, where the focus is always on connectors. It is noteworthy that, in the new corpus-based Cambridge Grammar of English (Carter and McCarthy, 2006), no attention is given to lexical cohesion, although there is a chapter on textual cohesion (‘Grammar across turns and sentences’, pp. 242–62) as well as a full chapter on ‘Grammar and Academic English’ (pp. 266–94). http://www2c.ac-lille.fr/malraux-bethune/FORMAT/super/anglaisinfo/ methodes/ Expressions_et_mots_de_liaison.htm (last accessed: 30 July 2009). See Gilquin et al.(2007a) for a detailed discussion of the role of corpora, and more specifically, learner corpora in the design of EAP materials and for possible explanations of the relatively modest role that corpora have played so far. The ‘Improve your writing skills’ section in the MED2 shows how a rigorous corpus-based method can help users achieve higher levels of accuracy and fluency

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in academic writing. However, to achieve maximum efficiency, it is essential to explore ways of integrating this type of description into the microstructure of dictionaries rather than inserting it as a separate middle section. The Centre for English Corpus Linguistics (Université catholique de Louvain) has therefore recently launched a new dictionary project which consists of a web-based EAP dictionary-cum-writing aid tool, the Louvain EAP Dictionary (LEAD) (see Granger and Paquot, 2008b and 2010). This project is innovative in two main respects: it allows for both onomasiological (via the lexeme) and semasiological (via the concept) access and is customizable according to the learner’s mother tongue and the field in which he or she is specializing (business, medicine, etc.).

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The Centre for English Corpus Linguistics launched the LONGDALE project in January 2008, with the intention of building a large longitudinal database of learner English containing data from learners with a wide range of mother tongue backgrounds. In the LONGDALE project, the same students will be followed over a period of two to three years. The major role of L1 frequency has been identified in a few transfer studies focusing on phonology and syntax (Selinker, 1992: 211; Kamimoto et al., 1992). De Bot et al. distinguish between input and intake as follows: ‘“Input” is everything around us we may perceive with our senses, and “uptake” or “intake” is what we pay attention to and notice’ (2005: 8).

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Note: Page numbers in italics denote illustrations. Aarts, J. 35, 143 Ädel, A. 69, 72, 150, 157, 161 Aijmer, K. 152, 157, 176 Altenberg, B. 83, 106, 121, 126, 150, 152, 180 Archer, D. 42, 45 Aston, G. 73 Baayen, R. H. 145 Bahns, J. 204 Bailey, S. 206 Baker, M. 17, 19, 20, 21, 22, 24 Baker, P. 48 Barkema, H. 84, 100 Barkhuizen, G. 67 Bartning, I. 79 Bauer, L. 12 Bazerman, C. 72 Beheydt, L. 14, 27 Bestgen, Y. 62 Bhatia, V. 26 Biber, D. 2, 29, 55, 83, 122, 137, 143, 179, 211, 237n. 3 Billurog˘lu, A. 16 Biskup, D. 185 Bley-Vroman, R. 70 Bourigault, D. 237n. 7 (Ch. 4) Bowker, L. 35, 206 Brill, E. 37 Buker, S. 81 Burger, H. 83, 121 Burnard, L. 73 Campion, M. E. 11 Candlin, C. 206 Carter, R. 11, 23, 85, 207, 238n. 3 Celce-Murcia, M. 169

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Charles, M. 214 Chen, C. W. 126, 152, 174 Chung, T. 14, 18 Clear, J. 102 Cohen, A. D. 18 Coltier, D. 88 Connor, U. 152, 190 Conrad, S. 59, 83, 85, 121, 179, 180 Cook, G. 207 Corson, D. 13 Cortes, V. 1 Cowan, J. R. 17, 18 Cowie, A. P. 213 Coxhead, A. 3, 5, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 16, 17, 20, 21, 25, 27, 28, 31, 34, 44, 63, 82, 122, 212 Crewe, W. 169, 174, 175, 176, 193, 201 Curado Fuentes, A. 46, 213 Cutting, J. 72 Davies, A. 71 De Bot, K. 239n. 3 Dechert, H. 155, 168 De Cock, S. 30, 72, 86, 121, 157 DeRose, S. 37 Dudley-Evans, T. 211 Eldridge, J. 26, 214 Elley, W. B. 11 Ellis, R. 67 Engels, L. K. 11 Evans, S. 1 Evert, S. 75, 76, 78 Farrell, P. 17, 18, 20 Farrow, M. 48, 50, 62 Feak, C. B. 24

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Field, Y. 171, 177, 193 Firth, A. 70 Fisher, D. 204 Flowerdew, J. 2, 60, 61, 172, 178, 201, 214 Flowerdew, L. 23, 199, 201, 204 Francis, G. 22, 23, 59, 235n. 2 (Ch. 1) Garside, R. 37, 38, 39 Ghadessy, M. 11 Gilquin, G. 1, 7, 70, 71, 151, 153, 195, 197, 207, 207, 208, 209, 210, 225, 238n. 5 Gläser, R. 237n. 7 (Ch. 4) Gledhill, C. 83, 102, 119, 123, 161, 236n. 4, 238n. 9 Goodman, A. 17 Granger, S. 4, 26, 32, 65, 67, 68, 70, 71, 72, 84, 100, 102, 118, 122, 123, 126, 143, 145, 150, 151, 152, 155, 157, 168, 169, 170, 177, 179, 182, 184, 185, 194, 197, 202, 204, 206, 213, 214, 215, 216, 236n. 1, 236n. 2, 238n. 9 Green, C. 1 Gregg, K. R. 218 Gries, S. 48, 50 Groom, N. 215 Halliday, M. 203 Hamp-Lyons, L. 206 Hanciog˘lu, N. 15, 16, 27, 63, 212 Harris, S. 22 Harris Leonhard, B. 85 Hasan, R. 203 Hasselgren, A. 147 Heasley, B. 206 Heatley, A. 44 Hegelheimer, V. 203 Hinkel, E. 1, 3, 33, 59, 148 Hirsh, D. 10, 34 Hoey, M. 23, 26, 192, 216, 217 Hoffmann, S. 75, 76, 86 Hogue, A. 85 Howarth, P. 119, 165, 217 Huckin, T. 26, 214 Hunston, S. 118

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Huntley, H. 9, 11, 16, 82 Hwang, K. 11, 13, 14 Hyland, K. 3, 24, 25, 26, 31, 32, 72, 90, 92, 93, 99, 147, 157, 189, 201, 211, 214 Ide, N. 37 Ivanicˇ, R. 235n. 2 (Ch. 1) Jarvis, S. 4, 182, 183, 184, 185, 197, 216, 238n. 13 Johansson, S. 31 Johns, T. 214 Jordan, M. P. 23, 235n. 2 (Ch. 1) Jordan, R. R. 1, 81, 82, 85, 201, 202, 203, 211 Juilland, A. 50 Kamimoto, T. 239n. 2 Katz, S. 48, 236n. 8 Kellerman, E. 197 King, P. 206 Kosem, I. 62 Krishnamurthy, R. 62 Kroll, B. 69 Lake, J. 169, 170, 201 Lakshmanan, U. 70, 71 Larsen-Freeman, D. 169 Laruelle, P. 91 Laufer, B. 10 Lee, D. 73, 74, 132 Leech G. 11, 34, 35, 70, 72 Lennon, P. 165, 168 Li, E. S.-L. 18 Liou, H.-C. 206 Lonon Blanton, L. 85 Lorenz, G. 72, 101, 143, 146, 150, 152, 157, 169, 173, 177, 193 Luzón Marco, M. J. 22, 83, 137 Lynn, R. W. 11 Major, M. 11 Martin, A. 19, 20, 21, 27 Martínez, I. 15, 27, 34, 82, 212 McCarthy, M. 9, 23, 211, 235n. 2 (Ch.1), 238n. 3,

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Quirk, R. 179 Rayson, P. 29, 30, 37, 38, 43, 47, 50, 61, 76, 145, 150 Renouf, A. 102 Reynolds, D. W. 1 Ringbom, H. 182, 185, 192 Rodriguez, E. C. 50 Rohrback, J.-M. 160 Römer, U. 85 Ruetten, M. 85 Rumisek, L. 85 Rundell, M. 201, 207 St Johns, M. J. 211 Saville-Troike, M. 26 Scarcella, R. C. 13 Schleppegrell, M. J. 180 Schmid, H.-J. 235n. 2 (Ch.1) Schmitt, D. 11, 16 Schmitt, N. 11, 16 Scott, M. 2, 45, 46, 47, 48, 69, 236n. 9 Seale, C. 46 Selinker, L. 70, 71, 182, 183, 239n. 2 Shaw, P. 69 Siegel, M. 237n. 3 Siepmann, D. 82, 88, 101, 107, 126 Sinclair, J. M. 2, 26, 35, 82, 101, 102, 118 Smith, N. 35, 37, 39 Soler, V. 118 Stein, G. 16, 235n. 1 (Ch.1) Strevens, P. 13 Stubbs, M. 10 Sugiura, M. 126, 152, 174, 177, 179, 203 Summers, D. 207 Sutarsyah, C. 26 Swales, J. M. 24, 31, 61, 86, 92, 132, 189, 207 Swallow, H. 185 Syder, F. H. 71 Tan, M. 71 Tankó, G. 147 Tapper, M. 126, 150, 152 Thomas, J. 42

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Thompson, G. 118 Thompson, P. 255n. 2 Thurstun, J. 206 Tognini-Bonelli, E. 30, 35, 36, 118 Tribble, C. 46, 62, 69 Trimble, L. 18, 20, 21 Tse, P. 3, 25, 26, 92 Tseng, Y.-C. 206 Tutin, A. 118 Tyson, S. 126, 152, 169, 170, 177, 184

Weinert, R. 237n. 3 Weissberg, R. 80 West, M. 10, 11, 12, 15, 27, 44, 60 Widdowson, H. G. 22, 61, 207, 212 Wilkins, D. A. 81 Wilson, A. 42 Winter, E. 22 Wray, A. 86

Van Roey, J. 185 Vassileva, I. 152 Voutilainen, A. 38

Yang, H. 13, 14, 17 Yip, L. M. O. 171, 177, 193

Wagner, J. 70 Wang, J. 34 Wang, K. 26 Ward, J. W. 16, 34 Waring, R. 1, 11

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Zamel, V. 176, 201 Zemach, D. 85 Zhang, H. 50 Zhang, M. 177, 194 Zimmerman, C. B. 13 Zwier, L. J. 24, 85

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Note: Page numbers in italics denote illustrations. Academic Corpus 11–12 academic discourse 2, 3–4, 15, 24, 27–8, 31, 40, 63, 102, 119, 214, 217 academic discourse community 31 Academic Keyword List (AKL) 5, 7, 55–61, 122 academic vocabulary and 60 automatic semantic analysis of 82–3 distribution, in ICLE 143 exemplificatory discourse markers in 88 grammatical distribution categories in 55 need for concordancing in 61 need for pedagogic mediation 61, 82 nouns and 56 overused and underused clusters with 156 and rhetorical functions 81–7 words distribution, in GSL and AWL 60 words, overused and underused in ICLE 144 academic literacy 231 academic vocabulary 7 vs. core vocabulary and technical terms 10–13 definition of 212 fuzzy vocabulary categories 13–17 meaning of 9, 24–5, 28 and sub-technical vocabulary 17–21 Academic Word List (AWL) 3, 5, 11, 12, 15, 16, 17, 20, 25, 27, 34, 59, 60, 63, 82, 122, 212 activity verbs 59

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adjectives 101, 118 in the Academic Keyword List 57 as co-occurrents of academic nouns 100, 133, 167 potential academic 57, 59 adverbials/adverbs 93, 213 in the Academic Keyword List 58 mono-lexemic 91 multiword linking 121 potential academic 58, 59 semantic misuse and 139–40 sentence position 179 annotation 34–6, 37–42, 43 part-of-speech annotation 30, 34–5, 36, 37, 38, 40, 41, 43 semantic annotation 35, 43–4, 53 association measures 76, 101 attitudinal formulae 84, 122, 123 automatic semantic analysis, of AKL 82–3 Baby BNC Academic corpus (B-BNC) 31, 32, 47 bilingual dictionaries 204 Billurog˘lu-Neufeld-List (BNL) 16 blend 168 BNC-AC-HUM 75, 78, 90, 95, 100, 102 comparing and contrasting in 112–14 expressing cause and effect in 110–11, 114–18 expressing a concession in 109 expressing possibility and certainty 118–20 reformulating in 109 see also British National Corpus (BNC)

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BNCweb 75, 76, 77 booster 157 British Academic Written Corpus 217 British Academic Written English (BAWE) Pilot Corpus 32–3, 34, 235n. 1,2 (ch2) British National Corpus (BNC) 4, 16, 17, 31, 67, 73, 74, 75–6, 77, 78, 79, 84, 95, 102, 125, 130, 132, 133, 134, 146, 152, 207 Baby BNC Academic Corpus (B-BNC) 31 BNC-AC 78 BNC-AC-HUM see BNC-AC-HUM Index 73–5 mark-ups 73 BROWN corpus 47 burstiness 48, 236n. 8 Cambridge Advanced Learner’s Dictionary 207 cataphoric markers 90–1 cause and effect markers 87, 210, 219–25 in BNC-AC-HUM 110–11 EFL learners’ use of 146–8, 147 Centre for English Corpus Linguistics (CECL) 207 Clairefontaine Les fiches essentielles du Baccalauréat en anglais 160 CLAWS 37–42, 59 code gloss 90, 93, 188–9 cohesion 22, 123, 211, 213, 238n. 3 advance and retrospective labelling 22 grammatical 203 lexical 18, 22, 148, 203, 213 non-technical words 18 textual 123, 148 colligation 168 colligational errors 166, 168 collocation 23–4, 76, 77, 100, 102, 118, 119, 161, 164, 165, 192, 204, 217, 238n. 9 collocational framework 102 collocational overlap 165

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Common European Framework of Reference for Languages (CEF) 236n. 1 (ch3) communicative phrasemes 84, 121–2 comparative fallacy 70, 71 comparison and contrast markers 87, 202, 208, 226–34 in BNC-AC-HUM 112–14 EFL learners’ use of 148, 149 conceptual frequency 86 concession markers 87 in BNC-AC-HUM 109 conjunctions complex 40, 59, 84, 119, 120 overuse of 146 sentence initial position of 194 connectors 140, 169, 170, 172, 174–6, 177, 178–9, 178, 180, 181, 193, 201–2, 202, 203, 215, 238nn. 1–3 medial position for 180 overuse of 201–2 semantic misuse 201 sentence 22 sentence position 141, 174–82, 193–4, 203 Constituent Likelihood Automatic Wordtagging System (CLAWS) 37–42, 59 content words 10, 22, 102, 236n. 8 Contrastive Interlanguage Analysis (CIA) 4, 65, 70, 79, 85, 87, 215 contrastive rhetoric 2, 152 control corpus 67, 70, 71, 73 co-occurrence 37, 76, 78, 95, 96, 99, 100, 101, 114, 115–17, 119–20, 133–4, 137, 160, 162, 166, 167, 193 preferred co-occurrences in EFL writing 160–8 core vocabulary 3, 4, 10–11, 15 Corpus de Dissertations Françaises (CODIF) 184, 186, 188, 190, 191 corpus-based approach 2, 3, 29, 30, 31, 61, 87, 106, 150, 216, 238n. 6 corpus-driven approach 29, 30, 35 Corpus Query Processor (CQP) 75, 76 co-text 2, 22, 172, 193, 203

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Subject index data-driven approach 4, 29, 30, 36 data-driven learning 214 derivation 12, 13, 16, 19 developmental factor 4, 125, 181, 183, 197, 216 directives see imperatives discipline 3, 18, 25, 26, 27, 33, 55, 211, 213, 214, 215, 235n. 2 see also knowledge domain discourse marker 88, 126, 138 cataphoric marker 90, 91 endophoric marker 91, 92, 93, 98, 99, 119 engagement marker 92, 93 discourse-organizing vocabulary 9, 23 dispersion see distribution distribution 29, 45, 50–3, 55, 60, 78, 93, 94, 95, 103, 132, 135, 143 ditto-tag 38, 40, 44, 59 document-level burstiness 236n. 8 EAP material design 221 EAP teaching 26, 213, 214 endophoric markers 91, 93, 98, 99, 119 English as a Second Language (ESL) 33, 148, 180, 204 English for Academic Purposes (EAP) 15, 26, 27, 62, 85 English for Specific Purposes (ESP) 9, 217 epistemic modifiers 147 evenness of distribution see distribution and Juilland’s D statistical coefficient exemplifiers 85–8 in BNC-AC-HUM 88–108 learners’ use of 125–42, 189–91 ‘extended units of meaning’ 118 fiction 46, 47 field approach 82 fixed phrase 23–4, 121 FLOB corpus 47 formulae 12, 47, 61, 84

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keyword analysis see keyness knowledge domain 31, 32 L1 frequency 185, 190, 218, 239n2 L1-induced factor see transfer L1 influence 182–92 Jarvis’s unified framework 182–4 labeling 22–4, 73, 173, 203 advance labeling 96, 97 retrospective labeling 22, 96, 98 labels 22–3 semantic misuse 172–3 language-activity nouns 23 learners’ dictionary 206–7 lexical bundle 69, 118, 177 lexical cohesion see cohesion lexical extension 213 lexical priming see priming lexical repertoire 3, 4, 5, 9, 125, 142–50, 192–3 lexical teddy bear 147 lexical transfer see transfer lexico-grammar 26, 71, 85, 105, 118, 123, 137, 138, 161, 164, 186, 193, 197, 214, 215 lexico-grammatical error 155, 197, 215 linking word 3, 84, 121, 160, 177, 179, 180, 181, 204 LOB corpus 47 local keywords 48 logico-semantic relationship verbs 59 log-likelihood 47, 48, 62, 76, 78, 125 log-likelihood calculator, UCREL 125 LONGDALE project 239n. 1 Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English 206 Louvain Corpus of Native Speaker Essays (LOCNESS) 32, 194, 195 Macmillan English Dictionary for Advanced Learners 7, 201, 207, 238n. 6 meaning 10, 13, 14, 18–19, 20, 25, 35, 49, 52, 100–1, 102, 118, 185 delexical meaning 118 figurative meaning 119 over-extension 146, 170, 184

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non-technical meaning 18, 19 technical meaning 18, 19, 52 mental process nouns 23 mental verbs 59 metadiscourse 24, 90, 93, 99, 118, 161 metalinguistic labels 23, 59 Michigan Corpus of Upper-level Student Papers 217 Micro-Concord Corpus Collection B (MC) 31, 32 monolingual learners’ dictionary (MLD) 206–7 morphosyntactic annotation 34–5 multiword expression 37, 44, 53, 59, 60, 83, 88, 121, 184, 185, 197 native control corpus 70 native speaker norm, corpusapproximation to 70, 71 native student writing 72 negative keywords 86 n-gram 69 non-technical term 17, 18 non-technical words 18–19, 24 nouns 22–3, 108, 138 in the Academic Keyword List 56 adjectives as co-occurrents of academic 100, 133, 167 verbs as co-occurrents of academic 95–9, 134, 137, 162–3 novice writing 1, 4, 31, 65, 85, 95–6, 152, 190, 194, 195–6, 197, 206, 215, 217 nuclear vocabulary 9, 10, 14, 20 nuclear words and pragmatic neutrality 14 organizational function see rhetorical function overuse 86, 126, 129, 130, 140, 143, 144, 145–6, 148, 150, 151, 152, 155, 156, 157, 158, 159, 160, 194, 195, 201, 237n. 5 Oxford English Dictionary (OED) 20 paraphrasing and clarifying see reformulation markers

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Subject index parsing see syntactic annotation part-of-speech (POS) tagging 34–5, 37–8 see also annotation pedagogic mediation 61, 82, 212 Perl program 48 personal metadiscourse 161 personal pronoun 98, 136, 138, 161, 164 phraseme 83, 84, 93, 94, 106, 118, 119, 121, 137, 138, 148, 164, 185, 211, 214 communicative phraseme 84, 122, 157 mono-lexemic phraseme 88, 90, 106, 160, 161 referential phraseme 84, 119 structural phraseme 121 textual phraseme 84, 90, 94, 95, 118, 120, 121, 123, 161 phraseological accent 83 phraseological analysis 83–4, 90, 93, 123, 213 phraseological ‘cascade’ 161, 188 phraseological competence 217 phraseological infelicity 155 phraseology of rhetorical functions 65, 76, 78, 81, 102, 108, 109, 110–11, 112–14, 115–17, 119–20, 121, 123, 132, 154, 166, 213, 217 frequency-based approach to 122 positive keywords 86 potential academic words 29, 44–55 preferred co-occurrence 2, 160, 192, 193 preferred ways of saying things 83, 123, 166, 193 preposition 97, 101, 108, 143 complex 40, 41, 84, 90, 120, 139, 144 priming 192, 197, 203, 216, 217 mental 192 transfer of 192, 203 procedural vocabulary 22, 211 production 1, 4, 9, 15–16, 33, 68, 69, 70, 142, 155, 212 pronoun 23, 101 demonstrative 96 as exemplified item 97 impersonal 168 personal 98, 136, 138, 161, 164 third person 157

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reception 1, 15, 17, 73 reference corpus 46, 47, 62, 73, 135 referential phrasemes 84, 119 reformulation markers 87, 108, 139, 209 in BNC-AC-HUM 109 register awareness 5, 125, 132, 142, 150–2, 193, 208, 215 reporting verbs 59 retrospective labelling 22 rhemes 97, 98, 121, 135 rhetorical function 5, 7, 9, 10, 20, 22, 24, 26, 27, 60, 61, 63, 81, 125, 141, 142, 148, 150, 151, 155, 161, 184, 188, 190, 192–3, 197, 202, 203, 207, 213, 214, 215 rhetorical overstatement 176 Robert & Collins CD-Rom 204, 205 semantic annotation 35 semantic misuse 5, 139–40, 145, 168–74, 170, 172, 193, 201 semantic tagging 43 semantic transfer see transfer semi-technical vocabulary 17 sentence connectors 22 sentence stem 97, 99, 106, 114, 118, 121, 122, 135 specialised non-technical lexis 17, 18 speech 2, 62, 71, 84, 95, 131, 136, 145, 151, 152, 153, 177, 190, 195, 197, 213 speech-like lexical item 151–2, 153, 195 spoken frequency counts 145 Student Writing Corpus 32, 33 sub-technical vocabulary 17–21, 21, 22, 24 syntactic annotation 35 tagging see annotation teaching material 82, 85, 148, 160, 169, 178, 180, 206, 238n. 1 technical terms 3, 9, 13, 14, 18 technical vocabulary 13, 17–21

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text coverage 10, 11, 15, 16, 236n. 4 text nouns 23 textual formulae 121 textual phrasemes 84, 93, 94, 118, 119, 121, 123, 160, 161 textual sentence stems 97, 121, 135 tokenisation 38 transfer 4, 168, 171, 181, 190, 191, 194, 197, 203, 216, 218 lexical transfer 216 transfer effects 182–5 transfer of form 185 transfer of form/meaning mapping 185, 216 transfer of L1 frequency 185, 190–1 transfer of meaning 185 transfer of the phraseological environment 185, 197 transfer of primings 192, 197, 203, 216 transfer of style and register 185, 188, 192 transfer of training 144, 182, 194, 201–3 transfer of use 185 transfer-related factor see transfer typicality 106, 107 underuse 86, 126, 130, 131, 135, 137, 143, 144, 145, 146, 147, 148, 149, 155, 156, 157, 158, 159 underused words see negative keywords University Word List 16 USAS (UCREL Semantic Analysis System) 37, 42–4

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Varieties of English for Specific Purposes dAtabase (VESPA) 217 verbs 24, 26–7, 59, 91, 118–20, 136, 157–8 activity 59 co-occurrents of academic nouns 95–9, 134, 137, 162–3 forming rhemes with noun 98 lexical 36 linking 59 mental 59 potential academic 57 reporting 59 in sentence-initial infinitive clauses 138 Vocabulary 3 items 22 Web Vocab Profile 59, 60 within-document burstiness 236n. 8 Wmatrix 36–7, 53 word families 12, 16, 17, 45 in AWL 12, 16–17, 17 in GSL 11 word form 12, 17, 34, 36, 39, 102, 157 word list 2, 16, 27, 40, 46 in the Academic Keyword List 57 Word Smith Tools 2, 47, 48, 49, 51, 69 Concord tool 69 Detailed Consistency Analysis 51 Keywords option 155 WordList option 49 ‘you-know-it-when-you-see-it’ syndrome 182

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